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  • Rules: No
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Acquiring and using knowledge that your in-game character does not have. For example, messaging friends on discord.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcibly taking control of another persons character. For example, "Tom stole the ring from Alison" rather than, "Tom attempted to steal the ring from Alison".
    Status: Accepted

          Anton lived most of his life in a poor, remote village in the highland areas of the Empire of Man with his family and fellow villagers. From childhood, Anton had a deep love for those around him, and his fellow highlanders that would occasionally travel by. Under the apprenticeship of his father, he quickly learned the trades of hunting, fishing, and most importantly, survival. Once his father saw that he could survive on his own, he started teaching him swordsmanship.

          However, Anton’s swordsmanship training did not get very far, before a disease swept through the highland villages, including his. The villagers did not think much of it at first, because sickness was nothing new, but the disease did not pass. More and more villagers were getting infected with it, and the Empire doctors would not help them, as they could not pay for the medicines. As things kept getting worse and worse, Anton set out to find help from someone who could save his village. After three days of searching, he stumbled across a group of traveling Druids, and begged them to save his village. The Druids complied, and traveled back with Anton to his village to heal those that could be saved, but upon arriving, only a handful of villagers were left alive. All of the survivors were infected with the late stages of the disease, and as such, there was nothing that the Druids could do. Anton found his mother among the survivors, where she gave him his fathers sword, Incursion, which was used by his grandfather, in the Atlas Coalition War. After this, his mother urged him to go, as to not get the disease himself, so Anton and the party of Druids left. 

          Several days later, in the city of Helena, Anton left the small party of Druids, to travel on his own. The Druids offered to train him to be a Druid himself, and to accompany them for a time, but Anton refused, believing his place to be among the nations of man and fellow highlanders. Filled with the sorrow of his lost home, he set out from village to village, helping other highlanders in need.


Character Name: Anton Lendruprik
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Medium-built, 178 centimeters tall. Short brown hair with a light whiskered beard. Light leather armor under by heavier plate armor, with dents/cuts.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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  • Within your biography you’re required to at least have two piece of server lore, this meaning – nation names, location names or event names. All of which can be found on the wiki. (You currently have one).
  • Also in your biography you stated how orcs of the ‘Lur’ clan raided your village – I would recommend going against this rout of action although if you continue to keep it in, try to make your character have a better story to surround it due to it being currently “Orcs raided my village and now I want revenge”. Going down this rout is something we don’t personally like on the server unless you have an impactful backstory which explains it. (Suggest going down a different rout, the village fell victim to famine is a good path). 
  • In interesting facts, as stated above unless you have a full backstory explanation and further development on why you hate orcs, I suggest replacing this.

Your application was good to read, though to move-forward you’re going to have to commit to changing these in your application before we can continue. You have 24 hours to fully fix the required changes above. Please contact me on the forums or through discord if you have any trouble, my discord is: Jenny_Bobbs#0001 .

 

Requiring extra help can be difficult through your application, to assist if you we have a Wiki page this holds a great deal of information relating to fix the issues stated above. If you want to join the community and get assistance on your application not from me, you’re able to join the New Player Discord .

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Welcome! Thanks for making the changes!

 

If you want to contact any of the community team members like myself in-game do these commands;

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/clist

To get a list of community team members currently online.

 

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/t [mcname] [message]

Message anyone on the server, get the minecraft name from the above command.
 

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/creq

Creating a request for a community team member to assist you with.

 

Thank you and I hope you enjoy your time on the server!

 

Here is the New Player Discord if you need help: https://discord.gg/qp8Kdf

 

Regards,

Jenny.

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