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Keefy

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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Welcome to the Server!

    Your application has been reviewed and accepted, now you can join the rest of  us on Lotc!

    Please take your time to acclimate yourself to the server, and read up on more lore, to help keep yourself familiarized.

    You can also join the New Player Discord for further assistance here:
    https://discord.gg/rb4WY5

    Please enjoy yourself, and we hope to see you adventuring soon!

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    Your application has been denied.

    Let's get started on the reasons.

    -Your Metagaming definition is incorrect.

    -In your bio, Petrus is a lore reference, but that city has not existed in several irl years. "He can hold his own against two bandits" can also be construed as power-gaming, and should be adjusted. So please try and adjust your lore references to a more up to date example and adjust those lines.

    -Your age listed for him and the age listed in your description do not match.

    -Your description needs to be slightly better. We're looking for a physical description.

    Please fix these and reapply.

    I recommend creating a forum account for your reapplication so we can simply let you edit the app if anything is incorrect.

    You can also join the New Player Discord for further assistance:
    https://discord.gg/rb4WY5

    We hope to see you adventuring soon!

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been denied for the following reasons.

    -Please include one to three lore references in the bio. You can use the name of the previous worlds, that's fine. That's in line with following lore.

    -Your definitions are both slightly off. You're close, just tailor them some to be on point and you're solid.

    This one isn't a requirement but try to go in depth with your backstory some more. Doing so usually means you'll find yourself reading some neat parts of the lore of the World of Lotc, which can help you figure out what you want to do as a player.

    I also highly recommend registering a forum account so next time you apply, if anything is off, we can simply put you on pending and let you edit your application.

    Join the New Player Discord for additional help:
    https://discord.gg/rb4WY5

    We hope to see your adventures soon!

  4. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has been denied.

    You're free to try and re-apply, preferably with a Forum Account so that we may more easily walk you through the process.

    To begin with however, correct the following issues upon reapplication.

    - Tailor your powergaming definition. It's almost correct but not quite.

    -Please include at least three lore references within your characters backstory/biography so we know you have a hold on the lore.

    As well, we have a New Player Discord you can join for further assistance directly from those of the Application Team, myself included:
    https://discord.gg/rb4WY5

    Please do not be discouraged and reapply!

    We hope to see you adventuring soon!

     

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    Application Denied for the various reasons:

    -Please flesh out your bio some more!

    -You need at least three lore references within your bio!

    We also suggest creating a forum account next time you apply in order for us to be able to properly help you correct your application.

    For further assistance please join the new player discord:
    https://discord.gg/YdvWwy

    We hope to see you soon.

  6. Hello, your application has been.

     

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    Please create a forum account and reapply with the following changes.

    -Meta-gaming definition is close but not quite there. Please change.

    -Powergaming definition is close but not quite there. Please change.

     

    Your bio is good but I suggest small touch ups. For instance I have no idea whom this "Lots" could be. You have enough lore references, though updating your information would be good. The city within the time frame of your personas age has since changed names.

     

    Everything else checks out, so feel free to reapply when you create a new forum account so we may properly review the app next time.

     

    Also, join the New Player Discord if you need further assistance, or message me over the forums.

    I hope to see you online soon!


    https://discord.gg/7UrT6j

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    Thank you for returning to Lord of the Craft.

     

    As for your application it's very solid and I can see the old experience you have hasn't left you from the quality of the writing.

     

    However.

     

    Our application process these days has changed slightly. Everything here is in proper order but we would like it if you had one or two more lore references with in your biography.

     

    Additionally, if you could, please join the New Player Discord if you need help getting settled into a new location within the server. Here we can also provide assistance to help acclimate yourself to the new experiences, considering the three year gap between your last stay with us.

     

    https://discord.gg/UUYCqW

     

    When you edits are done, you can ping me over the New Player Discord at Keefy#0001, or shoot me a message on the forums here!

     

    Thank you for applying, and I hope to see you again soon!

  8. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    First things first, please create an actual forums account. This way you can apply for magics in the future should your character  go that route, and contact staff members with greater ease for issues that might arise such as players harassing you and what not. This will make creating a pleasant experience for you as a player much easier for we of the Staff.

     

    Two, please join the New Player Discord. Here you can contact other AT who can also help you, as well as assorted Stewards and Nation Leaders.
     

    https://discord.gg/UUYCqW


    Please, enjoy your stay on Lotc! We hope you have fun.

    Happy Adventures!

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    Welcome to Lotc!

    Remember to join the New Player Discord as listed above on your pending!

     

    Remember to keep the rules in mind as you progress through your roleplaying experiences, and don't be afraid to contact a staff member should you need assistance!

     

    We thank you for your application, and wish you well!

     

    Happy adventures!

     

  10. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello!

    Your app is..

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    Everything here is solid for the most part. Your definitions are correct and the backstory is good.

     

    However.

     

    We require some proof that you know more about the lore than one centralized locations. If you could provide

    one or two more references to the lore of the server within your bio, you'd be set.

     

    For further assistance, you can join the new player discord! Here: https://discord.gg/UUYCqW

     

    Inversely I'm available on the forums at almost all times!

     

    Thank you and I hope to hear from you soon!

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