ShadowoKing

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Accepted I think this is great, who is Chris? Might missed something here or name error but let you off. Please wait for a gm to implemented.

((Well we seem to get good roleplay, and deaths. But have to say things may get better or worse, not telling. Thanks for the great roleplay thou, Beneh. Going to miss roleplaying with you.))

One-Eye Frank Tilts his hat forward towards the man and woman. Smiling. Goes to grab an cegar from his pockets, lights it up and slowly smoke it. Winking at the lady.

As Zeriko was stood there like a stone in a shaking ocean. Seeing his own brother turning into ashes, he just cannot move. He hated Krahn for bring the 'Ape' but did not expect this to happen so fast. The tells of planning to overthrow the Tlatlanni, he just went plank. A lie told to the great Tlatlanni or the truth that Zeriko cannot see. That day, that shocking day. Zeriko keeps replaying over and over in his mind, as he just stood there. As everyone leaves, the body on the stairs left without no trace of his brother. He must follow the crowd, an Kha' asked Zeriko but Zeriko was mad, do not want to talk. When everyone in Tavern, he sits quitely staring at his soup he was given. He tries to eat, try to enjoy himself but he cannot. Lost mother, now brother. Whose next, his nephew, cousins? Zeriko must overcome this, for Metztli, for his pride.

One-Eye Frank Takes everything Johnny owns, pull his head facing One-eye's face. "Thats what you get for showing off, I was doing my job while you was failing yours. Johnny." Spits on Johnny's lifeless face and lets it go. He wipes his hands on his coat and stands up. "Now where are the others?" Slowly walks past the Deputy, giving a evil stare as he walks by across the sandy road to stand and watch the bank. Smiling.

One-Eye Frank Walks out of the Saloon knowing nothing to do, slowing walks to Johnny's lifeless body with cegar in mouth. Kneels down to search the body.

One-Eye Frank Takes off his hat, to see a hole in it. Turns around, growling with the cegar in mouth. "Time will get you, Sheriff" Slowly puts hat on again to sit down and to lean his feet on the table, watching whoever comes in next.

((Few wants to be friends, many do not. Think its good to have this, maybe little anti-lore but not everyone has the same view))

Chuckles, and pulls it away into his coat. "Seems its not that time yet..." Slowly walking back into the Saloon, while taking an cegar out of his pockets and into his mouth.

Heard the shot when near Saloon door, turns around quickly to aim with his revolver at the Deputy that left the Saloon. Aiming back of the Deputy's head.

Puts his revolver away, smiling. "Don't have time for this, not here to kill you or him. Sheriff no more trouble for me, for now" Taps on the man's head and slowly walks towards the Saloon with hands in his coat's pockets.

"Ha, you do not know who you are dealin' with. Ever heard of One-Eye Frank, if not too bad" Clicks his revolver ready to fire at the man's head while his other hand getting ready to grab the other gun on his right side of his belt. Did not noticed the Sheriff or the other men.

Heard Johnny's voice, stops the horse moving. Jumps off, still back towards them. Pulls a pistol out of his coat, turns quickly and aims on the man's head on the back of the horse. "Or what?"

Smiles, slowly gets on the untied horse and tilts his black hat. "Thanks for making my job easier, boys" Starts to slowly ride away from the two, laughing.

Throws his cegar onto the floor, smashing it with his boots. Slowly stepped into the blazing light slowing walking towards Jonny's and Marshal's direction.

One-eye Frank Age: 36 Gender: Male Skills: Skilled with dual-pistols Short bio: An bandit that been in town for few nights, no trouble yet Appearance: Black cowboy hat, eye patch, black cloak Walks out of the Saloon, standing in the shade. Smoking his cegar as he smiles of this interesting showdown.

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Denied -Go more in-depth with powergaming and metagaming, missing few information about it. -Need detail on each part of your bio. -Need a VA to pickpocket -Your open-response answers could also have more, like add more roleplay. Speech, what the other person do e.g.

*Zeriko growls as he reads this, hating every word he reads from this scroll. And said to himself. "We letting an non-Kha' into our land, they only want to kill us. Slave us. This is just a mistake to get more of these things into our lands. Don't expect me to give this 'Abai' a good attitude. Brother you seem to getting too close to these creatures, remember your honour" *Walks off, mad.

Cannot wait for my kitty cat character meet the apes, he will be a hunter/assassain. If they skin his people, he'll skin them. First need a VA))

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Denied -Few parts of your bio does not relate what happened (or lore) fix these. What is your character's current age, the people only got to Asulon 26-35 seeds ago (years) -add more detail to bio and open-response answers.

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