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sarahbarah

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    Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.

     

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Adunians cannot have grey hair. Please amend this accordingly! I recommend looking at this wiki page on Adunians for more information on your character's race for future reference. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Adunians

    • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
    LotC  Discord as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    →  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX  

     

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

     

    • You did not make the necessary changes within the 24-hour editing period. However, don't stress- you can always reapply again!

     

     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

     

    • You did not make the necessary changes within the 24-hour editing period. However, don't stress- you can always reapply again!

     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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    ZqR9OJr2pNSTRtIecYhn-caphQLp2L1j7o4cDMS_7BUs5FGA2mvOWPrcysDlL9TIA52Ig8Bs6W3ba3Vtftqd5jCsI3mOmHUqrdi0g7Dfh4PKjGMqibRTyXY4ukqNIHF-_jgAVJQy

    Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.

     

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
    LotC  Discord as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    →  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX  

     

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    Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.

     

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
    LotC  Discord as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    →  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX  

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    Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg teawithsarah, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord teawithsarah#0808. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do...

    /creq [message] … along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

    After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    I highly recommend you join the LotC Discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!

    https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/



     

    In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race. 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

     

    If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides 

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

     

    • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

    • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    • Your Character Biography states that your character's parents were killed by orcs. This is a common character trope, so I recommend editing this part!

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Physical Description does not match your character's race! Adunians cannot have red or cyan eyes. I recommend looking at this wiki page on Adunians for future reference. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Adunians

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

    • Your character's clothing is a bit modern, so I would recommend editing this part of your Physical Description as well.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    • Please keep in mind, as a side note, that Adunians are not half-elves, they are only distantly related to elves. If you apply as a half-elf, you would select either human or elf for your race.

     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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    Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.

     

    • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    • Your Character Biography states that your character's family was attacked by Knox. This must happen in roleplay since Knox is played by another player, so I would recommend amending this part of your character biography. 

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

       

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
    LotC  Discord as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    →  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX  

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

     

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

    • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

    • Gandalf/Norse Mythology are not part of LoTC lore so I recommend amending these parts of your Character Biography.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

    • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

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    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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