Dcsword

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

  • Your character biography needs to have at least one lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a location, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris  

  • Your character biography uses a common character trope! Your character's family and loved ones can't have been killed by orcs as this is a common trope. Please change this.

  • Your physical description is on the right track, but it could use a little more. Try to think more about your character. Their height, their eye color, hair color, etc.

  • Your personality traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality such as being cold, blind, or hot-headed. 

  • Your character’s fear needs to be at least two sentences long and explain why they fear that, as well as tie into their personality traits/quirks.

  • Your character’s aspirations must be at least two sentences and tie into their bio!

  •  Your roleplay scenario is missing. It must follow the given prompt and have a bit of action and dialog in third person.  

  • Your skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this.

  • Your skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

    • Here is more about the race you chose! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    • Here you can find some skins: https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

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Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ AudTheOdd#1560]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AudryTheOddity to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you check out the application guide;

 New Player Application Guide - New Player - The Lord Of The Craft 

As well as read over the wiki! WIKI

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