Jadles
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short/ not well written.
It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Is your skin RP? Looks like jeans and a t-shirt to me...
Do not re-post your editted application for 3 days.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
Do not re-post your editted application for 3 days.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short.
It has bad grammar or Punctuation. Please check and make amends.
Do not re-post your editted application for 3 days.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short.
Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
Do not re-post your edited application for 3 days.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
It has bad grammar or Punctuation. Please check and make amends.
Do not re-post your editted application for 3 days.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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A good try, but:
Couldn't see you skin, the link doesn't work. Please fix this and repost.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Hayden has been noticed, and he is aware of that fact i'm sure. There will be two captains in place, and due to my continuing RL commitments, as well as making skins and signatures for like everyone on here, I just don't have time to RP captain like i used to.
So I will be stepping aside, and there will be a vacancy to be filled. We also have another captain who no one has yet to see, the likelihood is that he will be replaced also...
So in my opinion, I expect Hayden to be stepping up to the plate soon :)
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Welcome to Aegis,
Please wait while a GM actions this.
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OH GOD SO MANY REQUESTS
I'm so screwed..
Welcome to my world! :P
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Welcome to Aegis.
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Welcome to Aegis!
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short. It lacks effort and a character can not be based on one sentence... Write a back story that details some of his life before he came to Aegis. Also give him a surname _____ is not a valid name, nor even a word. If you don't want people to know his surname, don't tell them in character.
Overall this lacks effort.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Check your spelling and grammar.
Your character biography is too short, it seems a little rushed. Put some more effort into making your back story.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Check your spelling and grammar.
Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Explain what you think role playing is, even if you have no experience you should have some idea...
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Check your spelling and grammar.
Your character biography is too short.
Don't rush it, take you're time and re-read it yourself.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Welcome to Aegis!
Please wait while a GM update this.
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Check your spelling and grammar.
Choose an original name for your character.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/
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Your answers are too short.
Please re-write your role play answer to describe what role playing is. You have provided no evidence you understand what it is.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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kyleravioli's Application
in Denied Applications
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Your answers are too short.
Your character biography is too short.
Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/