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  1. Denied.

    -Your definition of metagaming is outright incorrect, or at the very best, hard to understand. You should also rephrase your definition on powergaming.

    -Your biography is lacking any real structure or coherence.

    -Your response to the bandit scenario may be considered powergaming.

    -For someone's who's first and only language is English, the grammar in this application are quite bad. In your biography you constantly switch tenses, there are obvious signs you did not proof read for spelling errors and word mix ups, and this ins general shows that you are not taking it seriously.

    Please Re-Apply in 48 hours, after reviewing and fixing your application.

  2. Pending.

    I'll give you until tomorrow to fix these mistakes:

    -Tidy up the grammar. If you don't take your time and effort to make your application as nice as you can, when it is very easy to do; then it shows that you are not being very serious about it. Knowing a player in our community does not automatically earn a spot.

    -This is just a personal thing, I had to look up what a "drow" was because I didn't have a clue.

    It would be easier if you put Dark Elf.

    -Your username are all over the place, and it will be hard for a gm to implement you into the server if you have it mixed up. I.e, you put Ponyprincess as your forum account, when it is Blume.

    -Fix the age so it's just one, as it can get confusing.

  3. Itnan, 30th of the Second Seed, 1344

    Ever since I was kicked from Winterfell things have gone so well for me. The High King Syrio has allowed by sanctum in Alras from the law, I have met Redbain, whom I thought dead. I have a very large estate in Alras now, thanks to my ill gained gold. I couldn't ask for anything more; I have friends, home, wealth, safety...Yet still, something eludes me, keeps me awake and restless at night. This life of idleness and pleasure is not one for me. I have to DO something! I could always restart my gang...but I swore to myself I wouldn't return to such petty crime again. Of course, I'm sure Bircalin is still hunting me down, but it keeps me on my toes. What to do, what to do!

    I toss and turn in frustration thinking of something to keep me occupied. Perhaps...Perhaps I can turn a new leaf, do good to repent for my evils! Albeit everyone else will see it as selfish acts, but I will keep it secret! Yes, I will keep my actions out of the public eye, and help ALL the nations of Aegis, so there can finally be peace. After all, no one can fight if everybody's dead...

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    Here's what's wrong with it:

    1. For someone who lives in the United States and claims they have good control over the English Language, I saw a ridiculous amount of grammatical errors and problems with sentence structure. If you're going to apply here, I'd really like to see that you care enough to proof read.

    2. Your definition of roleplaying was unclear and hard to understand.

    3. Your definition of metagaming and powergaming included nothing about powergaming.

    4. Your characters biography was not long enough, descriptive enough, and in general, hard to understand.

    5. Your open question responses had no relation to your character, and if it did, your character bio doesn't tell me about your characters personality anyway.

    6. Your characters skin does not match your characters biography.

    Before reposting this, please go through CAREFULLY and with thought.

    You may post again in 48 hours.

  5. New store in Galahar, very cheap stock.

    Surprisingly called: Cheap Things

    If it's not for immediate sale, ask over the counter!

    Some items include:

    Golden Apples for: 200 Mina!

    Netherrack for: 5 Mina!

    Glowstone for: 10 Mina!

    Obsidian for: 50 Mina!

    Slimeballs for: 5 Mina!

    Bread for: 2 MINA! Amazing for the current famine!

    Many other items in stock in storage!

    Come find us near the entrance closest to Alras!

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