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Myleres

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  1. Your application has been:

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    Unfortunately, since you are a guest account, you cannot edit your application. I'd recommend making a forum account so you can edit your application if you need to make any changes! Here's what you'll need to fix up for next time you apply: 

     

    -Your definitions aren't entirely correct. Please update them, and provide an example of both powergaming and metagaming.

    -You need to make reference to the LOTC lore in your biography. This can be done by mentioning a place, or event that has impacted your character. If you can find another way to reference the lore, though, feel free! You can check out our lore on the wiki, which can be found here.

    -I'd recommend adding a bit more depth to your biography. As it stands, it is currently very bland and quite cliche.

    -Your interesting facts section are just character traits. Please make them a little more interesting.

     

    You may reapply in six hours.

    If you need any additional assistance, I'd recommend joining the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

     

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been:

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    You will be whitelisted shortly. I spoke to you in game about the age thing. Just type /persona age <new age> if you want to change the age of your character.

    I'd recommend joining the new player discord if you need any additional assistance: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  3. Your application has been:

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    Your application was really good, but you forgot to include a reference to the LOTC lore in your biography. Check out the wiki here, and include something from it (easiest would be a place or an event that impacted your character), in your biography. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

    You may reapply in three hours.

    I'd recommend joining the new player discord if you need any help. https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  4. Your application has been placed on:

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    -You will need permission from someone currently part of the Torena seed if you wish to have your character part of it when you join the server. I will need proof that you have permission from a player within the seed.

    -If your parents are still in Linandria, they would be dead. Linandria was the city on Axios, the previous map of LOTC. There was a major disaster which deemed the isle it was situated on uninhabitable. I would recommend checking out Caras Eldar, the current Wood Elven city.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

    If you need any additional assistance, please join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

    When done editing, either message me or comment down below.

  5. Your application has been placed on:

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    -Please provide an example of both powergaming and metagaming. This is so we can confirm you know what these things are and why they are detrimental to roleplay.

    -Please make reference to the LOTC lore at least once in your biography. This can be done by mentioning a place or event that has impacted your character. You can find the lore here.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

    I'd recommend joining the new player discord if you need any additional help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  6. Your application has been:

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    I would like to preface this by saying you had a very solid application. There are just two minor things you need to change for next time around. Unfortunately, since you are a guest account, you cannot make any edits to your application, otherwise this wouldn't have been an instant denial. Anyways, here's what you'll need to fix for next time around:

    -Your character may not be born into any family of nobility. Currently, your character is born into a family of fallen nobles. This is unfortunately not allowed.

    -Your powergaming definition is incorrect in certain places. Specifically, this portion is incorrect: ' Roleplaying with people and following the ruleset of the RP

    This part of your powergaming definition is correct, though: For example "stabs in the neck" which instantly kills the player and gives them no chance to do any other actions. 

    Please edit the incorrect portion to fit with the correct definition, which can be found here.

     

    You may reapply in one hour.

    If you need any additional help, either message me or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been placed on:

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    -Both your powergaming and metagaming definitions could use a bit more work. Please update them to be correct in the context of LOTC! You can find a definition for metagaming here, and a definition for powergaming here.

    -Why exactly did lightning striking your character cause her to  be named 'The Cursed Elf' ? Please be aware that you may not apply to the server with any curses or types of magical abilities, as you will need to do the appropriate roleplay in game to acquire such things.

    -You need to reference the lore at least once in your biography.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

    If you need any help, either message me or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

    When done editing, please send me a message or comment on this application.

  8. Your application has been:

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    You failed to make the required changes in the needed amount of time. You'll need to fix these up for next time:

    -Your definitions for both powergaming and metagaming could use a bit more work. Please update them to the correct definitions. You may use definitions from online sources, but make sure they are both valid for the context of LOTC, and written in your own words.

    -You still mentioned Christianity in your Character Description. Please fix this for next time you apply.

     

    You may reapply in three hours.

    If you need any assistance, feel free to either message me or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

     

  9. Your application has been placed on:

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    -Your definitions could both use a bit more work. Please update them to the correct definitions. You may use definitions from online sources, but make sure they are both valid for the context of LOTC, and written in your own words.

    -The closest things to vampires on LOTC are Strigae. You can read up on them here. I would suggest changing vampires to Strigae in your biography.

    -You'll need to make reference to the LOTC lore at least once in your biography. You can read up on it on our wiki, which is here.

    -Christianity is not a thing on LOTC, although some religions take inspiration from it. You might want to check out Canonism, or The Red Faith.

    -I cannot find any mention to Varith in our lore. I don't believe it exists in LOTC's universe. Please change this to a city that you may find on LOTC.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

    If you need any help in doing so, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

     

  10. Your application has been:

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    I consulted a lore moderator and it turns out your height actually is fine, so I apologize for that discrepancy. However, you still should make another reference to the lore with a more up-to-date city or event, as Laurelin has not been around for hundreds of years.

    I recommend joining the new player discord if you need any assistance.  https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

    You may reapply in three hours.

     

  11. Your application has been:

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    You failed to make the needed changes in the time given. Here's what you'll need to fix next time you apply: 

    -Your powergaming definition is incorrect.

    -Kharajyr are not werewolves. I'd suggest reading up on them here.

    -Your character is extremely overpowered. You mentioned your character has 'perfect vision, can talk to any type of living being, and can kill orcs or any other type of threat.' Please tone down your character, and add some weaknesses.

    You may reapply in three hours.

    I'd recommend joining the new player discord if you need any assistance: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

     

  12. Changed Status to Under Review

    Your application has been placed on:

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    -Your powergaming definition is not quite what we are looking for. Your example is correct, but the actual definition part is not entirely correct. I suggest you reword this to the appropriate defintion.

    -I'd also like to remind you to apply the skin to your minecraft character, as the current, blue striped-skin you have will not be suitable. You will not be denied if you don't do this, but you may be punished in game for not having a suitable skin.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

    If you need any help, feel free to message me or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

    Best of luck!

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