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Raphyol

By Raphyol

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Raphyol#2328
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information gathered out or roleplay that the played char never had access to nor could know in roleplay.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You cannot force an action to succeed onto someone else or something. You have to follow the restricted rules and guidelines to do such
    Status: Denied

Ballas was born in a northern city. At the age of 7 they already started training him in the art of combat. The city he lived in from then on was called Dundorma and was known for their fighters aswell as Blacksmiths. After he mastered the art of combat he started at the age of 23 learning to forge weapons. Over the years he became one of the best blacksmithes around. After some time he ended working because he found his love. He had three sons and an adopted daughter. After a few years the city got hit by a plague as terrible as it could be. Many died and left the surviving ones to flee from the place. One of his sons decided to sail off to distant lands but ended up dying there while Ballas tried sailing after him ending up in this world. He found out about some new things aswell as hearing about dark magic and demons which have awoken his interest. He is now traveling around looking for the dark arts of this new empire he found aswell as blacksmiths to learn maybe some more about forging

Character Name: Malthael Karris
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 58
Physical Description: A weathered oldish man built masculine, bald with some stubble on his face.
Roleplay Scenario:

*Ballas would look at the man and make a smile saying* Fine sir i am here to learn more of your blacksmiths and maybe learn some more, now if you excuse me... there seems to be a lot around *Hed wave slightly at the men before turning around already not liking the man*

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ You had an issue regarding being able to see the Rules. Message me on Discord so we can sort that out.

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, but they’re missing examples, please add an example of each. Feel free to use our wiki to help with coming up with an example.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→ Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord garentoft#1980. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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