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Pliz

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  1. Denied. Your OOC questions were great, but you are a lizard. You must apply as an accepted race, you may attempt to provide lore for a race in the "Your Ideas and Lore" section, but you may not apply for a race with no earlier provided lore. I can't seem to find your skin either. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply, and PM me any questions.
  2. Denied. Your Meta-Gaming and Power-Gaming definitions are incorrect. Please look up the RP meanings of these two terms. "What is Role Play" needs expanding. Biography needs slight expanding. You Power Game in the first Open-Ended scenario, it is impossible to jump on two bandits at once, and push them away. You have 24 hours until you may submit a new application, and 4 tries left.
  3. Denied. Your RP definition is technically correct, but I don't feel it goes along with how the server sees it, exactly. It is more than just doing realistic actions. Power-Gaming needs some expanding. Not only is it refusing to let another player retaliate, it is also overpowering your character's abilities. I feel your bio needs a small amount of expanding, and possibly a small definition of your character's looks. You may re-apply in 24 hours, and you have 5 application tries left.
  4. Denied. Definitions of Meta and Power-Gaming are incorrect. Look for the RP definitions of these two. Your bio is about YOUR CHARACTER, not you. The small description of yourself in the OOC section is for your own bio. Your ambitions need some expanding. Your open ended questions need expanding as well. You may apply again in 24 hours, and you have 5 tries left.
  5. Pliz

    My App

    Moved to Denied Forum
  6. Pliz

    My App

    Very entertaining. This brightened up my day. Denied.
  7. Moved to Denied Forum
  8. Denied. The app is not filled out, and the areas that are filled out need expanding. Please finish all answers on your next application. Please wait 24 hours to submit a new application. You are also allowed 5 more apps.
  9. Denied. Your definition of Power-Gaming is incorrect. Try to find the Role-Play definition for it. Your definition of Meta-Gaming is incorrect. I'd suggest looking around the forums, there are a few guides on it. Some open-ended responses need expanding, like the shop question. Explain what he sees, and whether he buys it or not. Please wait 24 hours to submit an improved application. You also have 5 more tries for applications.
  10. Denied. Definition of Meta-Gaming is wrong, look around the forums if you're having trouble. Your bio needs more detail. Your bio breaks lore, since your character comes from an 'unknown world'. This "Wolf Pack" has a similar name to a clan in LoTC already, and it is impossible to have this group with you, considering they aren't on the server. On the first open ended response, you need to expand your answer, and it would be hard to take the halfling into this 'wolf pack' as lore states Halflings are not very skilled in killing, and usually stick to a small community. Please wait 48 hours to submit a new application.
  11. Your application has been denied. Your bio needs a large amount of expanding, it should tell your live story up until the age your character is now. You also need to add a screenshot of your skin, for that is missing. Some of your open-ended applications need expanding. Please wait 48 hours before re-applying.
  12. Accepted. Note: Please make sure you have a Villain Application for some of the things you do, as they are hinted to be "evil." Example: "and is skilled assassin and conman" The whole "hates the world" idea would also need a VA, if you plan to kill somebody on that reasoning. Other than that, Welcome to Asulon!
  13. Denied. You left "Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?" without an answer. You should be able to finish the "Bandits" question, as their strength should be detected. I can see some Power-Gaming in the biography. Falling for four seconds is roughly a 25 story fall. Barely anyone survives that, and if they do, they will be in the hospital for a LONG time, it wouldn't be possible to just get up and run. No skin available. Please wait 2 hours to submit an improved application.
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