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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography states that your family members were killed by orcs. This is a common character trope, so I would recommend amending this!
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
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I recommend amending your Character's Biggest Fear since losing your loved ones is a very common fear among many people. Your character's fear should add to their personality! For example, the death of a parent could cause a fear of abandonment for your character.
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg teawithsarah, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord teawithsarah#0808. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do...
/creq [message] … along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
I highly recommend you join the LotC Discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
→ Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and be sure to include examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
- https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
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Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!
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Your character must join the military in roleplay, so be sure to amend this part of your Character Biography.
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!
- From what I can see, it looks like the IGN Clockwyrk is already whitelisted on the server! If you believe this is a mistake, please dm me on Discord at teawithsarah#0808, or if you cannot reach me there, message me on the forums. Thank you!
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Race is incorrectly selected- if you are half elf, you would select either Elf or Human as your race!
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Your Character's Likes Response should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why.
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Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
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Please do keep in mind that your character cannot have any knowledge of magic or possess it!
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.
- I would recommend changing that your character's biggest fear is death. This is a common fear among most people. Your character’s biggest fear should be something that adds to your character's personality!
- In your character biography, you stated that your character wishes to travel to the Island of Tahn and the city of Petrus. However, the Island of Tahn and the city of Petrus are both from old continents, so I would recommend amending this as well!
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.
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Be sure to include examples of both metagaming and powergaming in your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions!
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
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Your Character Biography states that your character gained an interest in alchemy and magic while at school. Please keep in mind that your character cannot have any prior knowledge of magic or alchemy, as this must be learned in roleplay!
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Please make sure that your Character Likes/Dislikes are at least two sentences long respectively! Be sure to include WHY your character likes/dislikes those things about themselves too!
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
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Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
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Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
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Your Character's Fear Response should be two sentences long.
After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX
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SrPererinha
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Changed Status to Under Review