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Ivoreyy

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  1. Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:


     

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    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!

     

    You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly. 

     

    Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:

    • Your Powergaming Definition is correct, however I need you to expand on it a little more. Consider the information on our wiki to do this, and perhaps consider using an example!
    • Your Character Fear isn't very unique to their personality. All humans naturally fear death, so I would like you to carefully consider what else your character might fear given their personality traits.
    • Please amend your Roleplay Scenario Response to only speak for the actions of your own character, not on behalf of another.
    • I will allow your Character Biography to pass, but please note that you cannot claim to have any knowledge yourself of magic (Such as the shamanism mentioned - you did not state having knowledge, but I just wished to clarify that), and be aware of  the cliche tropes within orphaned and/or dark-pasted characters. Your biography is okay, just be aware of those things in roleplay

    Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to. 

     

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    If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.

     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

     


     

     

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello there! Congratulations! Your application has been:


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    You should now be whitelisted onto the main server (MC.LOTC.CO). You will spawn into the Cloud Temple, and will be able to explore the world of Almaris through roleplay! If you need any help or have any questions, you can reach me through /msg Ivoreyy in game - or if I am not online, you are able to make a /creq [question], and one of our Community Team Members will be able to help out.

     

    As you have applied as a DWARF, I have compiled a few suggestions for nations and/or groups that you may like to be a part of. One of the best ways to enjoy lotc is through making connections with other players as part of roleplay groups, so I do recommend that you have a look into these!

     

    Dwarvern Nations:


     

    The Grand Kingdom of Urguan

    The Grand Kingdom of Urguan is a constitutional monarchy primarily ruled by an individual known as the Grand King. Being the sole nation of the Dwarven people, Urguan has continuously been a bustling hub of dwarven goods, knowledge, culture, and religion. While not an enforced practice, the Brathmordakin is the religion of the land, seeing all Dwarves inhabiting Urguan following its teachings. The current capital city of the Realm of Almaris is Kal'Darakaan, meaning City of Ancient Might in the common tongue. Originally settled centuries ago by the ancient Dwarves, the expert craftsmanship left the city in almost pristine condition, allowing the newcomers to the land to settle there quickly. Outside of the capital hold, Hefrumm, the village of the Forest Dwarves, is the only other major hold within Urguan's lands.

     

    You can find the settlement guide to the Kingdom .

    If you would like an invite to the Kingdom’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord! 

     


     

    Multi-Racial Nations:

     


     

    The Free Trade State of Sutica

    Sutica, a nation relying on trade and freedom. You'll always find trade here with the many shops spread throughout the city. Sutica won't tax unless in times of danger or a project of the nation lacks funding. Great architecture all about, the coastal city filled with secrets such as the sewers! 

     

    You can find the settlement guide to the State .

    If you would like an invite to the State’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord! 

     

    The Talus Grove

    The Druidic Order is a tropical oasis situated along the coast of the Painted Archipelago on the South Coast of Almaris. Boasting a grand library it serves as a place to teach budding Druids, as well as a base of operations from which the Druids uphold their vigil over nature. 

     

    You can find the settlement guide to the Grove .

    If you would like an invite to the Grove’s discord server, please message me privately or see the #discord-hub channel in the main LOTC discord! 

     


     

    I also highly recommend that you join the LoTC discord , as this will allow you to connect with other roleplayers and nation leaders. The server has channels that advertise RP groups and events, as well as being a platform for players to interact with the server staff.

     

    Furthermore, our has lots of helpful links and information to get you started on the server. There is a lot to learn, but server players and CT members are always happy to help out!

     

    Happy roleplaying!

     


     

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    On behalf of the server and Community members I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar. 

     

    Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our Community team,meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server.

     

    I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivory#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Community Team members.

     

    Please also make sure to read our New Player Guide to get you situated on the server quicker!

     

    Happy roleplaying!

     

  4. -Please take another look at your lore! The Holy Orenian Empire is correct, however the current capital city would be Helena, not Kingston. You also mention Kaedrin, which is the another Kingdom, it’s capital being Ves.

  5. Your Powergaming definition is still incorrect and lacking detail. Please revise this, using our wiki as a tool.

     

    Again, your biography overall displays many key features of a typical, edgy character. I ask you to really drive into an original and detailed backstory, allowing for a character which can bring dynamic roleplay to the server. You are not allowed to lore that is not within the realm of lotc. Also please do be mindful that you cannot possess any ‘shapeshifter’ magic.

     

    Please describe your character traits in full sentences, and make this original and exciting!

     

    For your role-play scenario, please detail an ‘emote’ (Actions/movement) that your character would respond with.

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    On behalf of the server and Community members I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar. 

     

    Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our Community team,meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server.

     

    I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivory#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Community Team members.

     

    Please also make sure to read our New Player Guide to get you situated on the server quicker!

     

    Happy roleplaying!

     

  7. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

     


     

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    Ø  Your biography is lacking the one required lore reference. This could be a city name in which your character was born/lives in, a religion in which they follow, or a world event they witnessed and/or remember. You can find these pieces of lore on the Wiki.

     

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help.

     

    Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord (Ivory#8860)


     

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    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

     

    If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to reach out!

     

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  8. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

     


     

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    Ø  Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are incorrect and lacking detail. Please revise these, using our wiki as a tool.

     

    Ø  Your biography overall displays many key features of a typical, edgy character. I ask you to really drive into an original and detailed backstory, allowing for a character which can bring dynamic roleplay to the server. You use lore that is not within the realm of lotc, as well as having a generally lacklustre story. Also be mindful that you cannot possess any ‘shapeshifter’ magic.

     

    Ø  Please describe your character traits in full sentences, and make this original and exciting!

     

    Ø Your role-play scenario response is again lacking proper detail. Spend time formulating the exact actions and speech in which your character would typically use, and express these in a similar manner to how we have in the provided example. It is important to emote actions, as well as words.

     

    Ø Your skin does not quite fit the lore for your character and/or the medieval theme of the server. Please edit or change this, and also feel free to use a skin from our Skin Archive

     

     

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help.

     

    Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord (Ivory#8860)


     

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    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

     

    If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to reach out!

     

  9. Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

     


     

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    Ø  Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are too brief, and lacking in detail. Though they are correct, they do not give me enough information to be permissible. Please add some more info to these, and possibly a relevant example.

     

    Ø  Your biography lacks the one required lore reference (Excluding mentions to race). Please add in a reference, and consider using the various places, world events, religions and major historical points within lotc lore. The wiki is a very useful tool for this.

     

    Ø  Your skin does not quite fit the lore for your character and/or the medieval theme of the server. Please edit or change this, and also feel free to use a skin from our Skin Archive

     

     

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help.

     

    Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord (Ivory#8860)


     

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    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

     

    If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to reach out!

     

  10. Congratulations! Your application has been:

     

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    On behalf of the server and Community members I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar. 

     

    Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our Community team,meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server.

     

    I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivory#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Community Team members.

     

    Please also make sure to read our New Player Guide to get you situated on the server quicker!

     

    Happy roleplaying!

  11. Congratulations! Your application has been:

     

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    On behalf of the server and Community members I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar. 

     

    Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our Community team,meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server.

     

    I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivory#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Community Team members.

     

    Please also make sure to read our New Player Guide to get you situated on the server quicker!

     

    Happy roleplaying!

     

  12. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

     


     

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    Ø  As mentioned briefly above, Sutica is a historically neutral state that did not participate in the Atlas coalition war. The war also ended in 1662- however you have mentioned your character’s father returning in 1692 after the loss. You can read a little more about the event here, and make according edits.

     

    Ø  Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are lacking in detail. They are correct, however need a little more information and/or examples in order to be acceptable. Please add some more to these- I’ve provided links to our relevant wiki pages in order o help out a bit. ?

     

    Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help.

     

    Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord (Ivory#8860)


     

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    The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

     

    If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to reach out!


     

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