Keefy

Welcome to Lotc! We hope you enjoy your stay with us!
Your application show you do have a fundamental understanding of basic lore but I recommend you check out our Wikipedia and assorted forum pages.
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We also suggest and encourage the making of an actual forum account, so that we may in the future help you more if you should need it.

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Hello! And thank you for applying to Lotc!

I regretfully have to deny this application.

First off please create a Forums Account for further reapplications so we may guide you through the process better.

Secondly this is fantastic writing but you've really not given any insight to the persona you are applying with.
Please give us more insight to the person you wish to play, not the history of how she came to be please!
Third, you cannot join as the commander to anything. You're coming to be as a person that is a clean slate in terms of ranks

within Atlas, and furthermore there isn't a Kha army in existence currently.

So please, as stated before, create a Forum Account so next time you apply we can assist you better through the application process.

You can also join the New Player Discord here: https://discord.gg/8Humzq

From there we can assist you with your application even more, and help you get started within the server proper.

Thank you, and we hope to see you soon within Lotc!

Congrats! You've been accepted onto Lotc!

You will be whitelisted shortly, in the meantime please consider reading up on our Wikipedia and the forums.

If you have any questions feel free to ask myself here on the forums, Discord at Keefy#0001, or on the New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/AndxwF

I hope you enjoy your time on Lotc! Have a great adventure!

You have been denied, but don't fret. You can always try again.

For a better chance at getting accepted, please make an account on the forums and Re-Apply with it instead, allowing us to review and help you correct future attempts.

For now, please correct your meta-gaming definition for your next application.

We of the Application Team also have a New-Player Discord you can join here: https://discord.gg/AndxwF

You can also reach me on Discord at Keefy#0001!

We within it can assist you with any questions or concerns you have!

Thank you, and we hope to see you soon here on Lotc!

You've been accepted onto Lotc! Please refer to the wikipedia and the forums for more information on the server and plot out where you'll go from here!

We also have a New Player Discord as listed here: https://discord.gg/AndxwF

And a regular discord as listed here: https://discord.gg/4EPpWX

If you require any help or assistance feel free to contact me on discord at Keefy#0001.

Please enjoy your stay on Lotc! We hope you have a great adventure!

Let's begin at the top.

-The year is incorrect. You're roughly 350 years ahead of when the era is.

-There isnt enough lore reference.

Your definitions for powergaming and metagaming are acceptable.

The skin needs to be overhauled. That is just a basic Steven skin with a ramen bowl. It needs to match the character description.

I'd put more research into your character, there are oriental cultures within human rp you can go with as opposed to just appearing from Japan.

These are the hard points that need to be changed. Please make a forum account and reapply with that in you wish to proceed

in trying to join the Lotc Community.

Thank you and have a nice night/day.

Please join the new player discord here!

https://discord.gg/eJMMPP

 

Please enjoy your time in this community!

Please flesh out the definitions to metagaming and powergaming.

Thank you, and please join the New Player Discord!

https://discord.gg/eJMMPP

 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Krugmar
 

You can also look into lore involving humans to see if anything would match up.

 

For humans relating to arid regions I'd look into Farfolk typically.