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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? The current time on the server is not 2007, and there is no LA. Also, you have to answer all the questions, you can't say IDK. Your skin was also unrp, that isn't a dwarf. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? It was a bit unrealistic for a girl to set out at 12 and leave her family, and also, you said she loves animals in the ambitions, but there was no mention of how or why that occured in the biography. Also, it was a bit short. Explain other events. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Please include the open-response questions in your app, or you will not be accepted for failure to answer all questions. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Your definitions for power/meta gaming were incorrect, and your bio and open response questions were too short. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Your definition of powergaming was incorrect. Look at one of the links below to discover the true definition for it. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Your biography needs work. It needs to be MINIMUM of one paragraph. Your definitions for role/powergaming is wrong and you need to lengthen all answers. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Please answer all questions and expand on your answers. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Improve on the Open Response Questions. The first one showed powergaming, and the other one was too short. Also, your formatting wasn't the greatest. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? It was a really good app, but your definition for powergaming was incorrect. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? You can only apply 5 times. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Please fix up your formatting and lengthen all answers. Some Places That May Help You Roleplaying Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Roleplaying Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.