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Cornivore

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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

    T4JBJW3.png You are almost there, there is only a few things you need.

    I. The first thing is, I would request that you add a little bit of the servers lore, like maybe a city she grew up in, If you need some help with that heres the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    II. The last and final thing is, If you need any help, do not hesitate to send me a personal message.

    (You have a full 24 hours to fix it before it comes to an auto deny.)

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Alright there is only a few changes I would request you make to your application.

    I. The first thing I would request you do is find a new skin, as a High Elf wouldnt look like that with the servers Lore, If you need help with that heres a skin thread to help you  https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/?tab=comments#comment-1528951 

     

     

    II. The second thing I would like you to change would be to use current lore from this map heres the wiki for some help https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page I also notice you picked High Elf which means if you are going to be 28 remember that is still a Child in their culture, they are not an adult till 50. Vailor was two maps ago, so I do not believe your elf would be 28.

    III. Third and final thing is, if you need any help all you have to do is message me on the fourms or discord or in game and I would love to help. 

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Alright a few things and then you will be good to go, You definitions are not quite there, here is the wiki and it can help you with your definitions https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page I would also like to point out, that your personas backstory has no lore in it at all, I would request that you read a bit of the lore where you think you would like your persona to be from, https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page here is the wiki for some help. If you have any questions dont hesitate to ask me, personally on the forums or discord. 

  4. Changed Status to Under Review

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     First and foremost you have plagiarized the definitions straight of Wikipedia, now If you are caught again in an application that a permanent ban from applying, Your persona is based of a YouTube serious, I would request you find a name that fits within the Lord of The Craft Lore. Your personas biography is one sentence, and contains nothing based off the Lord of The Craft Lore, If you need some help with the lore here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page If you have any questions, or need some help, feel free to shoot me a pm. You may Apply once more in six hours. PS( Make sure you dont plagiarize.)

  5. xD66w6G.png Your application has been denied, because of the Plagiarism of the definitions, they are copied straight from wikipedia, If you choose to apply again in 24 hours make sure you do not plagiarize your definitions, put them in your own words.

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