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Moenah

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

    Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

    Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

    Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. 

    Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit off. Make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. Another important note is that you should make sure the response is written in the third person. Please be sure to add these changes!


     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


     

     


     


     

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Moenah

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ monAAAAH#1878

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.


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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Moenah. 

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ monAAAAH#1878

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

    LotC Wiki: Settlement Guides

    LotC Wiki: Nations and Major Charters

     

     

     


     


     

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    Your Character Biography includes references to things nonexistent on the server, notably Minecraft mobs. With a simple change, please update your Biography to exclude these things!

     

    Your Character Biography features a common character trope, mainly being orphaned at the hands of orcs. With this trope being very overused for applications, I recommend choosing a different backstory for your character’s childhood more unique to their personality!

     

    Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

     

    Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. 

     

    Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. You should also include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Another important note is that you should make sure the response is written in the third person. Please be sure to add these changes!


     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


     

     


     


     

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Moenah

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ monAAAAH#1878

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

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    Hello! As you can see, you’ve done a great job on your application and have been accepted onto the server. So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Moenah 

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ monAAAAH#1878

     

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out:

     

     

     


     


     

    If you wish for guidance while settling in, I suggest doing: /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out? and I or another CT member will be there to assist you!

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

     

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here.

     

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

    Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

    Your Character Biography states that your persona was born from an elf and an orc, with your race being Halfling. This is impossible with the current lore on LOTC, which states that the Halfling race derived as a hybrid of Humans and Dwarves over the span of time. If you are set on keeping your persona race as Hafling, I recommend reading up on their respective wiki page, which includes this information, their culture, and their physical appearance!

    Halflings - Lord of the Craft

    Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    Skin Archive - Lord of the Craft

     

    Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

    Skin Archive - Lord of the Craft

    Races - Lord of the Craft

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

     



     

    Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Moenah. 

    For a faster reply, add me on discord @ monAAAAH#1878

    If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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