Voak Thailen

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Denied The main reason I'm denying this is because the character shows strong evidence of powergaming. You say he's nine feet tall, but the average height of an orc is seven feet tall. That's like having a human taller than eight feet, of which there are about fifteen in all of recorded history. Many of those fifteen are only so tall because of medical problems which either kill them in their twenties or impair their physical strength. You have an overpowered character. Powergaming isn't just not letting other people react. It's also creating a character that people only have one way to react too. You've made someone who can seemingly never lose a fight, and your last open response question greatly demonstrates that. All that said, that is the only thing I can see wrong with your app. It is a good app, and if you fix this, you should be accepted your next try. Please wait twenty four hours before posting another application.

This application is under review.

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Denied -Your bio needs to be edited. It doesn't fully answer the question, and you make up too many magical elements. Try to stay away from magic in your bio unless you are certain it fits in with our established lore. -Your open response questions are lacking, and you missed one. Answer each situation as if it were a story, playing all the characters in it. Please apply again in twenty four hours.

This application is under review.

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Denied Your app is mostly good, but there are a couple of problems with it. -Powergaming also involves forcing actions on other players. Your answer is right as well, but there are two things we are looking for. -Nord is not a subrace in our world. Northerner is the subrace that most fits Nords though. -You can't create entire cities in your biography. Every city in our world is accounted for, and we want to make it so that every major city is available to be visited. -Your open responses are still a bit lacking in some respects. Try roleplaying them out, controlling your character and other characters like it was a story. You can't do this in game, since that would be powergaming, but this is more of a test of your roleplaying abilities. Please wait twenty four hours before posting again.

This application is under review.

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Denied -Grammar is still a problem throughout your application. -Your bio is still undeveloped. I recommend a rewrite instead of just adding paragraphs. -I also recommend a rewrite of you definitions of powergaming and metagaming. They are mostly right, but you need to make sure the whole of them applies to roleplay. -Try adding in other character's responses to your open responses. Make them in roleplay instead of just describing what your character would do. Please try again in twenty four hours. You also failed to wait this long last time, but you were not told to either so I won't hold it against you. Just be sure to do it this time.

This app is under review.

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Sending this over to denied for now. You have my permission to repost your application as soon as you get a working skin link.