ShadowoKing

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Denied -Go in more detail to the definition for roleplaying. -Need definition of metagaming and powergaming. -Bio is too short, add more history, add why does he do it, give him more character how he feels and think. Slightly powergaming if you can take on every orc. -Same with open response answers but also include speeches. -No skin, need a link not email -Wrong app that one is old, use this format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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Denied -Wrong definition of powergaming and metagaming. -Never heard of Arethor, would recommend making it an village not a kingdom. Everywhere in Aegis was discovered and there is no kingdom called Arethor. -Your open-response answers are too short, add more speeches, more roleplaying actions. Make it as much detailed as possible. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

*Looks at the scroll, sighing. Looks around making sure no-one hears him, muttering.* "Hope the council has not gone soft, noticing few of us who are. Hope you lot remember what you are. Well its a shame I'm not going."

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Denied -Wrong definition on powergaming. -Your bio seems to be short could you go in more detail like what is his surroundings like (where it happened) and more detail on what happened. Feel, actions, speeches, think. Also how he learns the skills from, and your bio seems simliar to another person bio. Could you at least make it different. -Same with your Open-response answers more detail. Feel, actions, speeches and think. Think as this as real roleplay. -Need a character name not MC name. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

*Sents a bird to the man who responded, hoping he receives this* When do you like me to do this, training and test? And where do we meet. ((just need to know, is our timezone different only time usually I'm on around 8:00pm to 12:00am GMT.)) *Sits down waiting for a answer, watching people moving around in Holm.

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Denied -Please use the proper format, link here Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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Denied -Wrong defintion of powergaming and metagaming. -Would recommend finding your old application and put a link to it so we can see if you did what the other member says. -Your bio have few things that not match our lore. Recommend a horse than a donkey. Hope Moria is a village not a city cause its not in our lore. The man in your bio seems to be powergaming, I know its not you but add fall back to the man and no-one has that power. -Undead are gone unless you mean the mobs. -Skin link is broken -Missing half of the application, link here Please wait 24 hours.

Well only wish I have is that I just need shelter to store my things and to rest. If thats what you meant.

Application: OOC Information ~ Mine Craft Name: ShadowoKing Age: 17 (character: 30) Time zone: +0 GMT London RP Information ~ Role Play Name: Rae_Bloodcrest Gender: Male Race: Half-Elf, Half-Human Sword Level: 72 Axe Level: 0 Archery Level: 45 Profession (E.g. swordsman, miner, blacksmith, ranger etc.. ): Swordsman Do you have an accepted villain application (if so link please): No Nation Affiliations (your characters view of other nations): Well Rae greatly respects the human nations since he was mostly raised in Solace before it grew to now. He sees few problems thou on why they fight each other, questioning why but highly respects them same with the Elves nations. Since they are nearly like him, but does not respect High Elves. He thinks they can be disrepectful towards him since he is a half blood which they do not like so he does not care what happens to them. For Orcs, he does not know where their nation is and how successful it is along with the Dwarves. Mostly Rae respects is his nation Holm which he bonded with when Hannibal adopted him and Rae made Holm as his home. (Note: Got second character so if you need me just don't be afraid to sent a bird if I'm not doing anything important, which is highly unlikely)

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Denied -Go more in-depth with your bio and open response answers, like why, how, your character's reaction. Also why is he good at sneaking. -Few spelling and grammar errors Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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Denied -Theres only three sub-races for elf, read the lore? -Open-response answers are too short, please add more like speeches, doing etc. Make seem like a real roleplay. Please wait 24 hours.

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Denied -go in more detail to powergaming and metagaming. -No skin -Your open-response answers are too short, add more. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

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Denied -Overall you could do better, to be able to steal and assassinate requires a VA don't think its against it if were an ex-assassain/theif and turned good, so play on the server for a week or two. You could try doing a VA to do these. -age, appearance and personality? -Where is the village located? -Last three open-response answers you could of added more. -Skin link seems broken. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply