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Myleres

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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been:

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    You recently applied for the server, and were instructed that you may reapply in six hours. Currently, only one hour of that time has passed. You will need to wait five more hours if you wish to be accepted.

    Additionally, here is what you need to fix with your application:

     

    -Your powergaming definition is incorrect. Please update it and include an example of powergaming.

    -Please reference the LOTC lore at least once in your biography. It can be found here.

    -Remember to make sure your character has a few weaknesses, and is not incredibly overpowered in comparison to others characters. This would be considered powergaming.

     

    You may reapply in five hours. Any application before this time is up will be instantly denied.

    For reference, here is your last application which was denied a little over an hour ago: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/apply/new/denied/venathrax-r760/

     

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been:

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    You had a very solid application, and I am incredibly sorry for denying this! You only had one issue you need to fix, but unfortunately cannot alleviate this issue because you are a guest account. I would recommend creating a forum account so you can edit your application next time around! As for the issue, here is what you will need to fix if you wish to be accepted next time you apply:

     

    -You must reference the canon LOTC lore at least once in your biography. This can be done by mentioning a place or event that has impacted your character, or any other way that you wish. You can find the canon lore here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

     

    Other than that, your application is really good. 

    You may reapply in six hours.

    If you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message, or join the new player discord with this link: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  3. Your application has been placed on:

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    -Your character shares a name with Richard J Grayson, a character popular in DC Comic books. Not only that, but there seems to be numerous overlaps between your two characters (the assassin backstory, anti-social character, good with small daggers, etc). This has led me to believe that your character is not unique, and thus not allowed to play on the server. Please make a new biography, with an original character. Your biography does not need to be as long as it was, either,(great job, though). One or two paragraphs will suffice, but make sure you reference the canon LOTC lore, like you have in this biography.

    -You can not mention that anyone close to you has killed the King of a nation or kingdom. This roleplay will have to be done in game. Please do not include this if you choose to apply again.

     

    Otherwise, your application was rather well done. Both of  your definitions are correct. 

    You will have 24 hours to make the above changes.

    If you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  4. Your application has been:

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    There is unfortunately some problems with your application. Since you are a guest account, you may not edit your application directly. I would suggest making a forum account. If you choose to apply again, you will be given a 24 hour grace period to make any edits needed to your application. 

    Here's what you'll need to fix up if you decide to apply again:

     

    -You will need to change your skin. Currently, you have a skin that is identical to Jhin from League of Legends.

    -You may not say that it was your ancestors that discovered Atlas. There was a large event-line in Axios that led up to it's discovery. You will need to change this in your biography.

    -Your character seems a little overpowered. I would suggest toning down the strength of your character; as you described them they are both an 'ultimate killer' and a 'natural intellectual.' How can your character be this skilled of a combatant if he has a physical weakness? 

    -Your powergaming definition is not quite what we are looking for. Please rewrite the definition and provide an example of an emote that would be considered powergaming.

     

    You may reapply in six hours. If you have any questions about your application, feel free to send me a message.

    If you require any assistance, please don't hesitate to join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  5. Your application has been placed on:

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    -Belvitz is on the mainland. Travel by boat is very unlikely if your character was to live in Belvitz. Additionally, it does not have a king. 

    -Your definitions are incorrect. Please fix these, and include an example of each.

    -Why did the king specifically select your character? What makes him special from others?

    -What war was your character sent to 'end?' There has, thus far, been no wars on Atlas.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the above changes. 

    If you require any additional assistance, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

     

     

     

  6. Your application has been:

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    Unfortunately, since you are a guest account, you cannot edit your application to make the appropriate changes. If you decide to apply again, you will need to make the following changes:

     

    -Your powergaming definition is not quite what we are looking for. Please add some more detail, and provide an example of an emote that would be considered powergaming.

    -Your character cannot be 18 and be born in Aegis. They would be much, much older (around the age of 300 years old). Aegis was the first realm on LOTC. We are currently in the realm of Atlas.

     

    You may reapply in six hours. I would recommend making a forum account so you can make edits (if needed) to your application.

    If you need any assistance or have any questions, feel free to either send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

     

     

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been:

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    Great application! I had a joy reading it, and I can tell you have a very clear understanding of both powergaming and metagaming.

    You will be implemented into the server shortly. In the meantime, I would recommend joining the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

    If you have any questions, feel free to shoot me a message! I hope you enjoy your time on LOTC!

  8. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been placed on:

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    -Please provide an example of something that would be considered metagaming.

     

    Your application looks very solid other than this one small issue. You will have 24 hours to make the appropriate changes.

    If you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

    Once you are finished editing, please send me a message or comment on this application.

  9. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been placed on:

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    -Your powergaming definition is not quite what we are looking for. Please provide an example of an emote that would be considered powergaming, or reword your definition.

     

    Other than that, your application looks good to go. You have 24 hours to make the above change.

    When finished, please either send me a message or comment on this application.

    Additionally, if you would like any assistance, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  10. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been placed on:

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    -Your definitions are not quite what we are looking for. Please provide more detail, or an example, to prove you understand what both of these terms mean and that they are detrimental to roleplay.

     

    Other than that, your application looks good to go! You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

    If you need any assistance in doing so, please send me a message, or feel free to join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

     

  11. Your application has been:

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    You will be implemented into the server shortly. If you would like me to get you in contact with some human settlements so you can find a community to roleplay in, let me know! In the meantime, I'd recommend joining the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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