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Jadles

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    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    A good try, however:

    Please re-write your role play answer to explain what you think role playing is.

    Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Please check your grammar and punctuation.

    Some of your answers contradict themselves.

    For example: "Wears green clothing with a brownish vest. He's a Wood Elf, and has black hair, and tan skin.

    Even though his skin is green he's an elf." Is his skin tan or green?!

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Please check your grammar and punctuation.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

  8. declined-Jadles-stamp.png

    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Please check your grammar and punctuation.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

  9. declined-Jadles-stamp.png

    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Re-write your definition of roleplay explaining what you think it is.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

  11. declined-Jadles-stamp.png

    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Please check your grammar and punctuation.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Some of your answers are too short.

    Check your grammar and punctuation.

    "Role playing is when people get annoyed with newbies..." Rewrite this answer.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

  13. declined-Jadles-stamp.png

    Some of your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Some of your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Please re-write your explanation of role play, telling us what you think role play is.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Some of your answers are too short.

    Check your grammar, punctuation, etc...

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Some of your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Some of your answers are too short.

    Please rewrite your explanation of role-playing, explain what you think it is

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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    Your answers are too short.

    Your character biography is too short.

    Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

    Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

    Common reasons people are denied:

    -It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

    -Your biography was too short.

    -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

    -You obviously didn't read the lore.

    -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

    -It lacked effort.

    -Your skin isn't RP.

    -Needed an actual picture of your skin.

    -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

    -Your application was too short.

    These are just some of the reasons it could have been

    I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

    http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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