UltraRed
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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. But do not fret! You can resubmit an application after 24 hours, after fixing the following issues: -Your biography is unformatted, is very uncreative, and has a number of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes to boot. -Your definition of powergaming is wrong. -"Finding your father" is not an RP-sparking motivation if you don't have another player to play your father. The goal can't reach closure. I'm not saying it couldn't be done, but there are other motivations that would be far more RP-inspiring.
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Moved to Denied Forum
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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. But do not fret! You can resubmit your application after 2 hours, after fixing the following issues! -Several sentences (ex. your description of metagaming) are grammatical trainwrecks. -Your biography switches from first person to second person, and isn't particularly original. -Your open-response answers are too short.
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Moved to Denied Forum
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A repost, also denied for everything. You may post an improved application (I cannot stress that enough) after 24 hours.
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Denied for everything.
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Dark elves are dark gray, not brown. You may repost immediately when you make this change.
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Denied. Expand your biography, fix your definition of powergaming, give reasoning for your favorite tool, and significantly expand your open-response answers (show off your RP, have dialogue and thought processes!). You may post an improved application after six (6) hours.
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Denied. Your definition of powergaming is not complete, it refers to another roleplay behavior you did not mention (along the lines of forcing outcomes). You may resubmit a modified application after 2 hours.
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Denied. Your definitions of powergaming and metagaming are off. Your open-response questions should include dialogue and your character's thought process. You may reapply after 24 hours.
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Moved to Accepted Forum
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Seems legit. Welcome to Asulon. Please be patient in waiting for a GM to implement you, when a GM posts on this saying "Implemented," you will know you have been whitelisted for the server!
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Moved to Denied Forum
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Denied for speaking like a Dwarf without proper reasoning, and for not actually giving a definition of roleplaying. You are encouraged to post another application after 24 hours.
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Moved to Accepted Forum
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Correct. Welcome to Asulon. Please be patient in waiting for a GM to implement you. When a GM posts on this thread saying "Implemented," you will be whitelisted for the server.
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Moved to Denied Forum
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Denied for minor powergaming in open response questions (improbable fighting skills, and unnecessary respect from a superior officer). Your definition of metagaming is wrong, and your definition of powergaming is slightly off. Post an improved application after 24 hours.
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Moved to Accepted Forum