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Illlyasviel

Illlyasviel

By Illlyasviel

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Illlyasviel
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: set realistic attributes.
    when performing an action, check if that action is possible given your attributes
    use actions that can be prevented by other characters.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: makes attempts of other characters to trick/surprise your character impossible
    makes your character too smart causing them to be overpowered
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Ilsevel 
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: white hair
blue eyes
5'11
Roleplay Scenario:

Immediately, the girl's eyes widened. "You know who Ilsevel is?!!" She blurted out, "Can you tell Ilsevel who she is??"
"What are you talking about? ", the old hag questioned, being slightly confused.
"When Ilsevel woke up, she didn't know where she was, nor how she got there!!" After the girl the blurted out the following, she seemed to have calmed down, but looked down with a saddened expression.
The hag, seemingly have understood the situation, smirked, but the girl did not seem to notice.
"Of course I know you, I was the one that saved your life, remember, back when you fell into river, you also told me your name was Ilsevel."
"Really?" 
"Yes, of course, but it appears you've gotten yourself hurt again! And you even seem to have lost your memory!"
The girl stood there without saying anything, after a while of thinking, she said, "Well, I guess that would be true...you even know my name and everything..."

 

backstory:

Ilsevel lost her memories and was found by a poor and sick old man. The old man took advantaged of the situation and convinced the girl that she had promised to work for her in turn for saving her life, and that they had being living together for a while. The girl would do odd jobs around her town for a while. After a few years, the old man would pass away. In her death bed, perhaps having thought of the girl as a daughter she never had, decided to reveal the truth to the girl. The girl forgave her, as she give her a place to stay when she was lost in a foreign place without a past.
 

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Hello there, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make.
You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes below. Once you have edited and corrected your post, please contact me.

  • Please remove the references to the hag in your characters backstory. Your character can still have a loss of memory but we prefer to leave the hag not involved with characters directly. You only need six sentences with third person character actions / description and dialogue in quotations.
  • Please make sure all of your information (age) is correct to follow our TOS.

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Your app has been extended by 24 hours to correct the changes below.

  • Please remove the references to the hag in your characters backstory. The old woman, being the hag which is shown during your roleplay example. Your character can still have a loss of memory but we prefer to leave the hag not involved with characters directly. You only need six sentences with third person character actions / description and dialogue in quotations.

My discord and forum account is @WhatASithuation 

You can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

In the discord you can also ping the  @Community team and say: “Hey there! I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending.” if I or another team member can not be reached.   

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! 

Lastly here is a link to the New Player Hub

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Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

My discord and forum account is @WhatASithuation 

You can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

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