Nardah

no bio i may not be a GM but i can be pretty sure that is gonna be denied you might wanna work on that

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: -How old are you?: 13 but turn 14 in November. -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: CST Canada/Manitoba -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: in my opinion i would say i do. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: im a 13 year old that is in grade 9, i am not the most popular kid but no one really hates me except for the few guys that pick on everyone, i take judo on Fridays and guitar practice on Wednesdays and on mondays i have to help my mom cook supper. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: on weekdays about three hours while on weekends around 5 hours to 7 hours. -How long have you played minecraft?: i have played minecraft since around the end of alpha -What do you know about role-playing?: Role-playing in a game is kind of like being put into someone Else's shoes where there is no planned future and the future is built around how you and others act and depending on what you do, the future could be bad or good (for example say if someone gets kidnapped and you go to save them and they get killed you might, say get blamed for it, but if you save them then they will thanks you and you will might get a reward which then will help your character advance in knowledge).it is also that you don't use the knowledge that you have as the player but you only use the knowledge gained in the game its like if you die you keep all your memories from you past lives. for this server role-playing in my opinion i would say is "you" talk like you are that person (unless you are in OOC chat)if someone addresses you and that you don't use any knowledge you have gained while not on this server, and, when you talk you try to use the history of the server (lore etc)if it calls for it. (oh god i know im gonna be denied again i just cant think of whatelse a RP server could be and i just really want to join this server) -What do you expect this server will be like?: a quite organized role-playing server with a vast amounts of lore and back-stories. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day by people who just log on and start breaking blocks or even most recently a server was becoming corrupt because the owner would do anything for money even including unbanned even if they are a complete ****** bag and constantly grief and kill everyone. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes -Name the 4 races on this server: Elf, Dwarf, Human, and Orc -How did you hear about us?: i saw that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah In-Character: -Character Name: Lornan (no last name) -What is your Race?: Tree Elf (like tree frog, not tree spirit) -Biography: Lornan was an Archer on a trade ship that was transporting gems and rare goods to a distant land and he was helping to cross the ocean by protecting them from pirates because of his superior Marksmanship he was able to pick off pirates from far away when they tried to attack the ships, but with one of the encounters the pirates were more prepared and were able to force the ship back a few days, making them run out of food sooner than normal because they had to nurse their wounded and the pirates had stolen the majority of their supplies, when they continued on their journey they ran into a pirate ship and this ship had captured an archer and forced the archer to work for them, and this archer was able to shoot Lornan in the shoulder with a poisoned arrow and he quickly lost consciousness from the poison and loss of blood. While Lornan was unconscious the crew took him to be dead so they pushed him overboard and kept his bow to sell at their next stop. when Lornan finally woke up he was on the shore of a deserted island (or so he thought) and when he looked around he noticed his favorite bow was gone. so without food or tools he went searching for civilization to hope he would be able to find out what happened to the ship and if he would be able to find his bow which he got from his father just before he died. as he was walking around he saw a great tree far away across a river, so he decided to walk towards the shore and build a small raft to get across the river to see what had made the tree grow so strong and protected it from disease in times of plague, as he was walking he also noticed a peculiar looking temple so he assumed what most people would, that there were people, so he walked towards it to see who he could find. -Character Age: 76 -Character Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is down to around his shoulders, Green eyes, leather and metal bracers around his wrists, constantly wearing his father's quiver on his back. -Character Personality: dark, not that talkative around people he does not know or does not like, but he will still get into arguments for what he thinks is right. he is also always ready to help a friend in need. -Your ambitions: to build up a new life in this new land, and hopefully find his father's bow even if he has to travel to the nether and back. -Can your character read or write?: yes -Can your character mine?: yes, if he has to -Are you a capable builder?: yes -Can you wield a sword?: yes -Enjoy Farming?: not really he isnt patient enough he only farms with bonemeal -Does your character have any special skills?: during the lack of food on the boat trip he has learned to conserve food. -A screenshot of your skin: My Skin (click for link) -Other Information: he is rather good at precision jumping (aka jumping courses)

omg that picture is epic!!!!

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: -How old are you?: 13 but turn 14 in November. -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: CST Canada/Manitoba -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: in my opinion i would say i do. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: im a 13 year old that is in grade 9, i am not the most popular kid but no one really hates me except for the few guys that pick on everyone, i take judo on Fridays and guitar practice on Wednesdays and on mondays i have to help my mom cook supper. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: on weekdays about three hours while on weekends around 5 hours to 7 hours. -How long have you played minecraft?: i have played minecraft since around the end of alpha -What do you know about roleplaying?: Roleplaying in a game is kind of like being put into someone else's shoes where there is no planned future and the future is built around how you and others act and depending on what you do the future could be bad or good. -What do you expect this server will be like?: a quite organized role-playing server with a vast amounts of lore and back-stories. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day by people who just log on and start breaking blocks. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes -Name the 4 races on this server: Elf, Dwarf, Human, Orc, (ascended, Undead (6)) -How did you hear about us?: i saw that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah In-Character: -Character Name: Lornan (no last name) -What is your Race?: Elf -Biography: Lornan was an Archer on a trade ship that was transporting gems and rare goods to a distant land and he was helping to cross the ocean by protecting them from pirates because of his superior Marksmanship he was able to pick off pirates from far away when they tried to attack the ships, but with one of the encounters the pirates were more prepared and were able to force the ship back a few days, making them run out of food sooner than normal because they had to nurse their wounded and the pirates had stolen the majority of their supplies, when they continued on their journey they ran into a pirate ship and this ship had captured an archer and forced the archer to work for them, and this archer was able to shoot Lornan in the shoulder with a poisoned arrow and he quickly lost consciousness from the poison and loss of blood. While Lornan was unconscious the crew took him to be dead so they pushed him overboard and kept his bow to sell at their next stop. when Lornan finally woke up he was on the shore of a deserted island (or so he thought) and when he looked around he noticed his favorite bow was gone. so without food or tools he went searching for civilization to hope he would be able to find out what happened to the ship and if he would be able to find his bow which he got from his father just before he died. -Character Age: 76 -Character Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is down to around his shoulders, Green eyes, leather and metal bracers around his wrists, constantly wearing his father's quiver on his back. -Character Personality: dark, not that talkative around people he does not know or does not like, but he will still get into arguments for what he thinks is right. he is also always ready to help a friend in need. -Your ambitions: to build up a new life in this new land, and hopefully find his father's bow even if he has to travel to the nether and back. -Can your character read or write?: yes -Can your character mine?: yes, if he has to -Are you a capable builder?: yes -Can you wield a sword?: yes -Enjoy Farming?: not really he isnt patient enough he only farms with bonemeal -Does your character have any special skills?: during the lack of food on the boat trip he has learned to conserve food. -A screenshot of your skin: My Skin (click for link) -Other Information: he is rather good at precision jumping (aka jumping courses)

hey... i just checked and my bio is almost the exact length of the good example

oh wow herpy derp fast reply i was editing it i had to mix to things together so i temperarely posted it so i could copy something from another place on this forum (the format) and how can i make my bio longer i kinda ran out of ideas

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name: -How old are you?: 13 but turn 14 in November. -Time-Zone/Country of Residence: CST Canada/Manitoba -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: in my opinion i would say i do. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: im a 13 year old that is in grade 9, i am not the most popular kid but no one really hates me except for the few guys that pick on everyone, i take judo on Fridays and guitar practice on Wednesdays and on mondays i have to help my mom cook supper. -How much time could you be on the server weekly?: on weekdays about three hours while on weekends around 5 hours to 7 hours. -How long have you played minecraft?: i have played minecraft since around the end of alpha -What do you know about roleplaying?: role-playing is a form of game where people act like they are a certain role in a society in a video game, it is kind of like real life where you have to overcome obstacle to obtain what you want. minecraft role-playing is unlike regular minecraft because it usually includes you having to fight for materials and it incorporates fighting into the game more intricately. -What do you expect this server will be like?: a quite organized role-playing server with a vast amounts of lore and back-stories. -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day by people who just log on and start breaking blocks. -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes -Name the 4 races on this server: Elf, Dwarf, Human, Orc, (ascended, Undead (6)) -How did you hear about us?: i saw that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out. -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah In-Character: -Character Name: Lornan (no last name) -What is your Race?: Elf -Biography: Lornan was an Archer on a trade ship that he was helping to cross and ocean because of his superior Marksmanship he was able to pick off pirates from far away when they tried to attack the ships, but with one of the encounters the pirates were more prepared and were able to force the ship back a few days, making them run out of food sooner than normal because they had to nurse their wounded, when they continued on their journey a pirate ship had another archer and was able to wound Lornan and he quickly lost consciousness from loss of blood. While Lornan was unconscious the crew took him to be dead so they pushed him overboard and kept his bow to sell at their next stop. when Lornan finally woke up he was on the shore of a deserted island (or so he thought) and when he looked around he noticed his favorite bow was gone. so without food or tools he went searching for civilization to hope he would be able to find out what happened to the ship and if he would be able to find his bow which he got from his father just before he died. -Character Age: 87 -Character Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is down to around his shoulders, Green eyes, leather and metal bracers around his wrists, constantly wearing his father's quiver on his back. -Character Personality: dark, not that talkative around people he does not know or does not like, but he will still get into arguments for what he thinks is right. always ready to help a friend in need. -Your ambitions: to build up a new life and hopefully find his father's bow even if he has to travel to the nether and back. -Can your character read or write?: yes -Can your character mine?: no -Are you a capable builder?: yes -Can you wield a sword?: yes -Enjoy Farming?: not really -Does your character have any special skills?: during the lack of food on the boat trip he has learned to conserve food. -A screenshot of your skin: My Skin (click for link) -Other Information: he is rather good at precision jumping (aka jumping courses)

why and how can i fix it?

if you hadn't noticed i had made a new application that i had extended the bio

i am posting my application gain because it was a very far back page and my first application which i later touched up was denied so i am sending my final application and leaving untill i get accepted because it too like 4 days for the first to get replied to and by then i had edited my application and my first one was denied because they didnt see i had fixed what i was working on. Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name:Nardah -How old are you?:13 (but im reletively mature compaired to my age) -Time-Zone/Country of Residence:CST Canada/Manitoba -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes my grammar is rather good. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am a rather nerdy kid that everyone picks on in school and i only feel happy when i play video games. (true story (though it sounds worse than it is)) -How much time could you be on the server weekly?:weekdays about an hour weekends around 3 hours to 7 hours -How long have you played minecraft?: since alpha -What do you know about roleplaying?: i have played runescape, world of warcraft, warcraft, and multitudes of roleplaying servers on minecraft -What do you expect this server will be like?: an experience like no other -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes -Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Undead, and Ascended (6) -How did you hear about us?: i noticed that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah In-Character: -Character Name: Lornan (no last name) -What is your Race?: Elf -Biography: Lornan was an Archer on a trade ship that he was helping to cross and ocean because of his superior Marksmanship he was able to pick off pirates from far away when they tried to attack the ships, but with one of the encounters the pirates were more prepared and were able to force the ship back a few days, making them run out of food sooner than normal because they had to nurse their wounded, when they continued on their journey a pirate ship had another archer and was able to wound Lornan and he quickly lost consciousness from loss of blood. While Lornan was unconscious the crew took him to be dead so they pushed him overboard and kept his bow and quiver to sell at their next stop. when Lornan finally woke up he was on the shore of a deserted island (or so he thought) and when he looked around he noticed his favorite bow and quiver was gone. so without food or tools he went searching for civilization to hope he would be able to find out what happened to the ship and if he would be able to find his bow which he got from his father, which was a proud archer of his clan, when he was shot in his leg to be immobilized and then cut limb from limb by a barbarian. -Character Age: 102 -Character Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is down to around his shoulders, Green eyes -Character Personality: dark, not that talkative around people he does not know or does not like, but he will still get into arguments for what he thinks is right. -Your ambitions: to become one of the greatest marksmen. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, but not that well -Can your character mine?: yes but he isn't that skilled in mining -Are you a capable builder?: Builder, no Architect, yes -Can you wield a sword?: yes but only up to iron swords -Enjoy Farming?: not that much -Does your character have any special skills?: he is rather good at jumping from tree to tree (aka Parkour) -A screenshot of your skin: i used the attachment thing and it said it was too big -Other Information: during the lack of food on the boat trip he has learned to conserve food.

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name:Nardah -How old are you?:13 (but im reletively mature compaired to my age) -Time-Zone/Country of Residence:CST Canada/Manitoba -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes my grammar is rather good. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am a rather nerdy kid that everyone picks on in school and i only feel happy when i play video games. (true story (though it sounds worse than it is)) -How much time could you be on the server weekly?:weekdays about an hour weekends around 3 hours to 7 hours -How long have you played minecraft?: since alpha -What do you know about roleplaying?: i have played runescape, world of warcraft, warcraft, and multitudes of roleplaying servers on minecraft -What do you expect this server will be like?: an experience like no other -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes -Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Undead, and Ascended (6) -How did you hear about us?: i noticed that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah In-Character: -Character Name: Lornan (no last name) -What is your Race?: Elf -Biography: he was going for a stroll in the woods one day and a tree fell ontop of him giving him amnesia and he only remembers his name and that he liked the bow and arrow (Herp Derp i suck at making background stories) -Character Age: 102 -Character Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is down to around his shoulders, blue eyes -Character Personality: rather immature just likes to run around all day killing monsters -Your ambitions: to become one of the greatest marksmen. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, but not that well -Can your character mine?: yes but he isnt that skilled in mining -Are you a capable builder?: Builder, no Architect, yes -Can you wield a sword?: yes but only up to iron swords -Enjoy Farming?: not that much -Does your character have any special skills?: he is rather good at jumping from tree to tree (aka Parkour) -A screenshot of your skin: umm i dont know how to do this -Other Information: over the years he has learned to conserve his food so he has to eat less to get full

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name:Nardah -How old are you?:13 (but im reletively mature compaired to my age) -Time-Zone/Country of Residence:CST Canada/Manitoba -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes my grammar is rather good. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am a rather nerdy kid that everyone picks on in school and i only feel happy when i play video games. (true story (though it sounds worse than it is)) -How much time could you be on the server weekly?:weekdays about an hour weekends around 3 hours to 7 hours -How long have you played minecraft?: since alpha -What do you know about roleplaying?: i have played runescape, world of warcraft, warcraft, and multitudes of roleplaying servers on minecraft -What do you expect this server will be like?: an experience like no other -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes -Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Undead, and Ascended (6) -How did you hear about us?: i noticed that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah In-Character: -Character Name: Lornan (no last name) -What is your Race?: Elf -Biography: he was going for a stroll in the woods one day and a tree fell ontop of him giving him amnesia and he only remembers his name and that he liked the bow and arrow (Herp Derp i suck at making background stories) -Character Age: 102 -Character Appearance: Dirty blond hair that is down to around his shoulders, blue eyes -Character Personality: rather immature just likes to run around all day killing monsters -Your ambitions: to become one of the greatest marksmen. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, but not that well -Can your character mine?: yes but he isnt that skilled in mining -Are you a capable builder?: Builder, no Architect, yes -Can you wield a sword?: yes but only up to iron swords -Enjoy Farming?: not that much -Does your character have any special skills?: he is rather good at jumping from tree to tree (aka Parkour) -A screenshot of your skin: umm i dont know how to do this -Other Information: over the years he has learned to conserve his food so he has to eat less to get full

Out-Of-Character: -Minecraft Account Name:Nardah -How old are you?:13 (but im reletively mature compaired to my age) -Time-Zone/Country of Residence:CST Canada/Manitoba -Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes my grammar is rather good. -Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am a rather nerdy kid that everyone picks on in school and i only feel happy when i play video games. (true story (though it sounds worse than it is)) -How much time could you be on the server weekly?:weekdays about an hour weekends around 3 hours to 7 hours -How long have you played minecraft?: since alpha -What do you know about roleplaying?: i have played runescape, world of warcraft, warcraft, and multitudes of roleplaying servers on minecraft -What do you expect this server will be like?: an experience like no other -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i have played on too many to count and i usually leave them because i get like 10 fps or i get griefed every day -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes -Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Undead, and Ascended (6) -How did you hear about us?: i noticed that the yogscast liked your trailer and i was looking for a server at the time so i decided to check it out -What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Nardah In-Character: -Character Name: Lornan (no last name) -What is your Race?: Elf -Biography: he was going for a stroll in the woods one day and a tree fell ontop of him giving him amnesia and he only remembers his name and that he liked the bow and arrow (Herp Derp i suck at making background stories) -Character Age: 17 -Character Appearance: already have en elven skin -Character Personality: rather immiture just likes to run around all day killing monsters -Your ambitions: to become one of the greatest marksmen. -Can your character read or write?: Yes, but not that well -Can your character mine?: no -Are you a capable builder?: Builder, no Architect, yes -Can you wield a sword?: yes but only up to iron swords -Enjoy Farming?: not that much -Does your character have any special skills?: he is rather good at jumping from tree to tree (aka Parkour) -A screenshot of your skin: umm i dont know how to do this -Other Information: nothing