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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:
Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!
You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly.
Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:
- Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are not substantial enough. Please provide more information, and perhaps an example of each, in order to solidify your definition. The best place to find accurate information about these concepts is on our Wiki, so have a look there!
- This is not a requirement, however I will mention that it is much better to role-play characters with more dynamic backstories - simply 'Mary Sue'-esque backstories, such as having both parents die in tragic circumstances and then vowing to become a knight is a common trope that does not always translate well into roleplay. It's not against the rules, so I will not penalise your application on this basis, however I do recommend that you consider a more original and nuanced origin story for your character, in order to get the best RP experience out of LOTC.
Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to.
If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!
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Changed Status to Denied
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the following reason/s.
- Your application overall shows little effort in meeting the application criteria standards. Please carefully read the information provided to you upon the apply page, as well as what is available on the forums and the wiki. This will help you to structure an application that can be adequately reviewed.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC.
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Changed Status to Under Review
Congratulations! Your application has been:
You should now be whitelisted onto the main server (MC.LOTC.CO). You will spawn into the Cloud Temple, and will be able to explore the world of Almaris through roleplay! If you need any help or have any questions, you can reach me through /msg Ivoreyy in game - or if I am not online, you are able to make a /creq [question], and one of our Community Team Members will be able to help out.
I also highly recommend that you join the LoTC discord [HERE], as this will allow you to connect with other roleplayers and nation leaders. The server has channels that advertise RP groups and events, as well as being a platform for players to interact with the server staff.
Furthermore, our [NEW PLAYER HUB] has lots of helpful links and information to get you started on the server. There is a lot to learn, but server players and CT members are always happy to help out!
Happy roleplaying!
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Hello! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the following reason/s.
- Both of your definitions, as well as your character card and biography, do not feature a character able to be roleplayed on the server. Please carefully consider each aspect of the application, and develop a character with more depth and backstory - using some pre existing LOTC lore.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC.
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Changed Status to Under Review
Congratulations! Your application has been:
You should now be whitelisted onto the main server (MC.LOTC.CO). You will spawn into the Cloud Temple, and will be able to explore the world of Almaris through roleplay! If you need any help or have any questions, you can reach me through /msg Ivoreyy in game - or if I am not online, you are able to make a /creq [question], and one of our Community Team Members will be able to help out.
I also highly recommend that you join the LoTC discord [HERE], as this will allow you to connect with other roleplayers and nation leaders. The server has channels that advertise RP groups and events, as well as being a platform for players to interact with the server staff.
Furthermore, our [NEW PLAYER HUB] has lots of helpful links and information to get you started on the server. There is a lot to learn, but server players and CT members are always happy to help out!
Happy roleplaying!
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Congratulations! Your application has been:
You should now be whitelisted onto the main server (MC.LOTC.CO). You will spawn into the Cloud Temple, and will be able to explore the world of Almaris through roleplay! If you need any help or have any questions, you can reach me through /msg Ivoreyy in game - or if I am not online, you are able to make a /creq [question], and one of our Community Team Members will be able to help out.
I also highly recommend that you join the LoTC discord [HERE], as this will allow you to connect with other roleplayers and nation leaders. The server has channels that advertise RP groups and events, as well as being a platform for players to interact with the server staff.
Furthermore, our [NEW PLAYER HUB] has lots of helpful links and information to get you started on the server. There is a lot to learn, but server players and CT members are always happy to help out!
Happy roleplaying!
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Congratulations! Your application has been:
You should now be whitelisted onto the main server (MC.LOTC.CO). You will spawn into the Cloud Temple, and will be able to explore the world of Almaris through roleplay! If you need any help or have any questions, you can reach me through /msg Ivoreyy in game - or if I am not online, you are able to make a /creq [question], and one of our Community Team Members will be able to help out.
As you have applied as a Goblin, I have compiled a few suggestions for nations and/or groups that you may like to be a part of. One of the best ways to enjoy lotc is through making connections with other players as part of roleplay groups, so I do recommend that you have a look into these!
Orcish Nations:
The Nation of the Eternal Uzg
Formerly known as the Rexdom of Krugmar, the National of the Eternal Uzg is the home to the world's Orcs and is founded on Krug's Code which deems that "Might makes right." This means that all disputes and political affairs are settled in the arena by a klomp, or a duel. The orcs speak their own dialect commonly known as "The Blah" and they worship the Spirits who represent the elements, ancestors, and parts of culture such as hunting. They often demand a tribute from visitors and are eager to take sides in a war so as to sate their curse of blood lust. Clans make up the nation, each clan having their own culture and unique members, and any Orc is expected to find a clan that they will stay with for the duration of their entire life.
You can find some information about the nation [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Nation’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
I also highly recommend that you join the LoTC discord [HERE], as this will allow you to connect with other roleplayers and nation leaders. The server has channels that advertise RP groups and events, as well as being a platform for players to interact with the server staff.
Furthermore, our [NEW PLAYER HUB] has lots of helpful links and information to get you started on the server. There is a lot to learn, but server players and CT members are always happy to help out!
Happy roleplaying!
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:
Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!
You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly.
Before I can whitelist you, the following change/s need to be made to your application:
- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions needs a few small tweaks. I just need you to expand on your definitions a little more, and consider using examples to solidify your understanding. The wiki is a great resource to use for information.
Once you have corrected these issue/s, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to.
If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:
Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!
You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly.
Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:
- Your Biography needs a few small tweaks. Firstly, please make sure to write in third person - as that is how role-play is carried out on LOTC. You are also not allowed to have any prior knowledge of magic (this includes druidism), and thus cannot have previously had, or currently have, any skill or ability relating to practicing magic.
- Your Character Profile has a few edits to be made. Firstly, a wood elf should not be blonde - they typically have dark brown/black hair, due to the nature of their race. You can either change your race to a High Elf (Who better resembles the physical description you've supplied), or make these changes accordingly.
- Your Skin does not quite meet the standards of LOTC skins. Typically, LOTC has less 'anime' style skins, with a bigger focus on realism for roleplay purposes. Please edit or find a new skin that better fits this - if you need help, I can link you to our skin archive!
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks! Just be sure to write that one in third person too. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
- Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.
Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to.
If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hello again! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the 24 Hour time bracket expiring for changes to be made.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC!
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
We hope to see you roleplaying soon :)
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Still requiring edits:
A note: please revise the way in which your application has been written. As a roleplaying server, it is integral that LOTC players are able to have relatively good grammar and writing skills. You have capitalised every first letter of almost every word, and the lack of definitive sentences make your application hard to read. Please edit this.
- Your Biography must include lore from the server. Please use the links I've provided below to access our wiki. These can be places, events or cultures from LOTC lore.
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hello again! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the 24 Hour time bracket expiring for changes to be made.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC!
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
We hope to see you roleplaying soon :)
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Changed Status to Accepted
Congratulations! Your application has been:
You should now be whitelisted onto the main server (MC.LOTC.CO). You will spawn into the Cloud Temple, and will be able to explore the world of Almaris through roleplay! If you need any help or have any questions, you can reach me through /msg Ivoreyy in game - or if I am not online, you are able to make a /creq [question], and one of our Community Team Members will be able to help out.
As you have applied as a HUMAN, I have compiled a few suggestions for nations and/or groups that you may like to be a part of. One of the best ways to enjoy lotc is through making connections with other players as part of roleplay groups, so I do recommend that you have a look into these!
Human Nations:
The Holy Orenian Empire
The Holy Orenian Empire, colloquially known as Oren, or the Empire, is an absolute autocratic monarchy composed of the several vassal states and territories of humanity. The official state religion is the Holy Canonist Church. Governed by an Emperor and the collective limited sovereignty of its vassals, the Holy Orenian Empire encompasses one of the most powerful, expansive, and diverse realms. It is situated along the center of the continent composed of the Imperial heartlands, with the capital city of Providence as the seat of the Empire, and its many vassal states across the continent.
You can find the settlement guide to the Empire [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Empire’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
The Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska
The Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska, known as the Kingdom of Haense or simply Haense (New Marian: Haenz; Raevir: Henzij), is a centralized, united monarchy composed of two crowns, Hanseti and Ruska, and ruled by a single individual known as the king. Highlanders make up the majority of the population of Haense (especially Haeseni, but also Batavians, Raevir, and Norlanders) and the state claims to be the "Realm of All Highlanders''. Its current capital is Karosgrad, one of the largest human cities in Almaris, which is situated in the south of the kingdom and surrounded by the Haeseni lowlands. Excluding the dense urban area of the capital, the rest of the nation is mostly rural with its denizens spread out across the forests and highlands.
You can find the settlement guide to the Kingdom [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Kingdom’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
The Kingdom of Norland
The Kingdom of Norland is an absolute monarchy ruled by a single individual known as the king. Highlanders comprise the majority of the population of Norland (specifically Norlanders) and the King claims to be 'Protector of the Highlanders'. Varhelm is the current capital of the Kingdom of Norland, which is located along the great northern mountains of Almaris. There are two primary Jarldoms which swear fidelity to the King of Norland, Luemont and Elysium. The Red Faith finds its home in the Kingdom of Norland as both the most practiced religion of the region and the official state religion, with the largest Hearth Temple standing next to the great Keep of Varhelm
You can find the settlement guide to the Kingdom [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Kingdom’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
I also highly recommend that you join the LoTC discord [HERE], as this will allow you to connect with other roleplayers and nation leaders. The server has channels that advertise RP groups and events, as well as being a platform for players to interact with the server staff.
Furthermore, our [NEW PLAYER HUB] has lots of helpful links and information to get you started on the server. There is a lot to learn, but server players and CT members are always happy to help out!
Happy roleplaying!
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Changed Status to Pending