hypercrit

Moved to Denied Forum

My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Improve on your ORQ's. Let us know about what your character see's, thinks and how it acts in those situations. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ An FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

Moved to Denied Forum

My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Your ORQ's show signs of powergaming, and also you need to expand on your biography. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ An FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

Moved to Denied Forum

My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Answer ALL questions, and improve on everything. Fix your definitions for power/meta gaming. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ An FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

Moved to Denied Forum

My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Your formatting was pretty bad, and also, you need to expand on your ORQ's, your biopraphy and correct your definitions of meta/powergaming. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ An FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

Moved to Accepted Forum

You definitely improved, and I see you as a good addition to the server. If you have any questions, queries, or are just lost, please PM me. SERIOUSLY! DO IT! :P Please be patient while an admin implements you.

Moved to Denied Forum

My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Use the NEW format. You are using the old one, we have implemented another. Also, you HAVE to include a skin. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

Moved to Denied Forum

My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Shows no effort whatsoever. And also, a character wouldn't say 'Can I refill my hunger?'. That isn't roleplaying, and is but one of the things wrong with your application. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

Moved to Denied Forum

My apologies, but your application has been... Why did I deny you? Your formatting was not the greatest, you need to expand on your biography and fix your definitions of meta/powergaming. Also, expand on your ORQ's. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Moved to Denied Forum

Moved to Denied Forum

Always a pleasure, it was a really fun read, like an extended limerick. *pats Pip on the back*