orangeboy2

"Did you not hear the words I speak? Did I not say that the council aranged the murder of my father? Yes I know there is no proof but I also just said that the council does its work in secret. It would be a poor secret if I could give you facts and proof. Now you people keep saying that the council wants to help us. What exactly are they doing to help us? There are no jobs, the money system has been completly destroyed to the point where even if I find a job in Malinor I might not take it for fear of trying to buy something and not being able to because it is in minas and all I get paid is malins. Now unless you have something good to say my business here is over." With that Malrok starts walking away from the conversation, heading deeper into the city.

((are you talking to me? because you quoted me but then said "I walk up to the man in armor", but I am not in armor))

((Yay just figured out how to quote, to all you people out there who don't know how to quote on iPhone simply tap the post you would like to quote and there will be a "quote" button and hit it and that should work :D. Sorry for the OOC))

((again cant quote MetaSolaray, sorry)) Malrok spins around as he hears the words and says "The council does wish these terrible things upon us, but they arn't quite stupid enough to do it in the open because they know the common people would revolt. This declaration only means that others have finally seen the signs I have been seeing for years. As for the council never hurting anyone..." he snorts "if that were true my father would be alive. And dont worry you will see action from me soon enough."

((sorry can't quote MetaSolaray as I am on an iPhone but lets say I did)) "Be quiet peasent you dont know who you are talking to, for I- no, no Father would not want- I have my own reasons for getting rid of the council, whether you are on my side or not the council shall be destroyed and you along with them if you chose to stand at their side like the dog you are." with a dissmisive look Malrok walks away from the other elf muttering "if only he knew... oh he would be... his precious council"

"Interesting" Malcor says to himself "this is just what this kingdom needs, now if they pay me for my services, ooh yes. And a contact inside the sentinal's own ranks... yes this could turn quite the profit if I play it right" He drifts off into the forest pondering the mans words.

Out of Character Information Minecraft account name: Orangeboy2. How old are you: 15 years old. Time zone: Central. Have you read, understand and agree to all the rules?: Yes. What previous experience have you had in roleplaying?: I have played and currently play; D&D 2nd and 3rd edition, paranoia, Warhammer 40K Only War, Fiasco, World of Darkness, (all of those were Pen and paper RPG's even though you probably havent heard of most of them they exist) and several crappy minecraft roleplay servers where i was the only one who roleplayed. How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: It was recomended to me by Destinator8, and later by Shadowhaven2 who recently joined the server. List any applications you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...kal-submission/ http://www.lordofthe...submission-2nd/ http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/83864-deniedmalrok-adilakal-3rd/ Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/page__st__2500__gopid__21398819#entry21398819 Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes. Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing: Playing an assigned role as if you lived in their time and place and acting as the person you are represent would instead of yourself. Meta-gaming: Using knowledge that you would not know as your role, example- I know that my worst enemy Borlin has just left the server so now I can attack his house with no possiblity of being caught.(Assuming I had been a vilinous person) Power-emoting: Doing something that a player cannot counter or avoid, example- I swing my sword and chop your head off, by adding the "I chop your head off" he cannot still be alive nor can he block the swing, he is already dead. In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name: Malrok Adil-Akal (last name means desire valuable in elvish) Current Age: 73 Sub-race (if any): Dark elf Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): When he was but a boy of 15 his father, a very proud man named Malacan Adil-Akal, told him how they were ther true heir's of the great Malin one of the four brothers that first settled in this world. Although they lived mostly in poverty Malacan proved that they were related by showing his son a locket that had an "M" carved into it. He told Malrok that it was once Malin's and he had given it to his firstborn son, the first of the dark elves, in secret to show the true heir of his bloodline. He also told that that was why all of their ancestors first names started with Mal but could never be Malin to avoid insulting his name. He then told Malrok that they had to keep it a secret for if the Council of that time ever found out about the ring he would be killed and the ring stolen. As Malrok approached the age of 30 his father took him to an acadamy, after his normal schooling in reading and writing, to train as a fighter and archer for two years, learning the basics of the bow and and advanced sword techniques. If they were the true heirs of Malin, Malacan said, they should be able to use the sword and bow as well as he could. Malacan told his son that generations of stupid elves had squandered their wealth several hundred years before, and that was why they were poor. By the time Malrok was 50 he didn't really believe his fathers tale anymore. At age 61 Malrok went off to start his own life as a gaurd for hire at local taverns. About that time Malacan started going to the tavern more and more, sometimes to see his son, sometimes just to drink. After several years when Malrok was 71, he got drunk enough to start boasting about how he was the true heir of Malin, and showed off his ring in full hearing and sight of one of the Council's gaurds. He shouted the whole story before Malrok could calm him down. Three days later he was murdered and the ring stolen. This enraged him, convincing him beyond all doubt that his father was right about the whole thing. The Council had heard of him and had him murdered and the ring stolen! Unable to stand living full time in a city whose leaders had murdered his family he left and traveled for 2 years only returning briefly every so often to visit long time friends. As he traveled he vowed to restore power of the line of Malin, bring back the family's lost fortunes, and most importantly, find his fathers lost ring so he can prove that he is the Heir of Malin.(Also His father was slightly insane, creating the ring himself and making up the lie that they were decendants of Malin because he was sick of being a nobody in society) Ambitions for the Future: Become wealthy, find the lost ring (something i will do until the day I die as i will never find it) and try to become a powerful and influential figure in the kingdoms to live up to the name of Malin. Personality: Generaly dark and angry, always looking to increase political power and make a coin or two. Skills: Skill with sword, skill with bow, reading, writing Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Black skin blue eyes, wearing black clothes, long white hair. Could not attach picture, explanation at bottom. Any other details you wish to share about your character: He will try to gain money and increase political power any way he can but not illegally as he believes that the Council are looking for him to exterminate the last of his line and he would not want to be brought before them. Also his father was slightly insane, creating the ring himself, we are in no means a decendant of Malin, my father simply wished he was an influential figure so created that lie. Open-Response-Questions Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. 1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react? Answer: I really dont care that they are mocking a child. I would look at the dress and age of the child. If he was dressed in luxery clothes and was very young (10 or less) I would come up to him and say, "where do you live child?" "I dont know the adress" he snifeled "That's ok just lead me there" I said kindly "Oh look the poor baby needs sombody to protect him, how adorable" says one high elf I ignore him as I follow the child away. "Right here" the child says some time later. "Ok go inside I will talk to your parents" "Thank you for returning him" the child's father says to me "It was no problem" I said "Here take these coins as a token of my gratitude" "Thank you kind sir" I say as I leave leave the house hiding a broad smile 2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do? Answer: I help the old man up and give him all the gold back. "Are you ok sir?" "yes I'm alright just give me a second" "ok" As he recovers I fashon a crude bag out of some scraps of cloth in my pack. "here, it isnt much but it will do until you can buy a new one" "Thank you" "Where are you traveling to?" "Oh just the village a mile or so down the road" " I will giude you there" "You dont have-" "I insist" I guide him down the road to the village and as i start to leave he stuffs a few coins into my hand and says "Here take this for your troubles" "Thank you sir" I reply 3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved). Answer: I come over to the man. "Good Morning sir" I say looking at his goods. "Good Morning to you" he replys. I realize that though I am not hungry I have run out of food, so I say "How much would it be for those three apples and that there loaf of bread?" "It would be 20 minas sir, but as you are acting like a gentelman and not the savages I usually deal with it will be only 18 minas for you." "18 minas! Isn't that a little excessive good sir? I would think it would be only 12 minas." "Sir yes I would buy them for 12 minas usually but I would like to make a profit this day so I will have to charge at least 15 minas." "Glad to do business with you sir." (Note, I did not know actuall prices so these prices might be way off) Also It says "Error this upload has failed" when I try to attach my picture... So I uploaded it to photobucket here: http://s1358.beta.photobucket.com/user/Jacob_Hurajt/media/2013-03-11_170818_zpsae47050d.png.html

I hope this comes at the right time I dont have the same time zone as you do so I have to try to remember when I posted (and I really wasn't paying attention to the time) Out of Character Information Minecraft account name: Orangeboy2. How old are you: 15 years old. Time zone: Central. Have you read, understand and agree to all the rules?: Yes. What previous experience have you had in roleplaying?: I have played and currently play; D&D 2nd and 3rd edition, paranoia, Warhammer 40K Only War, Fiasco, World of Darkness, (all of those were Pen and paper RPG's even though you probably havent heard of most of them they exist) and several crappy minecraft roleplay servers where i was the only one who roleplayed. How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: It was recomended to me by Destinator8, and later by Shadowhaven2 who recently joined the server. List any applications you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...kal-submission/ http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/83800-malrok-adil-akal-submission-2nd/ Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes. Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing: Playing an assigned role as if you lived in their time and place and acting as the person you are represent would instead of yourself. Meta-gaming: Using knowledge that you would not know as your role, example- I know that my worst enemy Borlin has just left the server so now I can attack his house with no possiblity of being caught.(Assuming I had been a vilinous person) Power-emoting: Doing something that a player cannot counter or avoid, example- I swing my sword and chop your head off, by adding the "I chop your head off" he cannot still be alive nor can he block the swing, he is already dead. In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name: Malrok Adil-Akal (last name means desire valuable in elvish) Current Age: 73 Sub-race (if any): Dark elf Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): When he was but a boy of 15 his father, a very proud man named Malacan Adil-Akal, told him how they were ther true heir's of the great Malin one of the four brothers that first settled in this world. Although they lived mostly in poverty Malacan proved that they were related by showing his son a locket that had an "M" carved into it. He told Malrok that it was once Malin's and he had given it to his firstborn son, the first of the dark elves, in secret to show the true heir of his bloodline. He also told that that was why all of their ancestors first names started with Mal but could never be Malin to avoid insulting his name. He then told Malrok that they had to keep it a secret for if the Council of that time ever found out about the ring he would be killed and the ring stolen. As Malrok approached the age of 30 his father took him to an acadamy, after his normal schooling in reading and writing, to train as a fighter and archer for two years, learning the basics of the bow and and advanced sword techniques. If they were the true heirs of Malin, Malacan said, they should be able to use the sword and bow as well as he could. Malacan told his son that generations of stupid elves had squandered their wealth several hundred years before, and that was why they were poor. By the time Malrok was 50 he didn't really believe his fathers tale anymore. At age 61 Malrok went off to start his own life as a gaurd for hire at local taverns. About that time Malacan started going to the tavern more and more, sometimes to see his son, sometimes just to drink. After several years when Malrok was 71, he got drunk enough to start boasting about how he was the true heir of Malin, and showed off his ring in full hearing and sight of one of the Council's gaurds. He shouted the whole story before Malrok could calm him down. Three days later he was murdered and the ring stolen. This enraged him, convincing him beyond all doubt that his father was right about the whole thing. The Council had heard of him and had him murdered and the ring stolen! Unable to stand living full time in a city whose leaders had murdered his family he left and traveled for 2 years only returning briefly every so often to visit long time friends. As he traveled he vowed to restore power of the line of Malin, bring back the family's lost fortunes, and most importantly, find his fathers lost ring so he can prove that he is the Heir of Malin. Ambitions for the Future: Become wealthy, find the lost ring (something i will do until the day I die as i will never find it) and try to become a powerful and influential figure in the kingdoms to live up to the name of Malin. Personality: Generaly dark and angry, always looking to increase political power and make a coin or two. Skills: Skill with sword, skill with bow, reading, writing Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Black skin blue eyes, wearing black clothes, long white hair. Could not attach picture, explanation at bottom. Any other details you wish to share about your character: He will try to gain money and increase political power any way he can but not illegally as he believes that the Council are looking for him to exterminate the last of his line and he would not want to be brought before them. Also his father was slightly insane, creating the ring himself, we are in no means a decendant of Malin, my father simply wished he was an influential figure so created that lie. Open-Response-Questions Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. 1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react? Answer: I really dont care that they are mocking a child. I would look at the dress and age of the child. If he was dressed in luxery clothes and was very young (10 or less) I would come up to him and say, "where do you live child?" "I dont know the adress" he snifeled "That's ok just lead me there" I said kindly "Oh look the poor baby needs sombody to protect him, how adorable" says one high elf I ignore him as I follow the child away. "Right here" the child says some time later. "Ok go inside I will talk to your parents" "Thank you for returning him" the child's father says to me "It was no problem" I said "Here take these coins as a token of my gratitude" "Thank you kind sir" I say as I leave leave the house hiding a broad smile 2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do? Answer: I help the old man up and give him all the gold back. "Are you ok sir?" "yes I'm alright just give me a second" "ok" As he recovers I fashon a crude bag out of some scraps of cloth in my pack. "here, it isnt much but it will do until you can buy a new one" "Thank you" "Where are you traveling to?" "Oh just the village a mile or so down the road" " I will giude you there" "You dont have-" "I insist" I guide him down the road to the village and as i start to leave he stuffs a few coins into my hand and says "Here take this for your troubles" "Thank you sir" I reply 3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved). Answer: I come over to the man. "Good Morning sir" I say looking at his goods. "Good Morning to you" he replys. I realize that though I am not hungry I have run out of food, so I say "How much would it be for those three apples and that there loaf of bread?" "It would be 20 minas sir, but as you are acting like a gentelman and not the savages I usually deal with it will be only 18 minas for you." "18 minas! Isn't that a little excessive good sir? I would think it would be only 12 minas." "Sir yes I would buy them for 12 minas usually but I would like to make a profit this day so I will have to charge at least 15 minas." "Glad to do business with you sir." (Note, I did not know actuall prices so these prices might be way off) Also It says "Error this upload has failed" when I try to attach my picture... is there a way I could msg it to an admin or something because I cannot attach it or paste it in for some reason, it is different from my last one so you cant just look at that one. One last thing to say about this submission, if you dont know what "heir" means, which I dont think Aiden knew when he denied my last sumbmission, It has several definitions and what I take it for is this: A person inheriting and continuing the legacy of a predecessor or if you dont like that one how about A person who inherits or is entitled to inherit the rank, title, or position of another. So Aiden when you said, as one of your reasons to deny me last application, "In your biography, you state that your character is the true heir to malin. The problem with this is that all elves can trace their ancestry back to malin, so all elves are his descendants, so this needs to be fixed in your next application." It really didnt relate to the fact that I am an Heir not just a decendant. Although Aiden I do thank you for making that gramical correction to my name pointing out that it should be Adil'akal not Adil-akal

Out of Character Information Minecraft account name: Orangeboy2. How old are you: 15 years old. Time zone: Central. Have you read, understand and agree to all the rules ?: Yes. What previous experience have you had in roleplaying?: I have played and currently play; D&D 2nd and 3rd edition, paranoia, Warhammer 40K Only War, Fiasco, World of Darkness, (yes all of those were RPG's even though you probably havent heard of most of them) and several crappy minecraft roleplay servers where i was the only one who roleplayed. How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: It was recomended to me by Destinator8, and later by Shadowhaven2 who recently joined the server. List any applications you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/83573-elf-malrok-adil-akal-submission/ Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes. Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing: Playing an assigned role as if you lived in their time and place and acting as the person you are represent would instead of yourself. Meta-gaming: Using knowledge that you would not know as your role, example- I know that my worst enemy Borlin has just left the server so now I can attack his house with no possiblity of being caught.(Assuming I had been a vilinous person) Power-emoting: Doing something that a player cannot counter or avoid, example- I swing my sword and chop your head off, by adding the "I chop your head off" he cannot still be alive nor can he block the swing, he is already dead. In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name: Malrok Adil-Akal (last name means desire valuable in elvish) Current Age: 73 Sub-race (if any): Dark elf Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): When he was but a boy of 15 his father, a very proud man named Malacan Adil-Akal, told him how they were ther true heir's of the great Malin one of the four brothers that first settled in this world. Although they lived mostly in poverty Malacan proved that they were related by showing his son a locket that had an "M" carved into it. He told Malrok that it was once Malin's and he had given it to his firstborn son, the first of the dark elves, in secret to show the true heir of his bloodline. He also told that that was why all of their ancestors first names started with Mal but could never be Malin to avoid insulting his name. He then told Malrok that they had to keep it a secret for if the King and Queen of that time ever found out about the ring he would be killed and the ring stolen. As Malrok approached the age of 30 his father took him to an acadamy, after his normal schooling in reading and writing, to train as a fighter and archer for two years, learning the basics of the bow and and advanced sword techniques. If they were the true heirs of Malin, Malacan said, they should be able to use the sword and bow as well as he could. Malacan told his son that generations of stupid elves had squandered their wealth several hundred years before, and that was why they were poor. By the time Malrok was 50 he didn't really believe his fathers tale anymore. At age 61 Malrok went off to start his own life as a gaurd for hire at local taverns. About that time Malacan started going to the tavern more and more, sometimes to see his son, sometimes just to drink. After several years when Malrok was 71, he got drunk enough to start boasting about how he was the true heir of Malin, and showed off his ring in full hearing and sight of one of the Royal gaurds. He shouted the whole story before Malrok could calm him down. Three days later he was murdered and the ring stolen. This enraged him, convincing him beyond all doubt that his father was right about the whole thing. The Royal family had heard of him and had him murdered and the ring stolen! Unable to stand living full time in a city whose leaders had murdered his family he left and traveled for 2 years only returning briefly every so often to visit long time friends. As he traveled he vowed to avenge his fathers death, find the Kings gaurd who had told about his father and, most importantly, find his fathers lost ring all while trying to restore his family's lost fortunes. Ambitions for the Future: Become wealthy, and find the lost ring (something i will do until the day I die as i will never find it) and try to become a powerful and influential figure in the kingdoms to live up to the name of Malin. Personality: Generaly dark and angry, always looking to increase political power and make a coin or two. Skills: Skill with sword, reading, writing Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Black skin blue eyes, wearing black clothes, long white hair. Picture attached. Any other details you wish to share about your character: He will try to gain money any way he can but not illegally as he believes that the Royal family are looking for him to exterminate the last of his line and he would not want to be brought before them. Open-Response-Questions Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. 1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react? Answer: I really dont care that they are mocking a child. I would look at the dress and age of the child. If he was dressed in luxery clothes and was very young (10 or less) I would come up to him and say, "where do you live child?" "I dont know the adress" he snifeled "That's ok just lead me there" I said kindly "Oh look the poor baby needs sombody to protect him, how adorable" says one high elf I ignore him as I follow the child away. "Right here" the child says some time later. "Ok go inside I will talk to your parents" "Thank you for returning him" the child's father says to me "It was no problem" I said "Here take these coins as a token of my gratitude" "Thank you kind sir" I say as I leave leave the house hiding a broad smile 2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do? Answer: I help the old man up and give him all the gold back. "Are you ok sir?" "yes I'm alright just give me a second" "ok" As he recovers I fashon a crude bag out of some scraps of cloth in my pack. "here, it isnt much but it will do until you can buy a new one" "Thank you" "Where are you traveling to?" "Oh just the village a mile or so down the road" " I will giude you there" "You dont have-" "I insist" I guide him down the road to the village and as i start to leave he stuffs a few coins into my hand and says "Here take this for your troubles" "Thank you sir" I reply 3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved). Answer: I come over to the man. "Good Morning sir" I say looking at his goods. "Good Morning to you" he replys. I realize that though I am not hungry I have run out of food, so I say "How much would it be for those three apples and that there loaf of bread?" "It would be 20 minas sir, but as you are acting like a gentelman and not the savages I usually deal with it will be only 18 minas for you." "18 minas! Isn't that a little excessive good sir? I would think it would be only 12 minas." "Sir yes I would buy them for 12 minas usually but I would like to make a profit this day so I will have to charge at least 15 minas." "Glad to do business with you sir." (Note, I did not know actuall prices so these prices might be way off) It says my image for my charicter is to large, but I uploaded a similar one last time... is there a way I could msg it to an admin or something because I cannot attach it or paste it in for some reason, it is different from my last one so you cant just look at that one.

Out of Character Information Minecraft account name: Orangeboy2. How old are you: 15 years old. Time zone: Central. Have you read, understand and agree to all the rules?: Yes. What previous experience have you had in roleplaying?: I have played and currently play; D&D 2nd and 3rd edition, paranoia, Warhammer 40K Only War, Fiasco, World of Darkness, (yes all of those were RPG's even though you probably havent heard of most of them) and several crappy minecraft roleplay servers where i was the only one who roleplayed. How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: It was recomended to me by Destinator8, and later by Shadowhaven2 who recently joined the server (1-2 days ago). List any applications you have previously made for the server: Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/page__st__2440__gopid__21320342#entry21320342 Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes. Definitions In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing: Meta-gaming: Power-emoting: In-Character Information: Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name: Malrok Adil-Akal (last name means desire valuable) Current Age: 73 Sub-race (if any): High elf Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): When he was but a boy of 15 his father, a very proud man named Malacan Adil-Akal, told him how they were ther true heir's of the great Malin one of the four brothers that first settled in this world. Although they lived mostly in poverty Malacan proved that they were related by showing his son a locket that had an "M" carved into it. He told Malrok that it was once Malin's and he had given it to his firstborn son in secret to show the true heir of his bloodline. He also told that that was why all of their ancestors first names started with Mal but could never be Malin to avoid insulting his name. He then told Malrok that they had to keep it a secret for if the King and Queen of that time ever found out about the ring he would be killed and the ring stolen. As Malrok approached the age of 30 Malrok started to doubt the tale. If they were the true heirs of Malin why wern't they wealthy? Malacan told his son that generations of stupid elves had squandered their wealth several hundred years before. By the time Malrok was 50 he didn't believe his fathers tale anymore. At age 61 Malrok went off to start his own life as a gaurd for hire at local taverns. About that time Malacan started going to the tavern more and more, sometimes to see his son, sometimes just to drink. After several years when Malrok was 71, he got drunk enough to start boasting about how he was the true heir of Malin, and showed off his ring in full hearing and sight of one of the Kings gaurds. He shouted the whole story before Malrok could calm him down. Three days later he was murdered and the ring stolen. This enraged him, convincing him beyond all doubt that his father was right about the whole thing. The King had heard of him and had him murdered and the ring stolen! Unable to stand living full time in a city whose king had murdered his family he left and traveled for 2 years only returning briefly every so often to visit long time friends. As he traveled he vowed to avenge his fathers death, find the Kings gaurd who had told about his father and, most importantly, find his fathers lost ring all while trying to restore his family's lost fortunes. Ambitions for the Future: Become wealthy, and find the lost ring (something i will do until the day I die as i will never find it) Personality: Generaly dark and angry, not very many happy moments in his life Skills: Skill with sword, reading, writing Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Blue eyes light brown hair with streaks of dark brown, face and chest with dark splotches because a badly handled case of dragon pox as a child, wearing mostly brown clothes. Picture attached. Any other details you wish to share about your character: He will try to gain money any way he can but not illegally as he believes that the King and Queen are looking for him to exterminate the last of his line and he would not want to be brought before them. Open-Response-Questions Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. 1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react? Answer: I really dont care that they are mocking a child. I would look at the dress and age of the child. If he was dressed in luxery clothes and was very young (10 or less) I would come up to him and ask him where he lived. When he told me i would then escort him home and tell the father/mother that I had rescued him from a band of elves that had gotten mad at something he said to them (I dont know what i wasnt there at the time). In repayment they would probably give me gold or something to repay me. 2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do? Answer: I help the old man up and give him all the gold back. I then ask if he was okay. As soon as he was able I would escort him to where he needed to go to. As payment for my serveces he would probably give me gold. 3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved). Answer: I come over to the man. "Good Morning sir" I say looking at his goods. "Good Morning to you" he replys. I realize that though I am not hungry i have run out of food, so I say "How much would it be for those three apples and that there loaf of bread?" "It would be 20 gold coins sir, but as you are acting like a gentelman and not the savages I usually deal with it will be only 18 coins for you." "18 coins! Isn't that a little excessive good sir? I would think it would be only 12 coins." "Sir yes I would buy them for 12 coins usually but I would like to make a profit this day so I will have to charge at least 15 coins." "Ok I will accept your generous lowering of the prices." (Note, I did not know actuall prices so these prices might be way off) Also I was looking and I never found a common form of money. Would it just be Gold coins? I hope I did this right as it took me 3 and 1/2 hours