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    Dauby600

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use a little help.

    1. Your personas biography is way too short, and it actually has no lore, I would request you take a look back at the wiki or forums and read some lore to add onto your biography and make it atleast a paragraph long.  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your interesting facts could use a little bit of help, currently they are not really long, I would request you please put them into a sentence format and make them look a little nice add some details.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    Speed_Is_Me

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use some help.

    1. The first thing is your meta game definition and your power game definition they are both wrong and need some improvement. If you need some help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. The next thing is your biography, to me I feel like you could add a lot more descriptive pieces into it and make it longer, add some more lore into it as well, make a good story out of it. If you need help you can use the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page or the fourms.
    3. The third thing is your interesting facts, I would request you make them a little longer and make them into sentences please.
    4. The fourth thing is please find a different skin that is lore friendly towards the server, if you need help to find what one looks like or need one you can use the skin forum for help. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    DannyDanger12

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but it is not enough yet.

    1. You biography is good, but it could use a little bit of help, there isnt really any lore that I can find, Axios is not a village, so I would request you look back at the lore and add to your biography. Also you cannot start out with magic on the server so I might edit that part and change it slightly. If you need any help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    TanakinSwaggy

    in Accepted

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

    1. Your skin is not really that of a snow elf, I request that you find a new one and change it, if you need help or want a temporary skin, feel free to use this forum post.  https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    Johan_vmb

    in Denied

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but need a little help.

    1. Your powergaming and metagaming definition is both off, I would please request you please re write them to a more understandable point. If you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. Your personas Biography is actually just nothing, you need to actually try to write a biography and put the servers lore into it.  Here is the wiki for help. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    3. Your name is Jack Frost, that is an actual thing, please change it to something else a little more Snow Elfy. 
    4. Your interesting facts are not interesting facts and they need to be in sentence form, you can also please fix your description because it doesn't actually describe him.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    Gigi

    in Denied

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    letoGzw.png You have been denied for the following reason.

    1. The first one is about the timezone, you failed to put one in, so I already assume you have just wanted to make this as fast as possible to meme around.
    2. The second thing is your biography only being YYYEEEETTTT that is clearly a meme.
    3. Your interesting facts is also not there and is clearly memeing
    4. Also the Shapeshifter part really helps the meme level.

     

    If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    Tokyo__

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but need a little bit of help.

     

    1. Your biography is lacking in the lore department, I would request you look back into adding a few more details and include some of the servers lore into it. If you need some help heres the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    tonisupercool

    in Accepted

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     If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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