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    Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should now be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055] or over the forums.

     

    If you’d like in-game assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise, just ask for assistance becoming acclimated to LotC! You can perform /creq I would like a Wilven Monk please in-game as well for assistance.

     

    • We encourage you to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Team Member for assistance or any questions you might have.
    • We encourage you to read our New Player Guide, which provides detailed information about LotC and roleplay itself.
    • Since your Character is a High Elf, we encourage you to read about the High Elven Nations and or Major Charters that might be affiliated. In addition, check out our  for other places you may be interested in.

      Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055]. You can also issue 
      /creq [message] on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.
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    Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should now be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055] or over the forums.

     

    If you’d like in-game assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise, just ask for assistance becoming acclimated to LotC! You can perform /creq I would like a Wilven Monk please in-game as well for assistance.

     

    • We encourage you to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Team Member for assistance or any questions you might have.
    • We encourage you to read our New Player Guide, which provides detailed information about LotC and roleplay itself.
    • Since your Character is a High Elf, we encourage you to read about the High Elven Nations and or Major Charters that might be affiliated. In addition, check out our  Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

      Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055]. You can also issue 
      /creq [message] on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.
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    You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

     

    • Your Character Biography appears to be very well written, however, It is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not seem to include the mandatory (1) lore piece from the LotC Wiki. This could include, city names, religions, et cetera. 
    • Your Character Skin looks to be not as accurate regarding the LotC Lore of the racial features orcs have. I’d recommend you take a look at the LotC Skin Archive and understand the important features that your skin may have forgotten or gotten wrong; for instance, the hair color is a little too bright and the skin is missing tusks. 

      You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 
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    Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

     

    You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] or here on my forums account.

     

    • I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions appear to show a somewhat lack of knowledge regarding the actual meaning of the terms. Make sure to apply your knowledge more efficiently and try to add some examples that could be representing each.
    • Your Character Biography seems to have a good start, however, It is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- While it does not include the mandatory (1) lore pieces from the LotC Wiki.
    • Your Character Biography doesn’t seem to be as well established as we would like. I would recommend going and adding at least (10) complete sentences; It is required.
    • Your Character's Physical Description as well could use more sentences possibly describing the height and weight of your character, et cetera.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario has a great start, but It is required to include text and action.
       

    You can also join our New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.

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    You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

     

    • I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions appear to show a somewhat lack of knowledge regarding the actual meaning of the terms. Make sure to apply your knowledge more efficiently and try to add some examples that could be representing each.
    • Your Character Biography seems to have a good start, however, It is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- While it does not include the mandatory (1) lore pieces from the LotC Wiki.
    • Your Character Biography doesn’t seem to be as well established as we would like. I would recommend going and adding at least (10) complete sentences; It is required.
    • Your Character's Physical Description as well could use more sentences possibly describing the height and weight of your character, et cetera.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario has a great start, but It is required to include text and action.

      You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 
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    Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should now be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055] or over the forums.

     

    If you’d like in-game assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise, just ask for assistance becoming acclimated to LotC! You can perform /creq I would like a Wilven Monk please in-game as well for assistance.

     

    • We encourage you to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Team Member for assistance or any questions you might have.
    • We encourage you to read our New Player Guide, which provides detailed information about LotC and roleplay itself.
    • Since your Character is a Human, we encourage you to read about the Human Nations and or Major Charters that might be affiliated. In addition, check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

      Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055]. You can also issue 
      /creq [message] on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.
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    Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

     

    You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] or here on my forums account.

     

    • I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions appear to be plagiarized so, make sure to apply your knowledge of these two terms in your own words.
    • Your Character Biography appears to have a good start, however, it is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not seem to include the mandatory (1) lore piece from the LotC Wiki.
    • I’d recommend including a more significant negative trait for your Character’s Personality Traits/Quirks.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario does not include a proper emote as it must include text and action.

      You can also join our 
      New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.
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    Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should now be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055] or over the forums.

     

    If you’d like in-game assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise, just ask for assistance becoming acclimated to LotC! You can perform /creq I would like a Wilven Monk please in-game as well for assistance.

     

    • We encourage you to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Team Member for assistance or any questions you might have.
    • We encourage you to read our New Player Guide, which provides detailed information about LotC and roleplay itself.
    • Since your Character is a Human, we encourage you to read about the Human Nations and or Major Charters that might be affiliated. In addition, check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

      Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055]. You can also issue /creq [message] on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.
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    Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should now be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055] or over the forums.

     

    If you’d like in-game assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise, just ask for assistance becoming acclimated to LotC! You can perform /creq I would like a Wilven Monk please in-game as well for assistance.

     

    • We encourage you to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Team Member for assistance or any questions you might have.
    • We encourage you to read our New Player Guide, which provides detailed information about LotC and roleplay itself.
    • Since your Character is a Halfling, we encourage you to read about the Halfling Nations and or Major Charters that might be affiliated. In addition, check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

      Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055]. You can also issue 
      /creq [message] on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.
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    Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should now be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055] or over the forums.

     

    If you’d like in-game assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise, just ask for assistance becoming acclimated to LotC! You can perform /creq I would like a Wilven Monk please in-game as well for assistance.

     

    • We encourage you to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Team Member for assistance or any questions you might have.
    • We encourage you to read our New Player Guide, which provides detailed information about LotC and roleplay itself.
    • Since your Character is a Human, we encourage you to read about the Human Nations and Major Charters that might be affiliated. In addition, check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

      Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055]. You can also issue 
      /creq [message] on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.
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    Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should now be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055] or over the forums.

     

    If you’d like in-game assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise, just ask for assistance becoming acclimated to LotC! You can perform /creq I would like a Wilven Monk please in-game as well for assistance.

     

    • We encourage you to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Team Member for assistance or any questions you might have.
    • We encourage you to read our New Player Guide, which provides detailed information about LotC and roleplay itself.
    • Since your Character is a Dwarf, we encourage you to read about the Dwarven Nations and Major Charters that might be affiliated. In addition, check out our Settlement Guides for other places you may be interested in.

      Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me on discord at [TwistedFries#1055]. You can also issue 
      /creq [message] on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.
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    You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
     

    • I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions are quite vague so, a good way to prove that you know the definitions of these two terms would be through using examples.

      You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 
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    Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

     

    You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] or here on my forums account.
     

    • Your Character Biography appears to be well written, however, I regret to inform you that the location that you have included- ‘San'Kala’ happens to be an outdated lore piece that is not allowed within the applications. I’d recommend you to look over the LotC Wiki for more recent locations on the front page!

      You can also join our 
      New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.
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