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CMZ2004

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  1. what does it mean if an application is set as open

  2. CMZ2004

    CMZ2004

    Korsarro Khan was born in a old Mongolian settlement the Holy Orenian and his mother Anastasia Khan was of common birth but was cast out by her family because she was inlove with a man that her parents didn't approve of, His father Dublia Khan was of common birth who was the man that Anastasia parents didn't approve of so they both decided to run away and live together. Korsarro Khan had no siblings and had very few friends in his life, his father taught him the ways of hunting and fighting with the sword and bow, his mother taught him how to properly write and speak Mongolian. Korsarro Khan had great life experiences with his loving mother and father, when he turned 16 he was gifted with his own set of armor along with a sword, bow, and a strong horse to ride while hunting. When he was 18 he lost his parents to 5 bandits, he and his father were returning home from hunting when they saw smoke at their home, they hurried home to find his mother dead and bandits raiding their home, Dublia Khan enraged rushed towards the bandits only injuring one, but was cut down and only for Korsarro Khan to kill one of the bandits with a precise bow shot to the chest. At the age of 20 he was a fine warrior for the Orenian Empire and made many friends in the army but he would slowly lose his friends to the many battles he fought in. At the age of 25 He left the army with honor to find the remaining 4 bandits who killed his parents or the bandits children to bring peace to his parents souls. He was in the war between the Holy Orenian Empire and the Free State of Sutica, he saw many of his friends he made in the Orenian Empire army die from volleys of arrows, and blinding slashes of light from swords and spears. Korsarro Khan was in search of the bandits who killed his parents when the Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska was recognized as an independent Kingdom.
  3. Why was it denied I did the edit that was told to do

  4. hey there i added the 2nd line of lore and its ready to be reviewed again 

  5. CMZ2004

    CMZ2004

    Korsarro Khan was born in a old Mongolian settlement the Holy Orenian and his mother Anastasia Khan was of common birth but was cast out by her family because she was inlove with a man that her parents didn't approve of, His father Dublia Khan was of common birth who was the man that Anastasia parents didn't approve of so they both decided to run away and live together. Korsarro Khan had no siblings and had very few friends in his life, his father taught him the ways of hunting and fighting with the sword and bow, his mother taught him how to properly write and speak Mongolian. Korsarro Khan had great life experiences with his loving mother and father, when he turned 16 he was gifted with his own set of armor along with a sword, bow, and a strong horse to ride while hunting. When he was 18 he lost his parents to 5 bandits, he and his father were returning home from hunting when they saw smoke at their home, they hurried home to find his mother dead and bandits raiding their home, Dublia Khan enraged rushed towards the bandits only injuring one, but was cut down and only for Korsarro Khan to kill one of the bandits with a precise bow shot to the chest. At the age of 20 he was a fine warrior for the Orenian Empire and made many friends in the army but he would slowly lose his friends to the many battles he fought in. At the age of 25 He left the army with honor to find the remaining 4 bandits who killed his parents or the bandits children to bring peace to his parents souls. Korsarro Khan fought in the war between the Orenian empire and the Federation of MokhUrak lost many of his fellow soldiers to the war. He was also in the war between the Holy Orenian Empire and the Free State of Sutica, he was tasked with capturing the Trade King, Crowin Alstreim, he was able yo successfully capture the Trade king and was praised by his superiors.
  6. Hi I recently completed my application if u could be so kind as to look at my application for me thx

    1. snoopie12

      snoopie12

      We review oldest to newest, I am sure someone will get to your shortly. 

    2. CMZ2004

      CMZ2004

      okay someone did i am currently fixing the issues brought up and it will posted again soon 

    3. CMZ2004

      CMZ2004

      it is posted thank you for explaining to me why it takes a while to be reviewed have a fine day

  7. CMZ2004

    CMZ2004

    Kor sarro Khan was born in a old Mongolian settlement near the Holy Orenian Empire his mother Anatasia Khan was of noble birth but was cast out for she was inlove with a common man, His father Dublia Khan was of common birth who fell in love with a Mongolian Princess Anatasia Khan. Kor sarro Khan had no siblings and never had many friends in his life his father taught him the ways of hunting and fighting with the sword and bow, his mother taught him how to properly speak Mongolian. Kor Sarro Khan had great life experiences with his loving mother and father he turned 16 and was given his own sword and bow along with a strong horse to ride while hunting. When he was 18 years old he lost his parents to 5 bandits, He and his father were returning home from hunting when they saw smoke at their home, they hurried home to find his mother dead and bandits raiding their house, Dublia Khan rushed towards the bandits only injuring one, but was cut down and only for Kor Sarro Khan to kill one bandit with an precise bow shot to the chest. At the age of 20 he was a fine warrior for the Orenian Empire made many friends in the army but he would slowly lose his friends to the many battles he fought in. At the age of 25 He left the army with honor to find the remaining 4 bandits who killed his parents or the bandits children and bring peace to his parents souls.
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