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Application Comments posted by sarahbarah
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.
- Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
- Your Character Biography states that your character lives on the island of Skjoldier. This is where frost witches live, and their location is scarcely known by players, so I recommend editing this!
- The Queen's Domain does not exist on LoTC so I recommend amending this part of your backstory as well.
- Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.0 -
Changed Status to Under Review
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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg teawithsarah, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord teawithsarah#0808. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do...
/creq [message] … along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
I highly recommend you join the LotC Discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
→ Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
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Changed Status to Denied
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.
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Your character cannot control the ocean or have any magic.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
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Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
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Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
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Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!
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Your Physical Description does not match your character's race. Humans cannot be 7 feet tall (2m).
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Changed Status to Under Review
Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!
- Please fill out all fields to the best of your ability! Meme apps are not allowed.
After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.
- Your Character Biography states that your character owns a titanium blade with a tungsten carbide edge. This is not LoTC lore or tech friendly, so I recommend amending this part of your biography!
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Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
- Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.0 -
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.
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Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
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Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help2, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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I recommend elaborating on WHY your character likes/dislikes those things about themselves in your Character's Dislikes/Likes Response.
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Be sure to leave all thoughts out of your emotes in your Roleplay Scenario and only emote what others can see/hear your character doing!
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.0 -
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.
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Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and be sure to include examples so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Be sure to change 'high elves' in your Character's Likes Response to wood elves so that you properly match your race!
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.0 -
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg teawithsarah, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord teawithsarah#0808. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do...
/creq [message] … along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
I highly recommend you join the LotC Discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
→ Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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+Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography states that your character lived in a village called Tonsura. This is not a place that exists in LoTC lore, so I would recommend amending this!
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Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
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Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.0 -
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