Keefy

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https://imgur.com/dbXYF58 I have more I can add here when I'm at a PC It's a Hareven. He's usually grinning and rather chipper.

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Hareven pauses among his traveling, turning a ear to the sky before humming to himself, rolling his neck and sinking his heels into soil with renewed vigor. "I hear somet'in interestin' in t'e air.." He'd mumble to himself incoherently before breaking into a soft grin at what the future might hold.

Hareven just starts laughing uncontrollably, freaking out bystanders "''ow feckin adorable is t'is? Ignorant child learn 'ow t' write or somet'in'?" He'd chuckle moving on to pay attention to something that mattered

Hareven looks around. Sees alot of people talking to thenselves today. "Fuckin' 'ell I though' ah was t'e crazy one..."

Before anyone else can comment on her past, I will bring up a defined point. People change. I've been with Jade through some big changes in her life and she consulted me before applying to any teams. I told her to try for one that wouldn't take time away from things she loves and force her into stressful situations. Old jade wouldn't have listened. But she did and I'm immensely proud of her. I believe she can be a great addition, becomes very dedicated to what she's asked to do without question. +1

Hareven would sit up from his particular bush of the evening, itching leafs from his hair before pushing himself to a stand. "Maybe I should check on some old friends" He'd muse as he meandered onto the roads..

Hareven just squints for awhile, before slowly folding and pocketing a copy, humming to himself as he meanders along.

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I appreciate your enthusiasm buddy but there are already some glaring issues in this. Try to contact the previous lore writer first by the way. While Thumper encouraging you is nice, his status as a FM doesn't really solidify it as "permission" An example of one of these glaring issues is "Archdruid can remove curse". Buddy Archdruid is a rank people are voted into, not a tier of strength. My own persona was one at tier 2-3. That has nothing to do with magical capacity for anything. So I'd take a step back, contact @The Redneck and some others from the feral iteration that failed because it was a unholy mess oocly and icly, and see what you can come up with as a group as opposed to a stand alone rewrite that has errors littered around, as well as just seemingly being a combat buff. Sorry, but a -1.