Tom_Whiteman

I know my man Soresan can do this. +Wan

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Your Application has sadly been DENIED!

This app is so close to acceptance, however I feel a few changes could be made. Let me just walk you through a few suggestions so the next app you post will be worthy of acceptance!

Firstly, your roleplaying and power-emoting definitions are good. However, I feel your meta-gaming definition could be expanded upon and drastically improved. I'll link you to the meta-gaming definition again. Remember, it is vital to put this definition into your own words!

META-GAMING

Secondly, your biography is extremely cliché and doesn't make much sense. I suggest you go with a creative back-story, one that doesn't involve your parents being murdered and your character having the motive to act out revenge. Be creative, surely your parents will die at some point, but it is unlikely for them to die whilst your character is such a young age. Like I said, be creative, go back to the drawing board, and think up a new back-story which is non-cliché.  

Thirdly, please expand on your personality traits, ambitions, strengths, and weaknesses. Add more in, make some interesting. Remember, it is ideal for your weaknesses to outweigh your strengths, however by not that much!

If you need any help whatsoever, I am a message away. Please, feel free to message me on the forums any time and I will help you with whatever you're having trouble with. I wish you the best of luck in your next application, Pancakepebbles.

You can re-apply in 12 Hours from the time of this denial.

Your application has been put on PENDING

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

Please fill out the 'BIOGRAPHY' section of the application. Make a story in first-person or third-person narrative. Give me a story that explains your character's past, what he did as a child and what might have happened whilst growing up, what he now does in his adult life- be creative! The 'BIOGRAPHY' section appears as so:

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

I also suggest you take your time to expand further on your definitions. Add more detail into them, make them much more clear so I could fully understand them. Remember to refrain from plagiarizing! I'll link you to some reference definitions, please study them and put them into your own words!

ROLEPLAYING

META-GAMING

POWER-EMOTING

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

-1. All of the statements above have solidified my reason for giving such a verdict.

This man definitely deserves to be re-added to the team. He has expressed his regret to initially leave the team. All of his qualities add up, making the perfect conglomerate for a GM.  

I absolutely agree. Completely agree.

Although I do not agree with creating a single "tree" for mages, and allowing them to learn branches. Such as dark arts, etc.

Okay... Let me expand on that: no, I don't want more subtypes to be condensed into one large tree. I merely agree with how the LT see magic lore, they look for things that aren't similar to one another. Magic should be considered upon quality and possibility- not whether if some attributes to the magic mimic another. However, yes, a magic should be denied if it fully mimics another.

I enjoyed his events in the fringe. They were surely some of the best events I've ever been involved in as a player. He'd be an asset to your team surely- he already knows his ****.

+1

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

Your Application has been ACCEPTED!

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait patiently as a GM will implement you to the server shortly! While you are waiting you are more than welcome to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore. I also suggest you review power-emoting. Not that your definition was bad, it was just slightly off. Otherwise...

An absolutely astonishing application, Neonkitty! I can't wait to see you in-game, if you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message on the forums or on skype (thomascovey1181). Enjoy your adventures in Vailor!

Your application has been put on PENDING

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

Please edit the fix the following problems by utilizing the 'EDIT' feature:

Firstly, your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions could be slightly better. Please refer to these two links. These links will give you the definitions of what meta-gaming and power-emoting are. Please put these definitions into your own words, do not copy/paste the definitions! (I will know if you do!)

META-GAMING

POWER-EMOTING

Secondly, to be a Halfling you have to have a Halfling mother and a Halfling father. If you had an Elf and a Human you'd merely be half-elf half-human. If you want to be a Halfling I suggest you adjust your back story so that you were born to Halfling parents. However, if staying as a half Elf half Human is okay with you, then I suggest you do.

Thirdly, please change your biography so that it excludes the cliche of having "trolls" or "orcs" murdering your family. Make something origional, something tat would catch my eye. Your mother can still die if you wish, however make it an unlikely event (fatal accident, murdered by close friend, lost somewhere beyond the reaches of civilization).

If you want help or need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me to.

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

Moved to Denied Application Forum.

Your Application has been DENIED.

You have been denied due to plagiarism being found within your application. Please refrain from doing this on your next application, I am giving you a warning. The next time you plagiarize another's application OR from the internet, I will reward you with a much harsher punishment. Please remove what plagiarized parts to your application you have and use your own words.

Please reapply in 24 hours, thank you.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

Your Application has been ACCEPTED!

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait patiently as a GM will implement you to the server shortly! While you are waiting you are more than welcome to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

An absolutely astonishing application, Pabanyo! I can't wait to see you in-game, if you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message on the forums or on skype (thomascovey1181). Enjoy your adventures in Vailor!

Hotter than the spice girls and oprah.

5 minutes ago, Malocchio said:

Say something rude and I'll gut you faster than you can say "I AM A GOOD JEWISH BOY" - okay?

I'm going to like this a lot.

TBH Italian Lady, Russian Lady, Mafioso, Ese, Conquistador, CoolioMafia Wannabe, Chick Who Probably Has A Crush On My Dad, Kakashka, Spice-Girls Audition Candidate, Mixtape Releaser, WT Managerial Material Lady, Person Who I Used To Have A 25 Snap-Streak With (why didn't you reply that day ): you are the pinnacle of the justice system, the lady everyone wants to be (not hillary clinton), the person who brought the dog filter back into main stream media, a Kim Kardashian look-alike! Why can't I be as cool as you, huh? I aspire to be you (even the woman part). Every day I look in the mirror and I try to put the dog filter on my face BUT IT SAYS "ACCESS DENIED: YOU'RE NOT MALOCCHIO." Yeah, it brings me down, I cry. But the things is, I get back up, and I tell that phone "I AM ******* MALOCCHIO." It isn't over, I'll be you some day.

3 minutes ago, UnBaed said:

Me

tbh, Tom, you're a meme.

TBH Dude, Lady, Skinner-God, American Woman, Lady I Aspire To Be In My Future, Person I TS With: *1nd14n 4cc3n7* "I tried to sell you phone plans, virus packages, SSNs from the USSR before it's collapse... You denied all of them... Soon I will acquire a high enough payment to ddos you straight up for 5min. Be scared, f00l."

17 minutes ago, HurferDurfer1 said:

duuuu miiiii

TBH Old Guy, Historian, Guy, Dude, Whatever Your Name Is: I love you. Every friggin' morsel... I want it... I want it all... hit me up on skype my profile pics are hot. 

17 minutes ago, ventus2 said:

You are not original.

TBH Man-That-Lives-Roughly-15-Minutes-Away-From-My-Front-Door, Ventyke, Zoki My Broki: I have a burning passion to take the transit to your home and unexpectedly slip a newspaper under your door... "Rob Ford Has Died" it would say. Then we will both weep...

Alrian would kick his feet up on his bed, the darkened packages below his eyes twitching as he looks to the stone ceiling. His orbs would remain motionless, lips parting to relinquish a sigh. For a moment he'd think... Before murmuring a few words to himself,

"Why so sheepish?"

"Would she have stayed?"

"Perhaps I should curse the lamb's shepherd to his grave."

The Mali'aheral would sigh once more, bringing the covers over his frame before shutting his eyes...

19 minutes ago, KUSHerZombie said:

wowza

TBH Man-I-Do-Not-Yet-Know: I have an attatchment to you. I looked at your profile picture and I instantly want to be your husband for the rest of our lives. You probably don't know me, but you will. I love you, goodnight.

1 minute ago, Man of respect said:

tbh of sandk1ng pls

TBH Brazilian, Brazzer, Team ***** Candidate, The Center of Attention, My Favourite Dude After 20 People: I aspire to meme like you... I do meme pretty hard, but I mean... I don't meme enough. I don't dream memeing, in my off time I play squash with a bunch of other douchebags, instead I should probably find a ******* job and start memeing... What am I doing with my life... I should- I should start to cry... And I am.

6 minutes ago, iLovePumpkins said:

Me please, and thank you.

TBH Twin-Of-Someone-On-The-Server-I-Won't-Reveal, Genderbender, Gangbanger, Trump Supporter, Comicon n00b: you're okay... I mean, you never made an Orc like a certain SOMEONE *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* *COUGH* don't worry many, you thought I was going to relinquish your darkest secret on this server... Hey, I wonder if anyone is suspicious now, they probably are. I suggest you build a bomb shelter and fill it up with tomato soup and a dog that could be your friend. Did I mention you're a twin to someone?

5 minutes ago, ???????? said:

I dunno Tom's a degenerate...

TBH Soon-To-Be-Best-Friend, Cyber-Logs-Holder, Skype-RPer-Shady-Elf: I aspire to be you... Except the snow-elven part... And maybe some other things- wait... Are you still a snow elf because you talk funny on TS. Nah I just playin' bruh. Btw, you can't voidal shift out of this I layered the walls with gold and lapis lazuli, there's no escape... I could almost do anything with you... ANYTHING.