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    tonisupercool

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there just need a little bit of help.

    1. the one thing I would request you fix is to make your interesting facts into sentences please, they are a little too short for my liking.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    laurentinius

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, just a few things that need to be changed.

    1. So the first thing I notice is that your power game definition is off, it is not the correct version that I am looking for. If you need help heres the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    locomax2001

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    1yPM0YR.png 

    I am going to go ahead and put you on pending just so it doesnt look like I havent reviewed this. I sent you a private message on the forums about the issue I have with your application.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    minaren123

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are close just need to fix a few things.

    1. I would request you please change your biography a little maybe add a bit more lore, but I am getting a little confused with the talking to trees and talking to animals, Im sort of seeing it as trying to start out with magic which you cannot and can only learn in game through a teacher. So I would request that you fix this one minor detail for me please. If you need help the wiki is here for you. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

     

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    AnnaNicole20

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but could use some help.

    1. The first two things that are obvious to me, is that you dont quite understand the definitions of Powergaming or Metagaming, I would request that you please fix them and if you need help the wiki can help. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    2. The second thing is your bio is a little too short for my liking, I would request that you please add onto it, maybe add a bit more lore into it if you could, if you need help heres the wikihttps://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
    3.  The third thing is that your interesting facts are not sentences they are just traits, could you make them into a sentence . 

     

    (Also btw Elves are adults at 50 so 20 is quite young for an elf.) 

     

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    TheFarlander

    in Denied

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    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there you just need a little bit of help.

    1. Your metagame definition and powergame definition is both off, I would request you look over it once more and fix it, if you need help the wiki is here for you.https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 
    2. Your name is The Farlander, I dont know if you really want that to be your name, so I think it might be best to give a real name example John Snow.
    3. Your Biography is way too short, and there is no lore in it that I can tell, if you need some help the wiki can help you to add onto your biography. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    Blanked_Space

    in Accepted

    Posted

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, you just need a little bit of help.

     

    1. The first thing I notice is, you say she is from this noble family pure bred, Im guessing. When you start on the server you cannot be noble until you are accepted and on the server, I request that you please change the wording for that since she cannot be noble.
    2. The second thing is the interesting facts I think you might be able to make them into sentences and they would be perfect.
    3. This is just a side note, but in elf lore the persona once above 50 they are considered adults, so I just wanted to make you aware because 19 is quite young and is considered a child.  

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.)

    If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    endermanthecool

    in Denied

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use a little help.

    1. Your biography is way too short, and there is no actual lore from the server, I request that you add some more.
    2. Also for your interesting facts I would request you make them into sentences.

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.)

    If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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    brikie

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

    1yPM0YR.png You are so you just need a little bit of help.

    1. The first thing I have noticed is your metagaming definition is not quite what it could be, I would request that you revisit it, and look to making it more refined the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page can help you with it.
    2. The second and final thing is, your interesting facts are just traits, they need to be in a sentence form. For example He is very pacifist due to his religion work.

    If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord.  Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

    (You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.)

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