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  1. Pompilidae

    Sebastianvsh

    Your application has been denied at this time as no edits were made in the allotted time. Feel free to apply again at any point! If you have any questions regarding this decision, message me through the forums or Discord @ Mingo#2467
  2. Pompilidae

    ActionParfait

    Changed Status to Denied
  3. Pompilidae

    ActionParfait

    Upon further review, the lore mentioned regarding 'The Verge' is not accurate to our server's Lore. This character would canonically be deceased if this backstory were the case. Feel free to apply again at any point! If you have any questions regarding this decision, please contact me @ Mingo#2467 through Discord.
  4. Pompilidae

    PuffGM

    Changed Status to Pending
  5. Pompilidae

    PuffGM

    Changed Status to Under Review Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography! Your Character Biography makes use of a common trope (Attacked by orcs and bandited) as a backstory. This is not allowed and a more unique backstory is strongly encouraged! Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character! Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0 Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
  6. Pompilidae

    BabyPanda9246

    Changed Status to Pending
  7. Pompilidae

    BabyPanda9246

    Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Character Biography states that she was born into nobility. This is against our server rules! Please review them once more and make sure you fully understand them! https://www.lordofthecraft.net/rules/ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography! Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character! If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
  8. Pompilidae

    ActionParfait

    Changed Status to Pending
  9. Pompilidae

    BabyPanda9246

    Changed Status to Under Review
  10. Pompilidae

    ActionParfait

    Changed Status to Under Review Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography! Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography! Your Roleplay Scenario Response included the actions and dialogue of of the NPC. Please be certain you are only writing for your character! Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0 Your Skin is too reliant on noise shading! Please try to smooth it out! Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as Halflings cannot have red eyes. Please fix this accordingly! If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
  11. Pompilidae

    Sebastianvsh

    Changed Status to Pending
  12. Pompilidae

    Sebastianvsh

    Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…? Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography! Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography! Your Roleplay Scenario Response was too short! It must be in third person and at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action! Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography! If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
  13. Pompilidae

    Sebastianvsh

    Changed Status to Under Review
  14. Pompilidae

    Soldier2828

    Changed Status to Pending
  15. Pompilidae

    Soldier2828

    Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…? Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography! Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography! Your Roleplay Scenario Response was in first person! It must be in third person and at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action! Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as humans cannot have red eyes naturally. Please fix this accordingly! If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
  16. Pompilidae

    Soldier2828

    Changed Status to Under Review
  17. Pompilidae

    Caddyy

    Changed Status to Pending
  18. Pompilidae

    Caddyy

    Changed Status to Under Review Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…? Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Character Biography mentions ‘Christianity’ and ‘Serbia’ which are not mentioned in our server’s lore. However, ‘Christianity’ closely resembles our ‘Canonism’. You may read more about it here if you wish to incorporate this faith into your character’s backstory: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Church_of_the_Canon Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography! Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography! Your Roleplay Scenario Response was not answered! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action! Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
  19. Pompilidae

    beeete

    Changed Status to Denied
  20. Pompilidae

    beeete

    Unfortunately your application has been denied at this time. LotC is an English based server and while we encourage a wide variety of players to join us, it can sometimes be difficult for players who do not speak English fluently to integrate within the community. In addition: Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…? Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character! Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay! Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography! Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character! Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0 Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
  21. Pompilidae

    beeete

    Changed Status to Under Review
  22. Pompilidae

    TomppaTT

    Changed Status to Denied
  23. Pompilidae

    TomppaTT

    Your application has been denied at this time, unfortunately. LotC is a 13+ server that does not tolerate taboo or otherwise adult themes. We allow a wide variety of age ranges on this server from thirteen and up. Due to this fact, we do not allow subjects that you mentioned as they are not appropriate for the younger audiences as well as they make many people uncomfortable. Due to safety concerns, your application will not be processed.
  24. Pompilidae

    TomppaTT

    Changed Status to Under Review
  25. Pompilidae

    IdSmash

    Changed Status to Pending
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