ronin_champloo

“Give me my fackin’ wagon back and I’ll support you all.” Gamagoro spoke out loud.

Pretty good! Glad to see someone doing what I and Werew0lf never had the time for

"Fack the Rutherns, they took my wagon." Gamagoro muttered with a twitching frown, opting not to read any further past the first mention of the house.

i be baldinggg

The Homunculus turned to peer to the skies, child-like eyes fixated on the very stars. He pondered if he could ever reach and devour them whole.

"FOO-FOOD? FOOD. FOOOOD. FO-FOOD?" The chained homonculus contineud to wail in its demented, pig-like squeals.

stop trying to minmax shady :///

MC Name:

         ronin_champloo

Character's Name:

         Ōkui

Character's Age:

         1

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         N/a

Transformed form:

         Homunculus

Creator's MC Name:

         Soupbone

Creator's RP Name:

         femurlord

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Homunculi are artificial beings created through alchemical means, replicas of a descendant's physical form but without a soul. They possess physical abilities similar to the descendant they were created from, however, do not surpass them without the aid of Tawkin mutations.

One of the key characteristics of Homunculi is their ability to regenerate quickly and agelessness. After death, they enter a one-week cooldown period before reviving, followed by a three-day period of lethargy, and three days to regrow lost limbs. Wounds caused by voidal magic, however, take twice as long to heal. Homunculi, being logical in nature, do not consider emotions in their decision-making, but they can learn to mimic them to blend in with society. They have a natural inclination towards alchemy, and require a mentor to learn how to use it productively.

It's worth mentioning that if a Homunculus imbibes a Juliet's potion, it will cause them to PK.

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

https://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/kappa-pogchamp/

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         Nope

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         Yes

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         Nope

2/3

I recommend reading other lore submissions and the criteria, and following that format

1 minute ago, kindEmperor said:

Init what a loser

cant hear you, you're too far away. try growing a bit to reach my height (5'4)

how did you mess up formatting like this

thanks!

"Nice try, shittu spook.  If have horn, then oni -- no exception." Gamagoro stated while sharpening a wooden stick, dismissing the missive as another set of spook propaganda.

20 minutes ago, VictoriaMinaj said:

 

it's there ugly

shut up ugly

omgg slayyy

(you should have some cool music at the start of the post in a spoiler to set the mood)

"AHHH HORRY SHITTU, AZDRAZI SO FACKING UGLY." An Oyashiman hollered as he peered onto the sketch of the disgusting creature.

EDIT: Thank you for understanding!

MC Name:

         EchsDeee

Character's Name:

         Diomedes of Ossiriand

Character's Age:

         Old enough

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Wood Elf

Transformed form:

         Nephilim

Creator's MC Name:

         Werew0lf, Honourary

Creator's RP Name:

         The Great Owl (With MArt#163) and Avaeramos

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Nephilim are a species wrought through the powers of the Dragaar from when a time that they ruled. From Dragaar's ventures onto the land of the descendants, within his quest for knowledge, did the brood come upon the line of Horen, the father of all man. And so, they were interested by their ability and power - forming a pact; eternal guidance in exchange for their aid and libraries of knowledge. From the blood of the Dragaar did those - who prevailed and remained unwavering - transcend onto a state beyond man, existing as the children of Azdromoth and birth through trials breathed in Wardens. Their death signifies rebirth, and from the ashes of their once-bodies come a new being. A new creature; an Nephilim.

Nephilim - due to their affinity as children of Azdromoth - are immune to flames, their boiling blood makes them impervious to poisons and venom. Upon their souls exist an armory where they are able to summon dracanium armor and weaponry, a right deemed to them as Dragonkin. The material - at that - is wrought through the bones of old draconic beings, also allowing them the ability to breathe great plumes of flames. Upon their hands remain dragonsflame, allowing them the power to brand and curse mortals for their transgressions should it occur. But most importantly, they've the cause to speak and understand draconic - similiar to all Dragonkin.

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

The Nephilim commonly adorn themselves with crimson or blackened scales, a common feature of most Dragonkin - common to the image of man and descendants, barring a few features; they'd often grow a foot taller than before, donning red, black or bone-esque horns upon their scalp, talons exist upon their hands and all pretense of whom they used to be are cleared; all but infernal flame-hued eyes wrought of malice and new purpose existing within.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         Nope

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yup

Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

         Yup

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         Yup

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         Nope

"Karl-dono is dead.. horry shittu. Must be elven spy." The man stated with a dour tone, sharpening a piece of wood.

YEAHHH BABY THATS WHAT IVE BEEN WAITING FOR

if u wanna murder rp, dont hide it behind morally grey stuff. be a genuine villain

"Nani da facku, why shittu gaijin invade our soil." An Oyashiman muttered with distain.

18 minutes ago, Nooblius said:

I know it's unchanged, I think I even wrote as much in my vote- it was still an issue that I noticed. The fact that it's already in there doesn't mean it's safe from criticism.

it's currently the weakest 'ranged' projectile amongst most magics. it can be defended from by wearing armor, shields, and there's even magical wards (etc paladinism) that completely counter it. the flamespew has also been nerfed to hell, its size lowered and has a cooldown once used