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I have a question for the writer:
In the application stated that only beings with greater souls, such as those that can learn magic, can become Demi-Djinn. However, Kha were not specified to be able to become Demi-Djinn, yet aha do indeed have greater souls and as such can learn magic and things that require a greater soul. Can you clarify this for me? Thanks! :D
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11 hours ago, Slorbin said:
It'll probably be denied the first time around- but I plan to rewrite it in a much grander scale if it gets denied. Might as well see if it gets accepted, though!
Well, Fingers crossed it gets excepted, but if it does get denied, I'm exited to see what you do in the rewrite.
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I feel as if I'm not sure if this is gonna be added, but it hope it is.
I'm already emotionally attached, already remade my Creature Application in case it gets added XD
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MC Name:
THE7Dwarves
Character's Name:
Nim'Bur Aedove
Character's Age:
32
Character's Race:
Kha'Cheetrah/Leoparda
What magic(s) will you be learning?
Fire Evocation
Teacher's MC Name:
Self taught-via altar, overseen by excitedly
Teacher's RP Name:
Self taught-via altar, overseen by excitedly
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No.
Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I do.
Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, that you may no longer use it in character?
Yes, I also do.
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A lot of people don't approve of this idea, but I totally do. This would be awesome. nice job on the lore. if this gets added, i'd be so happy.
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I like this idea a lot, I'd make for a lot of spice in RP and would be really good for lotC.
+1
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MC Name:
THE7Dwarves
Character's Name:
Maltic Shardbreaker
Character's Age:
23
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
Mountain Dwarve
Transformed form:
Revenant
Creator's MC Name:
N/A
Creator's RP Name:
N/A
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
A revenant is the dead spirit of a descendant or living being that is unable to pass onto the afterlife, instead choosing to manifest themselves in a sort of superposition between the afterlife and the physical world. Revenants often are very confused by their death, and may not even realize their death has taken place. After realization, several mental illnesses are very common, such as depression. All of the following creatures are made of a shadowy substance called ectoplasm, an often intangible substance which makes up the ghost's physical form. This allows them to fade in and out of physical form and sight. Ectoplasm is a very malleable substance, and it's appearance and nature is largely determined by the mind that controls it, ergo, the undead spirit. Once a revenant realizes they are dead, on of three things may happen. They may either, 1, feel malevolence toward their death and become a poltergeist. Poultergeists are extremely malevolent and hostile to all other beings, and have more powers over manipulation of the physical world than the specter. For example, poltergeists are capable of possessing the minds of animals and descendants. Poltergeists have heavily evil feelings such as malice and anger, and their minds are unpredictable and chaotic. 2, If a revenant finds peace with their death, they may become a specter. Specters are usually the most benevolent of the subtypes, with their most malicious acts shying closer to mischief than actual evil. Specters are capable of the possession of inanimate objects, but cannot bend objects perse like a, tree, because tress are not naturally capable of movement. They can still posses these objects, they just can't manipulate them. Specters are happy and typically kind, but they also feel sorrow over their own death. However, unlike poltergeists, they don't let this sorrow decend them into madness. Or, 3, become obsessed with some unfinished business and become a graven. Gravens take on a much more physical existence than the other subtypes, and are obsessed with finishing/acquiring/excelling at their unfinished business. They are. willing to do anything in their power in order to complete their task. There is also a fourth, (unplayable, except for in ST battle events) called the apparition. The apparition is formed from mass bloodsheds of 20 or more players, creating a coalition of their souls. Apparitions are extremely dangerous, but are bound to the site of their creation. Any of these undead phantoms may (if they so choose) bind themselves to an area. This area of their choice is called a "sanctuary". A phantom's sanctuary is in their control but the ghost may not leave this sanctuary. I plan on my character finding peace in his death and accepting it, therefor become a scepter.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
My revenant, (Maltic Shardbreaker) has manifested as a pale blueish-white spirit bearing a ghostly form of the dwarven military armor he wore in his former life. He finds companionship in his friend from his elven friend from his previous life, Ievis Aedove.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No, I do not.
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I do.
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
Yep.
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand.
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No, I have not.
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MC Name:
THE7Dwarves
Character's Name:
Gobe Barley
Character's Age:
23
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A
Transformed form:
Wonk
Creator's MC Name:
N/A
Creator's RP Name:
N/A
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
Wonks are a simplistic species of frog/toad that originate on the Arcas-Atlas proto-continent. There are two subcultures of wonks, the reformed wonks, and the tribal wonks. (tribal wonks are an event race only) Reformed Wonks speak mostly in the common tongue, but they may speak their ancestral language, (ribbish) when exited or scared. Tribal wonks mostly just speak ribbish. Tribal wonks are usually just hunters or fishermen, while reformed wonks way take on a more civilized occupation.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
My character i'm creating, (Gobe Barley) is of the wonk species. He has a darker skin coloration. He also has a deep love for gardening, and spends a lot of his time doing so. He often interacts with decadents, but is not as infatuated with them as a lot of other wonks. He also enjoys nature, which gos hand in hand with his love of gardening.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No, I do not.
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I do.
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
Yes, I fully understand.
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand.
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No, I have not applied for this creature.
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MC Name:
THE7Dwarves
Character's Name:
Gao Shin
Character's Age:
23
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A (completely new character)
Transformed form:
Hou-Zi (Fei-Zhu)
Creator's MC Name:
N/A
Creator's RP Name:
N/A
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
My persona i'm applying for right now, (Gao Shin) is a Hou-Zi, the original creations of the Deamon Metzil. The Hou-zi are a race of primate monkey-like humanoids. They are descended from Hou-Shen, the first of the Hou-zi line. He was created by Metzil herself and was hailed by the hot-zi, as he gave the gift of intelligence given to him by Metzil to the other Hou-zi. There are three subspecies of Hou-zi, the Laobai-Zhu, the Fei-Zhu, and the Fei-Zhu.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
My particular Hou-Zi, (Gao Shin) is a golden furred Fei-Zhu. He bears a blue tweed jacket hinting toward his subtle fashion sense. He walk barefoot, preferring to climb, actually.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No, I do not.
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I do.
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
Yes, I fully understand.
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand.
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No, I have not.
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sorry in the aesthetic choice area I wrote; '' he is empathetic and very..'' and then I just stopped. I meant to write ''very kind''.
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MC Name:
THE7Dwarves
Character's Name:
Nem'Bir Looseclaw
Character's Age:
121
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A (completely new character)
Transformed form:
Kha'Cheetra
Creator's MC Name:
N/A
Creator's RP Name:
N/A
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
The Kah are were created by the daemon Metztli when he combined ocelots with newborn elven baby's it had stolen. Their natural jungle somewhere they were created was destroyed by the goddess who had created them, Metztli . The Kha fled on a ship to the western isles where they created a civilization they called Vah'Khajra. Most of the remaining Kharajyr were picked off by dwarves, orcs, or goblins, and many others committed suicide out of sheer hopelessness of the future of their race. Orcs seiged Vah'Khajra, and won. The city had fallen. The surviving Kha fleed and found sanctuary with some high elves. where they remain to this day. Their civilization is still a widely jungle based one, and they are heavily adapted to life in subtropical regions. By their leader, Tla'Tiazar's commandment, the Kha fled the sanctuary and spread across Asulon. These were dark days indeed, and many fell into the ways of other races. As such, many of the Kharajyr abandoned the ways of the Goddess and of the other Kha. All was not lost, however. Their old leader Tla’Tiazar appeared from the shadows, ordering any Kha still loyal to come to Holm and form an army to take land. Once some land had been conquered, more Kharajyr returned to the ways of the past, making reparations for the past. Tiazar was old by this point. He gave up hope in his ability to lead, his faith fading, and at this point, he resigned from his leader hood. Of course, a new leader had to be chosen. This time, it was a Kharajyr named Morthawl. He made agreements with the race known as the Mori'Quessir, and they invited the Kharajyr to live nearby to them in a jungle that was grown by the druids of the place. This became their new home, Xer'Tlaasu. Morthawl led them into the new lands of Kalosia and Elysia when storms pressed them out of their old home of Xer'Tlaasu. They settled, down in dens dug in the mountainsides, but the storms pressed them yet again out of their home and into a new land called Anthos. They ended up settling on the volcanic island of Karaktua. sadly, the volcano erupted, and the remnant Kharajyr fled to Asulon.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
Kha are divided into four groups:
Kha'Cheetra, The Cheetrah is fast and tends to be more golden in colour in contrast to their other Kha kin. They also have spots spread on their fur, but find themselves to be far more formidable sprinters, or even climbers. Famous Kha'Cheetrah have mostly been warriors or hunters.
Kha'Panthera, The most intriguing to look at, the Pantera are the only Kha to naturally and normally carry a black or dark fur colour. This Kha subtype is noted for its capabilities in stealth, it is considered the most appealing of the various subtypes tom non-aha, as as the Kharajyr themselves consider all the subclasses equal.
Kha'Tigrasi, the tiger humanoids that have a sturdy build that makes them the strongest of the Kha-
and the Kha'Leoparda, The most generic of the four subraces, the Leparda has not been seen to excel particularly in one specific area, but are more likely to dabble a bit in many things. They are a light brown colour and have many spots covering their fur, or sometimes rings.
(my specific character I am currently creating is a male Kha'Cheetra that bears a grey priests robe and a small burlap loincloth, and a priest's dagger he is highly empathetic and very . I have included the skin below for reference.)
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No, I do not.
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I do.
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
yes.
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand.
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No, I applied and lost contact with the person who made it pending.
Here is a skin for reference of the charter I am creating.
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hey thanks I'm not really on discord, but I do play frequently in-game and I have an email
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1 hour ago, Qctho McAntoine said:
what do you think?
sorry didn't mean to say ''1 hour ago''
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Character's Name:
Neembuur Looseclaw
Character's Age:
121
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A (completely new character)
Transformed form:
Kha'Cheetra
Creator's MC Name:
N/A
Creator's RP Name:
N/A
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
The Kah are were created by the daemon Metztli when he combined ocelots with newborn babys it had stolen. Their natural jungle somewhere they were created was destroyed by a god that wished to establish his dominance. The Kha fled on a ship to the western isles, where they remain to this day. Their civilization is still a widely jungle based one, and they are heavily adapted to life in subtropical regions.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
Kha are divided into four groups:
Kha'Cheetra, The Cheetrah is fast and tends to be more golden in colour in contrast to their other Kha kin. They also have spots spread on their fur, but find themselves to be far more formidable sprinters, or even climbers. Famous Kha'Cheetrah have mostly been warriors or hunters.
Kha'Panthera, The most intriguing to look at, the Pantera are the only Kha to naturally and normally carry a black or dark fur colour. This Kha subtype is noted for its capabilities in stealth and thievery, considered the best among the types.
Kha'Tigrasi, the tiger humanoids that have a sturdy build that makes them the strongest of the Kha-
and the Kha'Leoparda, The most generic of the four subraces, the Leparda has not been seen to excel particularly in one specific area, but are more likely to dabble a bit in many things. They are a light brown colour and have many spots covering their fur, or sometimes rings.
(my specific character I am currently creating is a Kha'Cheetra that bears a grey priests robe and a small burlap loincloth, and a priest's dagger. I have included the skin below for reference.)
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No, I do not.
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I will.
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
Yes, I do.
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand.
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
Yes, just now.
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how do I edit it?
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MC Name:
THE7Dwarves
Character's Name:
Neembuur Looseclaw
Character's Age:
121
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A (completely new character)
Transformed form:
Kha'Cheetra
Creator's MC Name:
N/A
Creator's RP Name:
N/A
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
The Kah are were created by the daemon Metztli when he combined ocelots with newborn babys it had stolen. Their natural jungle somewhere they were created was destroyed by a god that wished to establish his dominance. The Khalids fled on a ship to the western isles, where they remain to this day.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
Kha are divided into four groups:
Kha'Cheetra, the cheetah like humanoids-
Kha'Panthera, the panther like humanoids-
Kha'Tigrasi, the tiger humanoids-
and the Kha'Leoparda, the leopard like beings.
(my specify character is a Kha'Cheetra)
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No, I do not.
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I will.
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
Yes, I do.
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand.
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No, I have not applied for this creature before.
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MC Name:
THE7Dwarves
Character's Name:
Boletus Frostfang
Character's Age:
121
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A
Transformed form:
Nephilim
Creator's MC Name:
N/A
Creator's RP Name:
N/A
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
Nephilim are the Dragonborn descendants of Iblees Draugardom. This rare race of peoples have a natural affinity toward fire magics, but obviously still require training. (and an accepted ooc magic application)
These peoples died out after a brutal war, but in the age of fire, when the Black Titan was freed from his eternal shackles, the nephilim were revived. Nonetheless, these peoples are few and far between.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
The nephilim are draconic humanoids that come in a veriety of colors, ranging from black to red to blue-grey. Some members of this species have horns, but not all of them. Wings are typically not present. Clawed hands and feet are a staple of these peoples.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No, I do not.
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I do.
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
Yes, I completely understand.
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand.
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No, I have not applied for this creature.
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MC Name:
THE7Dwarves
Character's Name:
Grumble Darter
Character's Age:
21
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A
Transformed form:
Axolotyn
Creator's MC Name:
Starfelt
Creator's RP Name:
Unknown/ N/A
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
A semi-aquatic species of axolotl-like humanoids that frequent in small ponds. they tend to stay closer to their homes than most races, but occasionally they will stray away from these areas. These peoples frequently interact with fishermen. They call their homes ''Knobs'.''
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
There body's physically resemble a humanoid axolotl that is usually blue in color. Other colors include sea foam green and cyan. Fingers and toes are webbed, and they have small frilly external lungs on their faces.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
No, I do not.
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes, I do.
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
Yes, I fully understand.
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand.
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No, I have not.
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A Curious Flier
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[!] Nim'Bur Aedove smiles upon seeing the flier, and makes preparations to send a bird to the man. It seems this kha has finally found a master of alchemy to apprentice under-