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panda_bear
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part of Kingdom of Kaz'Ulrahs army, father died fighting Holy Orenian Empire when i was a baby. now i will revenge my father and kill the one who killed my father. 


Character Name: panda
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: short with long beard has scares
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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-You failed to even try to answer the question regarding why Meta-gaming and Power-gaming are bad for roleplay. Take a look at the links for Metagaming and Powergaming in the top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with the definitions of such.

 

-Your character's biography is less so a biography, and merely a sentence.

 

-Having one's character's parents randomly murdered than vowing revenge on their specific killer is unfathomably cliche, and overused. (And not especially applicable on the server, as since your character's father hasnt been played on the server, nor having been killed on the server, its impossible for such a goal of revenge to be relevant, since the murderer of your character's father doesnt exist ingame.)

 

-Panda is not a suitable character name for a dwarf.

 

-How does your character not have a mother? Did they die? Did he pop out of the ground one day magically? Was he adopted by a single father?

 

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

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