Pancakeman015

• Within your biography you’re required to at least have two piece of server lore, this meaning – nation names, location names or event names. All of which can be found on the wiki. (You currently have one).
• Also in your biography you stated how orcs of the ‘Lur’ clan raided your village – I would recommend going against this rout of action although if you continue to keep it in, try to make your character have a better story to surround it due to it being currently “Orcs raided my village and now I want revenge”. Going down this rout is something we don’t personally like on the server unless you have an impactful backstory which explains it. (Suggest going down a different rout, the village fell victim to famine is a good path). 
• In interesting facts, as stated above unless you have a full backstory explanation and further development on why you hate orcs, I suggest replacing this.

Your application was good to read, though to move-forward you’re going to have to commit to changing these in your application before we can continue. You have 24 hours to fully fix the required changes above. Please contact me on the forums or through discord if you have any trouble, my discord is: Jenny_Bobbs#0001 .

Requiring extra help can be difficult through your application, to assist if you we have a Wiki page this holds a great deal of information relating to fix the issues stated above. If you want to join the community and get assistance on your application not from me, you’re able to join the New Player Discord .

There. Redid the bio. Should be better now. Thanks for the suggestions!

Welcome! Thanks for making the changes!

If you want to contact any of the community team members like myself in-game do these commands;

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Message anyone on the server, get the minecraft name from the above command.
 

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Creating a request for a community team member to assist you with.

Thank you and I hope you enjoy your time on the server!

Here is the New Player Discord if you need help: https://discord.gg/qp8Kdf

Regards,

Jenny.

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