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Myleres

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    Wonderful application! When you log onto the server ask a community team member to whitelist you in the wandering soul chat. Our whitelisting bot has unfortunately been having some issues lately. Again, I’d recommend checking out the New Player Discord and the New Player Guide.

    If you’re looking for someone to show you around the server and it’s commands when you log on, just type ‘/creq I need a Wilven Monk!’ and a community team member will be able to help you soon. I linked you a few settlement guides that would be useful to read in the above message, too. I cannot wait to see you on the server!

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    ➤ Try to include at least one or two faults in your character’s personality traits, other than him being somewhat narcissistic and lazy. Remember that dynamic, well-rounded characters also have their imperfections!

    Other than that, your applications was really well done! I’d like to advise you, however, that roleplay takes place in third person on our server. There is no need to change your response to the roleplay scenario in your application, however, as it was great! If you need any help making the above change, check out the New Player Discord or reach out to me directly at Lumii#0001.

    It’d also be beneficial if you check out some of the human settlement guides. Oren, Rubern, and Curon are just three examples!

    I wish you the best of luck, and can’t wait to see you on the server soon!

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    Great application! You will be accepted into the server in the next few moments. There has been a bug with our whitelisting bot lately, though, so just ask a Community Team member in the wandering soul chat when you log on to whitelist you manually!

    In the meantime, I’d recommend checking out the New Player Discord and New Player Guide. You’re also welcome to take a look at some of the settlement guides for the human nations. KaedrinHaense, and Rubern are just three examples of human nations your character may want to visit!

    If you want a tour around the server and a walkthrough of some of the commands, type ‘/creq I need a Wilven Monk!’ and a community team member will be around to help you as soon as they can.

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    Wonderful application! You will be accepted into the server in the next few moments. There has been a bug with our whitelisting bot lately, though, so just ask a Community Team member in the wandering soul chat when you log on to whitelist you manually!

    In the meantime, I’d recommend checking out the New Player Discord and New Player Guide. You’re also welcome to take a look at some of the settlement guides for the human nations. Kaedrin, Haense, and Rubern are just three examples of human nations your character may want to visit!

    If you want a tour around the server and a walkthrough of some of the commands, type ‘/creq I need a Wilven Monk!’ and a community team member will be around to help you as soon as they can.

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    There are quite a few issues with your application. These are as follows:

    ➤ Both your powergaming and metagaming definitions are incorrect. Make sure you refresh yourself on these terms by reading our wiki, then rewrite them in your own words!

    ➤ When responding to the roleplay scenario, make sure to include both an action and some dialogue. How would your character respond in the given situation? 

    ➤ Please make two references to the server’s lore in your biography. This can be the mentioning of a place or event that has happened. Our lore can be found on our wiki.

    ➤ The backstory of having ‘orcs kill your parents’ is incredibly overdone and cliche. Try to spice up your character’s background a little bit.

    ➤ Try and clean up the grammar and sentence structure within your application a little bit. Being able to communicate effectively is crucial on LOTC, and will directly influence yours and other players experiences.

     

    You may reapply at any time, assuming the above changes are made. If you’re needing any assistance, check out the New Player Discord or reach out to me directly at Lumii#0001.

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    ➤ Your metagaming definition isn’t exactly what we’re looking for. Check out the definition we have on our wiki, and then explain it in your own words.

     

    Other than that, your application looks really good! That is a wonderful drawing of your character, too. If you need any help with making the above change, check out the New Player Discord or reach out to me directly, at Lumii#0001.

    If you’ve got time, I’d also recommend checking out the settlement guides for some of the human cities. Seyam, Kaedrin, and Rubern are just three examples of some of the human nations!

    You will have twenty four hours to make the above changes. I cannot wait to see you on the server! ? 

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    You failed to make the above changes in the given time span. You may reapply at any time.

    Please refer to the message above and ensure you complete the changes for your next application.

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    ➤ Your skin doesn't fit with what is typical about snow elves. Your character seems to be wearing ripped jeans, as well as having purple hair. Please update your skin to fit with the fantasy setting that we have on the server. Snow elves typically have white hair. If you are needing assistance with a skin, check our our Skin Archive.

    ➤ Characters may not begin as a noble/princess. Please edit your biography to adhere to this.

    ➤ We ask of you two include two references to our server’s lore within your biography. This can be found upon our wiki. These references can be the names of places, events, or anything along those lines. I’d recommend checking out both the pages for Snow Elves and Fenn.

    ➤ Please change your character’s name to fit with traditional elven names. 

    ➤ Your powergaming definition is a little bit vague. Could you elaborate on what exactly you mean? 

     

    You have twenty four hours to complete the above changes. Should you need any assistance, reach out to me directly on discord at Lumii#0001, or join the New Player Discord.

    I also think it would be beneficial if you check out the settlement guides for both elves, and Fenn (the home of the snow elves).

     

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    You failed to make the above changes within the given time frame. You may reapply at any time.

    Please ensure you include the changes listed in the message above. If you are needing a refresher on what was asked of you, it was the following: 

     

    ➤Characters cannot start with any knowledge of magic or otherworldly creatures. Please edit your character biography to adhere to this.

    ➤Your skin is not suitable for our server. Please edit your skin to better suit the server and it’s theme. Additionally, you mention that your character is both red and grey haired. Please update your skin to both fit your physical description and the theme of the server.

    ➤ Your reply to the roleplay scenario was good, but we ask that you please include an action too! You’ve fleshed out what your character would say, but how would your character react in this situation? What would they be doing with their hands, their face, or their body? Integrating both actions and dialogue into your emotes is crucial on LOTC.

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    This is clearly a meme application with many glaring issues. Please read both the application requirements (which you can find on the top of this page) and take a glance at our wiki so you can better understand what this server is about.

    If you’re needing any assistance writing a new application, check out the New Player Discord

    You may reapply at any time, assuming next time you apply for a real character within our setting.

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    ➤Characters cannot start with any knowledge of magic or otherworldly creatures. Please edit your character biography to adhere to this.

    ➤Your skin is not suitable for our server. Please edit your skin to better suit the server and it’s theme. Additionally, you mention that your character is both red and grey haired. Please update your skin to both fit your physical description and the theme of the server.

    ➤ Your reply to the roleplay scenario was good, but we ask that you please include an action too! You’ve fleshed out what your character would say, but how would your character react in this situation? What would they be doing with their hands, their face, or their body? Integrating both actions and dialogue into your emotes is crucial on LOTC.

     

    You will have twenty-four hours to complete the above changes. If you need any assistance with this, I’d recommend checking out the New Player Discord or reaching out to me directly at Lumii#0001

    In the meantime, I’d recommend checking out the settlement guide for Sutica, as well as the general hub for Human settlement guides. These will help you better understand some of the nations you’ll visit on the server.

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    Wonderful application! The bot we use to implement players has been acting a little wonky lately. Once you log onto the server, if you are still a wandering soul, just drop a message into the wandering soul chat and we’ll be able to accept you manually!

    In the meantime, I’d recommend taking a look at both the New Player Discord and the New Player Guide. When you’re in game and accepted onto the server, you can also type “/creq I need a Wilven Monk!” if you’d like someone to help guide you through the basics of the server. If you’d rather ask questions in a more private setting, you can reach out to me on discord at Lumii#0001.

    Since you’re playing a human, it might also be beneficial to check out some of the settlement guides for your race. Oren, Kaedrin, Curon, and Rubern are among some of the biggest human nations! If you’re looking for roleplay, check out one of them.

    I cannot wait to see you on the server!

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    Great application! I’d recommend checking out the New Player Discord and the New Player Guide before you join the server. Or, reach out to me directly at Lumii#0001. Again, I’d recommend checking out the settlement guide for Urguan and the general hub for all settlements. Additionally, if you would like someone to guide you through the basics of how the server works, just type “/creq I need a Wilven Monk!” Otherwise, you’re all set! I hope to see you on the server soon!

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    This was a wonderful application! I’d recommend joining the New Player Discord and checking out the New Player guide. Both are infinitely helpful when trying to integrate into the world of LOTC! If you have any questions, you can also reach out to me directly on discord at Lumii#0001

    Once you log onto the server, if you’re looking for someone to run you through the basics, just type “/creq I need a Wilven Monk!” This is not necessary, but don’t feel bad if you need any help!

    Finally, I’d recommend checking out some of the human settlement guides, like Rubern, Kaedrin, Oren, or Curon.

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    Wow! This was an amazing application! If you’re requiring any more assistance, you can either join the New Player Discord or check out the New Player Guide. You’re also welcome to reach out to me directly on discord at Lumii#0001 if you wish.

    Once you get online, if you’d like someone to walk you through the basics of the server, just type “/creq I need a Wilven Monk!” This is not a necessity, but it can be nice to have someone guide you around! Otherwise, check out some of the human settlement guides, like Oren, Haense, Curon, or Kaedrin! 

    I cannot wait to see you on the server!

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    ➤ In your “personality traits/quirks” section, try to include at least one fault/weakness of your character. Remember that at the end of the day, your character isn’t perfect! They’ll have their shortcomings.

    ➤ In your response to the roleplay scenario, try to include an action alongside the dialogue. What would your character be portraying through their body language/actions?

     

    Apart from that, your application looks great! You will have twenty four hours to complete the above changes.

    If you require any assistance with the changes, we have plenty of wonderful people within the New Player Discord. Or, you could reach out to me directly at Lumii#0001. I hope to see you on the server soon! In the meantime, while you’re working on the changes, you can also check out the settlement guide for Urguan, or the general hub for all settlements.

     

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