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Ejdouglas2003

By Ejdouglas2003

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftforum.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When People know something that he would not know, like ease dropping, and knowing what people are saying if you are in another room or underground
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When a Character does something that they will be realistically be unable to do. and the other person can't do anything to respond or defend them-selfs
    Status: Denied

Christian is from a small down called Halsworthy, but was born in Gotha and his Family died when they lived in gotha and he had no money what so ever which made it really hard for him to pay anything or move towns but he shortly travelled  to halsworthy by horse from his families barn. The goal he is working towards is to join the guards. Christian's race is a human and is known as a Farfolk and he has many Sub-cultures to his race but only to the islands that they used to hail, and he started a new live at Halsworthy as a farmer and he lives in a windmill with only his horse and a small farm with his crops he grow. Christian's childhood wasn't a very normal childhood, he grew up with poor clothing and no toys so he had to make his own entertainment. He was also a little home schooled boy taught by his Mother. Christian always had a dream and it was to serve in the kingdom of Gotha as a Guard/Knight.

Character Name: Christian West
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Christian is a 5'11 strongly built man with wide shoulders and has a beard with bright green eyes and wear old ragged clothes for farming
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Callistus

Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft!

Unfortunately, your application has been…

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I have to deny your application immediately since you have plagiarised material in your biography. You may re-apply again after making the following changes:

 

- You must remove the plagiarised definition for Farfolks and instead write it in your own words or replace it with something else.

-In addition, your biography is a wee bit too short if we disclude the plagiarised phrase, so try adding more details to your character. Try a short backstory that may include their birth, childhood, how they grew up and what they liked doing, what made them progress to what they are now and some notable events in their life, and their aspirations, etc.

- You must include one weakness among the three interesting facts about your character.

 

Apart from these, you are set! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on the forums, ingame (By typing /msg Boruto) or on Discord @Callisto#6280

You could request a ticket ingame for help at anytime using the command /atrequest or you could toss your questions on the ingame chat!

If you need any help, I suggest you join our new players' discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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