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  1. MC Name:

             Deer__

     

    Character's Name:

             Cerys

     

    Character's Age:

             Old Enough

     

    Character's Race:

             High Elf

     

    What magic(s) will you be learning?

             Ordained Heraldry

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             boughtabride | Rigorous

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Ren'Vah | Alistair

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             No

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             Yes

  2. I think 3 emotes is fine for bows. You have the advantage of being at range. You also then have the problem of a lot of different magic's base projectiles being 'arrow strength' and taking three emotes as well. What about those? Do you want those to be two-emote? I think a lot of non-magic RPers would be up in arms about being two-emote ice projectiled over and and over.

    Amendment: 3 for the first 2 for anything after might be fine, because that is unironically also how void mages work. I didn't read anything else before commenting 🙂

  3. MC Name:

             Deer__

     

    Character's Name:

             Linguini

     

    Character's Age:

             21 years

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             N/A

     

    Transformed form:

             Musin

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             N/A

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Musin are small creatures with a resemblance to mice, the widely accepted origin is that they originally descend from a race called the Ratiki. They're senses tend to be lesser than descendants, they tend to be weaker and shorter but more agile and nimble. Their strength in combat is that they're extremely hard to hit due to their size and relative mobility around a short area but one good hit and they're as good as dead. Men and women musin have no distinct physical differences but they might style themselves in a more traditionally feminine or masculine fashion. They tend to gravitate towards more vibrant colors, go so far as to hoard and craft together multiple patches of brilliant cloth. . They have short life-spans, up to 70 years and are unable to learn most magics with the exception of a few, such as bardmancy and kani.

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    Linguini is a grey colored musin that stands at one foot, eight inches tall and weighs about twenty-two pounds. He's missing his left eye, made clear by a scar and missing fur over it. It's since been replaced by  a small glass bead, though he's never able to find one the perfect size. Over the top of this eye he wears a makeshift single-eyed goggle, that keeps the bead from going missing. Linguini's ears are of middling size for the typical musin. He dresses in cobbled together leather pants and boots while wearing a white shirt and a brown cloak, both of which are made of linen. The latter appears to just be a patch of cloth tied about his neck. Oftentimes Linguini carries a bronze key about six or seven inches in length that he often uses as a cane of sorts.

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             No

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

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