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Here's a link to the proper format of the Whitelist application. Im not a forum moderator, but if I was, I would deny this for not following the correct format. Proper Whitelist App Format

Alright Ozzyk, first thing is first. Work on proofreading your application before you submit it to the application forum. Some moderators take this seriously *cough*Mylas*cough*. On top of that, we want to see that you can roleplay your character more by introducing his backstory into Aegis. Many characters want to rid the Undead, but instead of blatantly saying, "I want to destroy the Undead", set your ambition to something your character can do realistically. He can't outmatch the Undead by himself and without some help from other denizens, he's just as good as dead. Justify in your biography that your character has the downright potential to be a protector of Aegis...fighting for the good. As I mentioned from the start, grammar. It seems to me like you rushed through the app to get the second approval of a moderator so you can start your adventure. Im sure of that. You need to work on a longer more thorough biography of your character. If the biography doesnt catch the reader's attention, it's no good to anyone else that reads it as well. It would be wise to re-read your app and add some extra boost of creativity. Include some pros and cons, strengths and weaknesses, detailed also. For character appearance, explain more in depth what the dwarf looks like, because other than the fact that all dwarves look like Honeydew, you want your character to stick out like a sore thumb and be the unique one that you want him to be. In addition to the remaining questionnaires, build a unique profile that will make any Forum Moderator do a double-take on your app.

Congrats Talfagoron! You deserve it more than I do! Kudos Edit: Can I apply for the female role?

Leafwind was assigned Initiate cleanup, and since you werent on, and he probably didnt recognize you, your bunk was filled by another Initiate. Talk to Leafwind about it and you'd be sure to pick up where you left off.

I am applying to play the role of Polcari, the Son of Haelphon. I am active five out of the seven days of the week, the weekdays, from 7AM-5PM Pacific Standard Time. I am also on the weekends, but I do not participate in TeamSpeak given house rules and courtesy of the family. Polcari would make a great role for me. As the role of the Son, I would start off making small mistakes, but learning from the Father that raised me through the thick and thin; and from the Mother that hath given me birth. And with each small mistake -- which I will learn through discipline and repetition -- it will make me be the Son Haelphon deared to have before his sister and him were born. Polcari will continue to strive to be as courageous, yet tender-hearted. He will have his rivalries with his sister, as all siblings do to prove who is better than the others, and will take risks to boast of his accomplishments. Draera will always be his sister and promises to protect her when they both mature. I currently play a young adult Warden and will see this as a great opportunity to roleplay as a different character and look forward to hearing your response. I am once again in the Pacific Time Zone, which would be three hours earlier than Haelphon.