Jadles
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places. Some of them didn't make any sense... Please re-write your role-play answer for example.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Please make the font size bigger.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Welcome to Aegis.
Please wait while a GM updates this.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Please make the font size bigger.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short. You didn't have one at all!!
Please make the font size bigger.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Please make the font size bigger.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Please make the font size bigger.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Please make the font size bigger.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Welcome to Aegis,
please wait while a GM updates this.
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Your answers are too short in places.
Your Character Biography is too short.
Please make the font size bigger.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
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Welcome to Aegis
Please wait while a GM updates this.
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schmufffy's application
in Denied Applications
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A good try...
Please supply your mine craft username.
Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.
Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/
Common reasons people are denied:
-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.
-Your biography was too short.
-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.
-You obviously didn't read the lore.
-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.
-It lacked effort.
-Your skin isn't RP.
-Needed an actual picture of your skin.
-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.
-Your application was too short.
These are just some of the reasons it could have been
I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.
http://www.lordofthe...od-application/