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Hello! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the following reason/s.
Your application overall is very lacklustre, and multiple aspects have been entirely ignored. You must define both Metagaming and Powergaming in order to be accepted, as well as developing a long enough (10 sentences) biography in order to establish your character.
You also need to more thoroughly explain your characters likes, dislikes, and other traits.
You need to respond with a long enough roleplay response.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC.
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:
Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!
You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly.
Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:
A note: please revise the way in which your application has been written. As a roleplaying server, it is integral that LOTC players are able to have relatively good grammar and writing skills. You have capitalised every first letter of almost every word, and the lack of definitive sentences make your application hard to read. Please edit this.
- Your Biography must include lore from the server. Please use the links I've provided below to access our wiki. These can be places, events or cultures from LOTC lore.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks. Be careful with divulging inner thought within your emote, as it is typical to only describe words and actions - what the other players may see your character doing and/or saying, rather than their inner thoughts. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
- Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.
Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to.
If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:
Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!
You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly.
Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:
- Your Biography must include lore from the server. Please use the links I've provided below to access our wiki. Also be careful of having too many 'edgy' tropes within your character - this is not enjoyable to role-play on the server, and you should focus on creating a new and unique character to play. Also be mindful that everything must adhere to the 1800s era of the server.
- Your Character Likes is not lore abiding - you cannot be a gun smith.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks. Be careful with divulging inner thought within your emote, as it is typical to only describe words and actions - what the other players may see your character doing and/or saying, rather than their inner thoughts. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
- Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.
Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to.
If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!
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Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:
Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!
You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly.
Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:
- Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are a little vague. Please revise this on our wiki, and expand on your definitions.
- Your Biography is too short, and does not include lore from our server. These lore pieces, such as places, events or cultures can be found on our wiki. Also be sure to tell the story of your character's past fully, with at least 10 sentences.
- Your Character Name is memey in nature and cannot be used.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks. On LOTC, we roleplay in third person - using emotes and speech in that point of view. Be careful with divulging inner thought within your emote, as it is typical to only describe words and actions - what the other players may see your character doing and/or saying, rather than their inner thoughts. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
- Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.
Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to.
If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!
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Hello again! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the 24 Hour time bracket expiring for changes to be made.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC!
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
We hope to see you roleplaying soon :)
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:
Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!
You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly.
Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:
- Your Biography is a little too short, and does not include the two required lore references. You've mentioned Elvenesse, which is great, but I just need you to include one more piece of LoTC lore - this can be to do with places, events or cultures. This information can be found on our wiki!
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks. On LOTC, we roleplay in third person - using emotes and speech in that point of view. Be careful with divulging inner thought within your emote, as it is typical to only describe words and actions - what the other players may see your character doing and/or saying, rather than their inner thoughts. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
- Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.
Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to.
If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the amount of edits your application requires. Please reapply, if you wish to - following these guidelines.
- Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are not correct. Please edit these, and use our wiki for the most accurate information.
- Lotc is currently based in the 1800s. Your biography is very lacklustre, and includes no lore from our server.
- Each of your character profile features are vague, or do not fit Lotc standards.
Should you wish to reapply, please follow the application guides provided on the Apply Page.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC.
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
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Changed Status to Under Review
Congratulations! Your application has been:
You should now be whitelisted onto the main server (MC.LOTC.CO). You will spawn into the Cloud Temple, and will be able to explore the world of Almaris through roleplay! If you need any help or have any questions, you can reach me through /msg Ivoreyy in game - or if I am not online, you are able to make a /creq [question], and one of our Community Team Members will be able to help out.
As you have applied as a Human, I have compiled a few suggestions for nations and/or groups that you may like to be a part of. One of the best ways to enjoy lotc is through making connections with other players as part of roleplay groups, so I do recommend that you have a look into these!
Human Nations:
The Holy Orenian Empire
The Holy Orenian Empire, colloquially known as Oren, or the Empire, is an absolute autocratic monarchy composed of the several vassal states and territories of humanity. The official state religion is the Holy Canonist Church. Governed by an Emperor and the collective limited sovereignty of its vassals, the Holy Orenian Empire encompasses one of the most powerful, expansive, and diverse realms. It is situated along the center of the continent composed of the Imperial heartlands, with the capital city of Providence as the seat of the Empire, and its many vassal states across the continent.
You can find the settlement guide to the Empire [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Empire’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
The Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska
The Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska, known as the Kingdom of Haense or simply Haense (New Marian: Haenz; Raevir: Henzij), is a centralized, united monarchy composed of two crowns, Hanseti and Ruska, and ruled by a single individual known as the king. Highlanders make up the majority of the population of Haense (especially Haeseni, but also Batavians, Raevir, and Norlanders) and the state claims to be the "Realm of All Highlanders''. Its current capital is Karosgrad, one of the largest human cities in Almaris, which is situated in the south of the kingdom and surrounded by the Haeseni lowlands. Excluding the dense urban area of the capital, the rest of the nation is mostly rural with its denizens spread out across the forests and highlands.
You can find the settlement guide to the Kingdom [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Kingdom’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
The Kingdom of Norland
The Kingdom of Norland is an absolute monarchy ruled by a single individual known as the king. Highlanders comprise the majority of the population of Norland (specifically Norlanders) and the King claims to be 'Protector of the Highlanders'. Varhelm is the current capital of the Kingdom of Norland, which is located along the great northern mountains of Almaris. There are two primary Jarldoms which swear fidelity to the King of Norland, Luemont and Elysium. The Red Faith finds its home in the Kingdom of Norland as both the most practiced religion of the region and the official state religion, with the largest Hearth Temple standing next to the great Keep of Varhelm
You can find the settlement guide to the Kingdom [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Kingdom’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
Multi-Racial Nations:
The Free Trade State of Sutica
Sutica, a nation relying on trade and freedom. You'll always find trade here with the many shops spread throughout the city. Sutica won't tax unless in times of danger or a project of the nation lacks funding. Great architecture all about, the coastal city filled with secrets such as the sewers!
You can find the settlement guide to the State [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the State’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
The Talus Grove
The Druidic Order is a tropical oasis situated along the coast of the Painted Archipelago on the South Coast of Almaris. Boasting a grand library it serves as a place to teach budding Druids, as well as a base of operations from which the Druids uphold their vigil over nature.
You can find the settlement guide to the Grove .
If you would like an invite to the Grove’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
I also highly recommend that you join the LoTC discord , as this will allow you to connect with other roleplayers and nation leaders. The server has channels that advertise RP groups and events, as well as being a platform for players to interact with the server staff.
Furthermore, our has lots of helpful links and information to get you started on the server. There is a lot to learn, but server players and CT members are always happy to help out!
Happy roleplaying!
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Changed Status to Under Review
Congratulations! Your application has been:
You should now be whitelisted onto the main server (MC.LOTC.CO). You will spawn into the Cloud Temple, and will be able to explore the world of Almaris through roleplay! If you need any help or have any questions, you can reach me through /msg Ivoreyy in game - or if I am not online, you are able to make a /creq [question], and one of our Community Team Members will be able to help out.
As you have applied as a Human (Adunian), I have compiled a few suggestions for nations and/or groups that you may like to be a part of. One of the best ways to enjoy lotc is through making connections with other players as part of roleplay groups, so I do recommend that you have a look into these!
Human Nations:
The Holy Orenian Empire
The Holy Orenian Empire, colloquially known as Oren, or the Empire, is an absolute autocratic monarchy composed of the several vassal states and territories of humanity. The official state religion is the Holy Canonist Church. Governed by an Emperor and the collective limited sovereignty of its vassals, the Holy Orenian Empire encompasses one of the most powerful, expansive, and diverse realms. It is situated along the center of the continent composed of the Imperial heartlands, with the capital city of Providence as the seat of the Empire, and its many vassal states across the continent.
You can find the settlement guide to the Empire [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Empire’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
The Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska
The Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska, known as the Kingdom of Haense or simply Haense (New Marian: Haenz; Raevir: Henzij), is a centralized, united monarchy composed of two crowns, Hanseti and Ruska, and ruled by a single individual known as the king. Highlanders make up the majority of the population of Haense (especially Haeseni, but also Batavians, Raevir, and Norlanders) and the state claims to be the "Realm of All Highlanders''. Its current capital is Karosgrad, one of the largest human cities in Almaris, which is situated in the south of the kingdom and surrounded by the Haeseni lowlands. Excluding the dense urban area of the capital, the rest of the nation is mostly rural with its denizens spread out across the forests and highlands.
You can find the settlement guide to the Kingdom [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Kingdom’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
The Kingdom of Norland
The Kingdom of Norland is an absolute monarchy ruled by a single individual known as the king. Highlanders comprise the majority of the population of Norland (specifically Norlanders) and the King claims to be 'Protector of the Highlanders'. Varhelm is the current capital of the Kingdom of Norland, which is located along the great northern mountains of Almaris. There are two primary Jarldoms which swear fidelity to the King of Norland, Luemont and Elysium. The Red Faith finds its home in the Kingdom of Norland as both the most practiced religion of the region and the official state religion, with the largest Hearth Temple standing next to the great Keep of Varhelm
You can find the settlement guide to the Kingdom [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the Kingdom’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
Multi-Racial Nations:
The Free Trade State of Sutica
Sutica, a nation relying on trade and freedom. You'll always find trade here with the many shops spread throughout the city. Sutica won't tax unless in times of danger or a project of the nation lacks funding. Great architecture all about, the coastal city filled with secrets such as the sewers!
You can find the settlement guide to the State [HERE].
If you would like an invite to the State’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
The Talus Grove
The Druidic Order is a tropical oasis situated along the coast of the Painted Archipelago on the South Coast of Almaris. Boasting a grand library it serves as a place to teach budding Druids, as well as a base of operations from which the Druids uphold their vigil over nature.
You can find the settlement guide to the Grove .
If you would like an invite to the Grove’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord!
I also highly recommend that you join the LoTC discord , as this will allow you to connect with other roleplayers and nation leaders. The server has channels that advertise RP groups and events, as well as being a platform for players to interact with the server staff.
Furthermore, our has lots of helpful links and information to get you started on the server. There is a lot to learn, but server players and CT members are always happy to help out!
Happy roleplaying!
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Hello again! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the 24 Hour time bracket expiring for changes to be made.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC!
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
We hope to see you roleplaying soon :)
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:
Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!
You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly.
Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:
- Your Powergaming definition is still a little vague. Please revise this on our wiki, and expand on your definition.
- Your Biography is not correct for a character from the world of LOTC. Carefully consider the RP context (the 1800s), as well as incorporate some existing LOTC lore into your bio. Also be sure to tell the story of your character's past fully, with at least 10 sentences.
- Your Character Likes are unrealistic. Having a character with that sort of strength is considered powergaming
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks. On LOTC, we roleplay in third person - using emotes and speech in that point of view. Be careful with divulging inner thought within your emote, as it is typical to only describe words and actions - what the other players may see your character doing and/or saying, rather than their inner thoughts. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
- Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.
Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to.
If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hello again! Unfortunately your application has been:
This is due to the 24 Hour time bracket expiring for changes to be made.
You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC!
Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.
We hope to see you roleplaying soon :)
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