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MC Name:
EdenCringe
Character's Name:
Solet
Character's Age:
154
What feat(s) will you be learning?
Alchemy
Teacher's MC Name:
Punished_Pup
Teacher's RP Name:
The Wanderer from Afar
Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:
Yes
Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No
Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?
Yes
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MC Name:
EdenCringe
Character's Name:
Genesis
Character's Age:
old and decrepit
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
Elf
Transformed form:
Zezimar - Kozunka
Creator's MC Name:
christmanism
Creator's RP Name:
Kasuga
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
A monster, for lack of better terms, is what a Zar'ei is and always will be. A demon spawned from a ritual most unhallowed, a twisted mimicry of descendant kind. Humanoid in form and as intelligent as any other descendant, they are truly a deadly opponent able to execute methods of manipulation and deceit. Despite being bound to a Naztherak, they are not entirely entitled to their masters. Should they deem their master's hold on them too tight, the demon may get irritated and restless and at times try to loophole their masters commands - thus their relationship with their masters is a game of tug of war at best. Zar'ei are unable to make meaningful relationships as they do not possess any proper empathy like your average descendant. Zar'ei only act within their own interests, thus only working well with those that have similarly aligned interests with their own - and even then, that won't stop them from backstabbing their own allies just to get what they desire.
There are three subtypes of Zar'ei.
MaldaKozun
Rakaal
Each subtype specializes in a particular field:
The Maldaka are witches, possessing mastery over Mal-flame based spells and hold an even bigger pool of maleus than your average Naztherak - being able to hold 70 maleus. However, they lack in physicality as they tire easily whilst it prolonged physical combat. Thus making them the weakest in terms of strength amongst their demonic cousins. They often sport a smaller and slightly weaker physique, much like your average descendant - though are still able to wear full-plate armor.
The Kozunka are knights, capable of casting Mal-flame based spells but holding not as much mastery as the Malda - thus holding a smaller maleus pool of 40 maleus. However, what they lack in magic they make up for in physical prowess - being the closest match to your average descendant in terms of strength and agility. They are the most balanced amongst their demonic cousins. They are slightly bigger in size compared to descendants, being only a foot or two higher and slightly heavier - they are able to sport full-plate armor.
The Rakaalka are brutes, capable of casting Mal-flame spells but lacking tremendously in maleus in contrast to the others - having a small pool of only 20 maleus. But they make up for this with incredible strength to that of a peak orc descendant, thus being the strongest amongst their demon brethren. They can stand at a looming 8 feet tall, and often sport a much bigger and heavier physique than your average descendant - and they too, can wear full-plate armor with ease.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
A 7 foot tall Kozun Zar'ei, sporting a rather lanky physique of bony white carapace that wraps around the center of its form in a sort of twisted body armor - yet not being able to shield it from lethal attacks. A warped skull of a deer sits at the head of this beast, as beady white eyes glare at you from those abysmal sockets. Bouts of cinders and mal-flame spread in chaotic veins across their twisting antlers like a crown of malice atop their head as thorny tendrils flail off its form like a mane. Its exposed skin is like black sludge, sporting a few stray feathers along its leathery reptilian skin. Its two large, slender hands sport dark claws upon each digit. An amalgamation of true animalistic horror.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
None
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes
Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?
Yes
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No
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MC Name:
EdenCringe
Character's Name:
Solet
Character's Age:
trust me she old
Character's Race:
Elf
Link to your accepted MA:
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/206953-seers-eyes-of-vaasek-ma-edencringe/
What magic(s) will you be teaching?
Seerdom - Cozeners of Vaasek
Describe this magic or a creature as a whole:
Granted by the enigmatic being known as Vaasek, the daemon sends out agents known as Witnesses to descendants that are either born or made blind - often times to those who desperately want their sight back. These descendants then become Seers, and they all share one unique goal: to spread chaos and deceit in the world, ensuring that mortals remain in conflict, which keeps them distant from the influence of Vaasek.
However, being granted such power does come with limits which are ingrained into all Seers known as the three main tenets:
Seers cannot harm nor betray each other.
They aren't allowed to expose each other or their plots to other descendants not under the influence of Vaasek.
They cannot reveal their own identity as a Seer.
Failure to comply with any of the three tenets will result in Vaasek deeming the descendant unworthy of their powers and thus stripping them of it.
Seers construct elaborate falsehoods known as 'living lies' to conceal the origin of their magic, weaving an intricate illusion of an ideology that is so realistic that even they themselves start to believe in it. To support these fabrications, seers employ a unique illusion known as a casting tell, allowing them to mask all traces of their magic use. For example, a mystic could conjure forth spectral hands that seem to sling their spells for them out of thin air - or a paladin could seem as though they were summoning the power of the sun itself onto their foes.
There are additional aspects to this magic, such as the option to allocate two magical slots to it, the act of sowing people and objects, gaining secondsight that enables slotted seers to "see" better than feat seers. These elements are further explained when delving into the other abilities of Seer.
Are there different sections or subsections of magic? Can those be elaborated upon?
There aren't any "subsections" to this magic unless you count feat seers and slotted seers as two different sections, apart from that there is the option to unlock additional spells and abilities when dedicating two magical slots to it - and these are permanent magical slots that cannot be used anymore, meaning to say if the Seer were to be stripped of the magic they may not utilize said magic slots to other magics. But unlocking these additional spells can only be done after reaching T4 and successfully casting the Cultivate Fallacy spell twice.
Can you give an example of a casting emote, of a spell of your choice?
Eyebite [Combative]
[!] Solet would snap her fingers as the air around her visage rippled lightly, like a pebble thrown onto glass - her right eye shattered into hundreds of prismatic shards that seemed to tear a hole through her socket into an abyss.
[!] These shards began to float out of her eye, binding themselves together into a larger shard that looked like an oversized needle that hovered gently towards her palm.
[!] Finally, with deadly precision, the needle shot itself forth like an arrow from a bow string straight towards the man's face - and just before it seemed to pierce his gaze, it would erupt into a glittering cloud of dust directly into his eyes that sought to blind him like a projectile flashbang and impair him thereon.
Can you give an example of a teaching-emote (interacting with another) of a spell of your choice?
Seers don't necessarily need to be taught by a teacher as Vaasek ingrains them with the knowledge of their spells as soon as they become a Seer. However, other Seers can still provide certain guidance if new Seers are still unsure - a rare occurrence still.
Caecic
[!] Solet began weaving her fingers through the air, seeking to flick her wrist as though it were sore before she made some messy strokes with her pointer finger onto a wall. "Only our own may read these words, you will do well to remember this." the damsel muttered in a monotonous voice to the one that sought her out to guide them, seemingly lacking the patience to explain such.
[!] To those unaware, it just seemed as though the woman was tracing something upon the wall with her finger. But unbeknownst to them, she had just signed her signature upon the surface - imprinting her presence there to alert other Seers within the area that may stumble across it.
Say your student powergames during or after teaching, how do you reprimand that?
I'd get both sides of the story, from my student as well as those that they have powergamed against and analyze their mistakes. I would then explain to them what they did wrong. However, if they were to intentionally keep powergaming after my warnings, I would look to ST to revoke their MA.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
nope
Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes
Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.
Nope
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MC Name:
EdenCringe
Character's Name:
Dream-Catcher
Character's Age:
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A
Transformed form:
Sorvian
Creator's MC Name:
Serendipth
Creator's RP Name:
Mist-Tracer
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
Adorned with a special mask and a sliver of a soul, Sorvians prominently stand out against other constructs due to their special sentience. These doll-like humanoid golems are sculpted out of wood and clay, allowing them to mimic the grace and prowess of descendants with uncanny precision - but alas, not with perfection. They shall always be a crude reflection of descendants, doing their best to copy their every aspect.. but inevitably failing and being a mere imitation. As a newborn, they are like any child - impressionable. Thus, they cling onto an ideology that gets passed down to them in their early stages of life - it being the only semblance of personality and emotion one could get as close to a normal descendant - sometimes better even, but obsessively so. If they are severed from their ideology, whether purposely or unintentionally, they will either cling onto it out of desperation or break apart from it as though ripping a part of their mentality from their being.
They are created with a wooden skeleton, entrapped in a clay shell. A sliver of a soul is slipped within their being as a mask carved by trained hands is placed upon where their face would be, with a pair of circular outlets for eyes to view the world as they perceive it and an opening for their mouth - but this does not in fact give them any special senses. And with this artificial body, comes phantom pain - as a Sorvian cannot feel true pain, allowing them to live even through the severing of a limb with little consequence compared to a living being. However, they do still feel pain but in a dulled sense that is instead dragged on as phantom pain from where the wound originates from that would persist longer. This still comes with its own limits as Sorvians can still inevitably bleed out soul essence if their chest cavity is punctured and they will perish from their wounds just like any mortal. Their mask also serves as a weakness, being made out of porcelain - it takes a mere three emotes to break it with reasonable force and in doing so would outright kill the Sorvian instantaneously. Decapitation is also an effective route to a swift demise.
Another interesting fact is that Sorvians cannot heal themselves, scars and wounds will remain on their timeless bodies forever. Fortunately they are able to be repaired by a Sorvian sculptor who will mend back any wounds, including flesh wounds and loss of limbs, with the same clay that makes up their body, but leaves an obvious scar that cannot be mended back to perfection. If a Sorvian is killed, the sculptor may either retrieve their mask or recreate said mask should it be destroyed and revive their Sorvian - this process does not make them new, however, as the ritual retains the appearance of their old husk along with their memories intact.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
A 4 foot tall Sorvian with the physique of a young girl. They wear a red poncho that drapes over their form like a blanket at all times, and when they flail their arms by their side it may look like they are trying to take flight.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
None
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes
Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?
Yes
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No
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Accepted.
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Accepted.
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Denied.
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Denied.
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2/3 as of 26/11/2022
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Accepted.
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Accepted.
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I do love a challenge
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Accepted.
1/3 current students as of December 21st , 2023Past Students
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Accepted.
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A sleeping beast awoke amidst sandy dunes of yore, within a towering abode did he lay as his dark hues bore the news of such a missive.
"Without my counsel, not even a word to my own ears.. Yet they start the purge nonetheless, violating those who are not of my court and kin."
He grumbled, rising from his seat in a graceful gait across his palace to view the horizon beyond.
"I wonder.. What in bloody hell is Seirheim up to now? And do they really know who is part of my court or not?"
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MC Name:
EdenCringe
Character's Name:
Bread
Character's Age:
17
What feat(s) will you be learning?
Alchemy
Teacher's MC Name:
Iomedaean
Teacher's RP Name:
Rigatoni
Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:
Yes
Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No
Are you aware that if this feat is undergoing an activity trial and fails said trial, that you will lose the feat? And that if it is apart of the Lore Games, it might drastically change soon?:
Yes
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Current students 3/3
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Accepted.
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MC Name:
EdenCringe
Character's Name:
Bread
Character's Age:
16
Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):
N/A
Transformed form:
Musin
Creator's MC Name:
Me
Creator's RP Name:
Hi there me again
Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:
Musin, related to the infamous Ratiki skaven, are small mouse people that roam around Almaris ever since they escaped from Rat Island away from the Ratiki they had revolted against. They stand at a height of 1'8" to 2'6" and weigh 20-30 pounds, equipped with large mouse ears that have sensitive hearing and can detect frequencies from 15 Hz to 20 kHz as well as possessing beady eyes that are hampered during the day however grant full clarity of vision during the night or in dark areas. Their fur can range from a variety and combination of colors such as white, grey, orange, brown, black, and tan. As for their eye color, they have been known to only possess a limited color palette of red, pink or black. Musin are considered to be the weakest of the weak, their frail bodies can only withstand one direct strong blow. However, to counter this they have their speed and agility as their small nimble bodies can swerve and dodge attacks with greater ease than most. They live up to nearly 80 years old and start their adulthood at the age of 15 years old, living past the life span of Ratiki due to the fact they regularly groom themselves unlike their disease ridden ancestors. Musin have lesser souls therefore they are unable to learn any sort of advance magic such as void magic, but they can learn magics like bardmancy or housemagery as well as learn Alchemy.
If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look?
Bread stands at 2'3" feet tall, sporting a dark grey coat with motes of black at the ends of her ears and the tip of her tail as well as a light grey underbelly. In her possession are a pair of goggles that help her block the sunlight from her beady black eyes when it inhibits her vision during the relentless afternoon sun. She also holds a small backpack made out of leather, string and leaves that swings from her back, usually carrying a snack or two.
Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:
N/A
Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:
Yes
Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:
Yes
Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.
I understand
Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:
No
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[Cursed Child] [FA] Duarchist
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https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/234360-naztherak-ma-edencringe/