Myleres

Your application has been placed on:

-Your character is extremely short for their race! 4'5" is a rather unusual height for a wood elf. They would normally be taller unless affected by a genetic defect. I'd recommend changing your height to something more common for wood elves, which is somewhere within the 5-6 foot range.

-I'd recommend making another reference to the lore in your biography, as Laurelin has not been around for hundreds of years.

You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

If you need any help in doing so, feel free to either send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

When done making the changes, please either send me a message or comment on this application.

Your application has been accepted:

Awesome application! You will be whitelisted shortly.

If you need any help, feel free to join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Your application has been:

Wonderful application! You will be implemented into the server shortly.

In the meantime, I would recommend checking out the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Your application has been:

You failed to make the needed changes in the allotted amount of time. You will need to fix them for next time you apply.

You may reapply in 3 hours. 

I would recommend joining the new player discord if you need any help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Your application has been placed on:

-Dark dwarves come from the doomforge bloodline. You can find all of that lore here.

-You cannot mention that a magic has not been found yet. I would recommend either leaving magic out of your application, or reading up on it on our wiki which can be found here. Your character may not know any magic when you apply to the server.

-Your character description doesn't make much sense. It just says 'this guy...' Please create an actual character description.

-Your image, and skin, are not sufficient for a dark dwarf. They have dark skin and very red eyes.

-You will need a reason for the scars on your head. They cannot just have magically appeared there.

-Why did your father terrified of you? What made your character special?

-You mentioned your character has a hoodie. Hoodies do not exist in LOTC, they are much too modern.

-The current year on the server is 1659. Your character would not exist if he was born in 1990.

-Kal'Urguan is a city in Aegis, the first map on LOTC. Your character would be significantly older if he was born here (upwards of three hundred years old)! I would recommend checking out some cities in Atlas or Axios, as they are the most recent maps.

-Dwarves are generally strong. Why couldn't your character chop a tree at the age of eight, but others could?

-Your metagaming definition is not entirely correct. Although it is a correct example, please reword your definition to apply to a broader variety of metagaming.

You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

If you need help, feel free to join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

When finished making the above changes, either send me a message or comment on this application.

Best of luck.

Your application has been:

You will be whitelisted shortly. In the meantime, I would recommend joining the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

I hope you enjoy your time on LOTC! Best of luck!

Your application has been:

-Your username has a space in it. Minecraft usernames cannot have spaces in them.

- You must reference the lore at least once in your biography. The lore can be found here.

-Your definitions are incorrect. You cannot write 'I don't know.' You will need to fully understand these two terms to be able to play on the server.

-Your character must be at least eighteen (18) years of age to be accepted.

-Please choose a more traditional medieval name that fits with our server. You will need to update your skin to a medieval one, too.

-Why are all the highlanders scared of you? It seems illogical that they would ostracize someone without a specific reason.

-Please update your interesting facts section to be full sentences.

You may reapply in six hours.

If you need any help making the above changes, either send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Your application has been:

Awesome application! I had a joy reading your biography, and am sure your character will be very interesting to roleplay with on the server!

You will be whitelisted shortly. In the meantime, I'd recommend joining the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Best of luck! I hope you enjoy your time on LOTC!

Your application has been placed on:

-Your definitions could still use a little work. Please provide an example of metagaming, and reword your powergaming definition. You can cut off someones arm, there just needs to be appropriate roleplay leading up to it, and you need to give them the chance to dodge/struggle/fight back. 

-Your character may not apply to the server knowing any magic. You will need to do the appropriate roleplay on the server to acquire such magic.

-Please make a reference to the lore; this can be done by mentioning a place your character has grown up or visited, or an event that has impacted your character in some way. Simply mentioning 'Atlas' is not enough. Our lore can be found here.

You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

If you need any assistance, either message me or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

When finished making the above changes, either comment on this application or message me.

Your application has been:

Fantastic application! You will be whitelisted shortly.

In the meantime, I would recommend creating a forum account. If your character one day happens to pursue a magic, or you would like to roleplay a creature, you will need to create an application on the forums (that you can't make as a guest)! It is not required, but I would strongly urge you to. The forums are an integral part of experiencing LOTC.

I would also recommend joining the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Your application has been:

Unfortunately, I cannot find any reference to 'spirit stones' within our lore. Additionally, your character may not have any curses/magics when applying to the server. You will have to do the appropriate roleplay in game to acquire these things.

Other than that, your application looks good to go! You will just need to find a more conventional way to explain how your character lost his memory.

If you need any help, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You may reapply in six hours.

Your application has been:

You will be implemented into the server shortly. I would recommend joining the new player discord in the meantime: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Once again, I will stress that this server is heavily text-based. English is the main language and you will need to be able to communicate effectively using it to gain the best experience possible.

Your application has been:

You will be implemented into the server shortly. Great application! If you require any additional assistance, feel free to join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Best of luck! I hope you enjoy your time on LOTC! 

Your application has been placed on:

-LOTC is primarily text-based, and the chat is integral to getting the full experience. Please go clean up your sentences and use proper words. For example, 'hurted' and 'proticolarity' are not English words. Also, you seem to have called your character a 'he' in some places, and a 'she' in others. Please choose one of these, or refer to them as 'they' all throughout your biography.

-Although not necessary to be accepted, I would recommend dropping the shoes on your skin. Traditionally, halflings don't use shoes. It is completely fine if you would like to keep your skin the way it currently is, but this may affect roleplay for your character.

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. 

If you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Best of luck!

Your application has been placed on:

-Ker'Wolves must be domesticated through roleplay. It is fine to say your parents used to own one, but please make a note that your character currently does not have a Ker'Wolf.

-The Kingdom of Marna is not an elven nation. It is strictly human, and most elves would not be allowed to live there. It is very unlikely that your character would've been born in Marna. If you want a place that dark elves traditionally live in or are born in, I'd recommend reading up on the Warhawkes.

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. When finished, please either send me a message or comment on this application.

If you need any help, feel free to ask! You can also join the new player discord if you require any additional assistance: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Your application has been:

You will be implemented into the server shortly. I saw you had joined the new player discord, but am still obligated to link it anyways: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

I hope you enjoy your time on LOTC!

Your application has been placed on:

-Your powergaming definition is not quite what we are looking for. Please reword your definition and include an example of an emote that would be considered powergaming.

Other than that, you had a very solid application. You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

If you need any help, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Once you are finished making the needed changes, please either send me a message or comment on this application.

Your application has been:

Wonderful application! You will be implemented into the server shortly.

In the meantime, I would recommend joining the new player discord if you require any additional assistance. https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Your application has been:

You will need to fix up several things if you wish to get accepted.

-Plagiarism is unacceptable. If you do it again, your account will receive a temporary ban from applying. Please write the definitions in your own words. They are both wrong, and you will need to write them again, and include a definition.

-Please expand upon your interesting facts section.

-Please reference the lore at least once in your bio. It can be found here.

-Please expand upon your biography.

-I'd recommend getting a more medieval themed skin, although yours should work fine.

You may reapply in six hours. You can join the new player discord if you require any additional help. https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Your application has been:

There are a few reasons why your application got denied. If you wish to be accepted, you will need to fix these issues next time you apply:

- Please expand upon your metagaming definition. Perhaps provide an example, or reword it.

- Please expand upon your biography. This server is heavily text-based, so you will need to know how to use capitalization, punctuation, and format proper sentences. Please try to fix this up.

You may reapply in six hours. If you need any help, either send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw 

Your application has been:

Welcome to the server! Some things you should note is that Atlas is our current continent. If you wanted to access a land far away from Atlas, you'd run into an abandon continent. Currently, there is no way for player to do this in roleplay. It is not that big of an issue, so I won't bother denying you over it. 

I also noticed you copy and pasted an application you wrote for another server to use it here. This is okay, but the lands/information your character gained on the other server, will most likely not be valid here.

I hope you have a fun time on LOTC! I'd recommend joining the new player discord if you have any other questions. https://discord.gg/eySYjqw