Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Expand upon your roleplaying definition. Expand upon your metagaming definition. Your powergaming definition is very unclear, however somewhat correct it feels like you need to add more to it to show that you FULLY understand the term. Your biography does little to give me a clear depiction of your character, and you did include much lore related material. Please re-read the wiki page. Expand upon your ambition. Why is the long bow his favorite tool? Your open response questions are far too short, please put more effort into giving a lengthy response to the roleplay scenarios we provide for you! You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions concerning your application feel free to drop a message in my inbox. Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Please do not make a wall of blue text, it is very hard to read, and makes the overall reviewing process difficult. Which in turns makes this Brokencrowe a very grumpy Crow. Expand upon your definitions of roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming you do not demonstrate adequate understanding of the terms. Biography is brief, gives no lore-related material, breaks a certain amount of realism, and needs a lot of expansion to give a clear depiction of your character. You skipped over the first ten years of his life, and then dropped us into a point that leaves the reader in confusion. You ambition is vague. Expand on it please. Give a reason why the sword is your favorite tool. Your open response questions are far too short! Put more effort into shaping who your character is through the roleplay scenarios we provide. You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions concerning your application feel free to drop a pm in my inbox. Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Your definitions of roleplaying, meta-gaming and power-gaming were very brief. Please expand upon them to demonstrate clear understanding of the terms. Your biography needs some expansion, but mostly to include lore-related material. Your open response questions were far too short, they need to be expanded upon. Why is the walking stick her favorite tool? You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions concerning your application feel free to drop a message into my inbox. Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Your application simply breaks the lore of the realm, which makes me think you did not take the time at all to read the server's wiki, rules and lore. Which simply makes Brokencrowe a very grumpy reviewer. That being said: You didn't give a definition of roleplaying, you only said what should not be done. You need to expand upon your definition of meta-gaming. Your definition of powergaming is incorrect. Nordic is not a valid race on Lord of the Craft. Please read the lore. Your biography lacks realism and any lore-related material. It needs expansion; and the way you learn magic is very vague and does not show any roleplay means. Please give us a book on how you learned it, and how you will roleplay, if you are going to enter the server with it initially. It is usually frowned upon and simply better to learn it in game, at the pace of a instructor. Your ambition isn't realistic, as there are no nords, and you haven't established yourself as a Wizard. You cannot start with an enchanted shovel. Your skills are over powered, and break realism. Your open response questions need to be completely redone, as they lack realism and you obviously powergame in the majority of them with your magic. You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions concerning your application feel free to drop me a message in my inbox. Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. First of all you completely cut out the open response questions from your application. Arthas smells of warcraft three, please make an original name. Please don't break lore in your biography, and actually read the wiki page. You might be putting effort into it from a very skewed angle, but you are not taking any of the steps required to make a powerful application. You need to dig deeper, and read what needs to be read. You cannot just throw powerful magics and make an over powered character. You also have to spend more than a few moments skimming over the lore. You need to put it into your biography, and show that you are a good enough roleplayer, that you can contribute to the community and not be these monstrous thing that is only going to bring down everyone else's fun. Further more you didn't do the open response questions, which just annoys me, you need to put more effort into the application, and more time, and more feeling. This isn't a joke, a lot of people on this serer take things very seriously. Now if you want to be a part of this community, then show it through your next application. You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions concerning your application you may drop a message into my inbox. Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. You need to expand upon the definitions of roleplay, meta-gaming and power-gaming. You also need to demonstrate clear understanding of the terms and not give a basic description but an in depth and involved one. You biography could do with some expansion, I have no feeling what so ever of who he is, and how he came to be. You need to give a lot more details for the background. Amnesia seems a tad unoriginal, but your call really, you just need to do a good job when roleplaying it. Your biography could also do with some more lore related material. You ambition needs expansion. Give reasons why his rusty pickaxe is his favorite tool. Give reasons and details about why mining and smithing are what he is most skilled at. Your open response questions albeit good could do with some expansion. You also need to take into account realism in many areas, and I do not get a very solid roleplay feel from some of them. The third one, though clever and original seems a bit unrealistic in some areas. A bit of expansion, despite its current length might help it out. You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a message in my inbox. Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Some of your grammar, spelling and word choices were off. Please go over and edit your application more closely. "Memory loss symptom" could have just been left at his memory going bad or such. But it'd look even better if you described the scenario more in depth, and have the doctors not know what it is, considering we are in a Medevil time era. What if this Great Hunt you reference a couple of times? Please add more lore related information into your biography. Be more in depth when you tell me your character is a "master" anything. Expand upon all of your open response questions. You character seems a bit over powered, and you need to take into account realism in a few areas. Even if you know stealing is against the rules without a villain application, you still cannot demonstrate any sort of villainy in the present day form on your white list application. You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions concerning your application feel free to drop a message in my inbox. Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Please fix up your grammar, and do not make the text a wall of text that is all one color. Your definition of metagaming needs some expansion. Please demonstrate clear understanding of the term. The same goes for powergaming, it needs some expansion, your current application is rather unclear. Your biography needs to be expanded upon and include more lore related materials. Right now I don't have a clear image of who your character is. You did not finish all of the questions provided on the application sheet. Your open response questions are far, far too short. More effort, please! Open response questions are your chance to show off your mettle as a roleplayer, and give us, the application team, a first taste of your character. Write the response in full roleplay, as you would a short story, and expand upon them as much as possible. Aim to be both realistic and creative! If you want to be on our server than put the time and work into making a valuable application. Do all the questions, read the lore, read the rules, and put the time, effort and commitment into making a solid application. You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox. Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Your definition of metagaming needs some expansion. Please demonstrate clear understanding of the term. The same goes for powergaming, however in this case the term has been incorrectly defined. Perhaps a quick forum search will clear up any confusion. Your open response questions are far, far too short. More effort, please! Open response questions are your chance to show off your mettle as a roleplayer, and give us, the application team, a first taste of your character. Write the response in full roleplay, as you would a short story, and expand upon them as much as possible. Aim to be both realistic and creative! You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox. Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Accepted Forum

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Please give a more in depth answer when it comes to powergaming. You demonstrate mild signs of villainy in your application, which isn't allowed without a villain application; you will only be allowed to apply for a villain application after being on the server for one week. Your open response questions are far, far too short. More effort, please! Open response questions are your chance to show off your mettle as a roleplayer, and give us, the application team, a first taste of your character. Write the response in full roleplay, as you would a short story, and expand upon them as much as possible. You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox. Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied. Please do not message the application team to review your application if you have only just submitted it today. We will get to your application in time, like the rest. Your application is not above or below anyone else's, please demonstrate some patience next time. Your formatting and grammar should be checked and fixed. Please don't make a wall of blue text, it's just plain hard to read. Expand upon your definition of roleplaying. You didn't clearly define powergaming. You didn't define metagaming at all. You did not answer all the questions provided on the application. Undead is not a proper race on Lord of the Craft. Your biography breaks lore, and is highly unrealistic and places your character into a position power that he wouldn't have right away. Please humble yourself some, and actually read our server's wiki and lore. Your ambition is a bit BIG and vague, please expand on it and give an actual reason. You didn't provide a screenshot of your skin. Your open response questions are far too short, and lack overall effort. The purpose of open response questions are for you to demonstrate to us, the application team, your mettle as a roleplayer, and to give us the first taste of your character and show us how your character will react to these situations. One sentence is definitely not enough to show this. If you want to be on our server than put the time and work into making a valuable application, you not only wasted my time by sending my a private message to review this, but that of the other applicants. Especially since you did nothing to make a good application, read the lore, read the rules, and put the time, effort and commitment into making a lengthy bio. You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a message in my inbox. Good luck! -Brokencrowe

Moved to Accepted Forum

Perhaps the most impressive application I've read thus far. You've demonstrated clear ability to roleplay, and did far more than expected. Thank you for the amazing read. Welcome to Lord of the Craft, I can't wait to see you in game. :). Accepted. Please wait until a game moderator can implement you.