Aiden

Moved to Denied Forum

You do not need to make a new application for a new character, so long as it's on an account that's already whitelisted. Just change your /setname, /setage, /setinfo, /setrace, etc and your skin then you're good to go!

Moved to Denied Forum

Under Review Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial. Reasons: 1. Your biography contains no server lore. Please read up on the lore here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage then add some of it into your biography. 2. This isn't anything major, but please split up your application into paragraphs. It's much, much better than having to read a wall of text. 3. Your character's parents were killed by orcs. This is a cliche on LoTC, so please think of something... more original. 4. There are bouts of powergaming in your second open response question. For someone who, as you said in your biography, " Alrik became pretty good at fighting with his stick. He could defend himself in a fight, but would most likely loose if he met a skilled swordsman. Also, he didn't have any "real" combat experiance as the had only fought trees." would be able to kill two heavily armoured bandits with not that much skill seems unlikely. The bandits also never get a hit on you; it is only them getting stabbed, killed, etc. 5. There were some grammar and spelling errors in this application. Please try your best to fix this. You may use a program such as word to help you. Message me if you have any questions or if you need any help!

Moved to Denied Forum

Under review. Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial. Reasons: While this application showed a lot of improvement, it's not quite there. 1. Please make that wall of text in your biography into paragraphs. It's much cleaner and professional. 2. In your open response questions, you mention things such as 'Wow' 'Ok' 'Screw it' 'Hey' 'Darn' 'Gosh' etc. Remember that this is a medieval setting, so those terms wouldn't of been around. 3. Please expand on/add more detail to your power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions. You may use the forums or google for help but don't directly copy and paste anything. Message me if you have any questions or need any help.

Moved to Accepted Forum

While your biography could of had more lore, this was a fine application. (Lore can be found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage ) Another thing that I'd like to mention is the second open response question. The bandits seemed to be defeated a bit too easily, remember in-game to always do *attempts to stab the bandit in the legs , or *kicks at the bandit's back, attempting to knock him down. Please wait for a moderator to whitelist you.

Moved to Denied Forum

You did not wait a full 24-hours before reapplying. You must wait a full 24-hours between your application submissions. Message me if you have any questions or need any help.

Moved to Denied Forum

Please wait 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial. Reasons: This was an amazing application, but I have to deny it because it is lore inconsistent. Aegis was the first realm of the server; we are now in Anthos, which is the third realm. (Asulon being the second) Because your character is a human (And 19 years old) he wouldn't of been around during the time of the undead, nor would his parents of been. This must be fixed so that it abides by the server lore. The wiki is here, if you need to have a look at the server lore: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage Message me if you have any questions or if you need any help!

Moved to Denied Forum

Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial. Reasons: 1. You used the wrong application. This is the alternate account application. Please fill out the full application, found here: http://www.lordofthe...lication-rules/ 2. Your definitions of meta-gaming and power-emoting are incorrect. You may use the forums or google for help, but do not copy and paste anything directly. Message me if you have any questions or need any help!

Moved to Denied Forum

Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial. Reasons: 1. You used the wrong application. This is the alternate account application. Please fill out the full application, found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/80614-official-application-format-application-rules/ 2. Your definitions of meta-gaming and power-emoting are incorrect. You may use the forums or google for help, but do not copy and paste anything directly. 3. IC means in character, not OOC, out of character. So, in the IC part of the application, write about your character, not yourself. Also, your skin must be an IC skin (think medieval) 4. Please know that RPG (Role-playing-game) is different then RP (role-play). A guide to help you is here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/83914-lotc-official-rp-vs-rpg-why-your-character-is-not-perfect/ Message me if you have any questions or need any help!

Moved to Denied Forum

Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial. Reasons: 1. Your roleplaying definition could use some work, and your other two definitions are incorrect. You may use the forums or google to help you, but do not directly copy and paste anything. 2. Please expand a bit on your biography, as well as add a bit more lore. (City names, nation names, guild names, locations, etc) 3. Please add a bit more detail to your open response questions. While they weren't bad, I would like to see a bit more detail as well as dialogue. You're close, but not quite there! Message me if you have any questions or need any help.

Moved to Denied Forum

Under Review Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial. Reasons: 1. Your role-playing definition could use some work, and the rest of your definitions are incorrect. 2. Please expand on your open response questions, biography, and the appearance, personality, skills, etc questions. For your biography in specific, what happened in those years that you worked, or from the age of 100 to 187, then from 187 to your character's current age? 3. Your biography lacks server lore. Add locations, city names/nation names, perhaps the elvish language. Prove that you read the lore. 4. You may not have any villainous actions in your application. You steal in all of the open response questions. Please, fix this. 5. While you can be a scientist, know that there is no electricity on LoTC (think medieval) so there wouldn't really be machines and parts, as you mention in your application. 6. In your open response questions, your character is extremely rude and mean. While this in itself is fine; you are allowed to have a character that is rude and mean, I'm not seeing enough reasoning for your character to be as mean as he is. Perhaps expanding your biography will clear this up, but as it is now your characters seems a bit too 'over the top'.. (Knocking out a small child and taking his money, robbing an old man who cannot get up off of the ground..) Message me if you have any questions or need any help.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Congratulations, you've been accepted to the server. If you have any questions, I encourage you to message me with them. Please wait patiently for a GM to whitelist you.

Moved to Denied Forum

Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial. Reasons: 1. You did not wait a full 24-hours between your application submissions. You must wait a full 24-hours, as stated above. Message me if you have any questions or need any help.