ShadowoKing
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Denied -No definition for powergaming -Theres no sub-race called 'Bowmaster assassin' -No skin -No your character actions, interactions to these questions, feeling and speech.
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Denied Missing parts of your application
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Denied -Expand more to your answers for roleplay, metagaming and powergaming. Wrong definiton for powergaming. -Cannot have magic, but you can try learning it but do not have it. No histroy or background how you want to be one, anything bad happened. Expand more to your bio with details. -Your open-response answers has lack of detail of action, speaking and character reactions.
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Denied Presentation- hard to read, need to make this more presentational Metagaming and powergaming definitions seems to puzzle me, got wrong words maybe? Do research on this and make more sense to the definitions. For your bio could add more to what happened to him, would be great if your character explains his background. Like how people do these, plus higher the chance. For goal to kill all Orcs seems...well. No skin. Can you put this to our new format. New format you say! Yes, there is.
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When I first saw this, which was long ago and think could be another topic. Thought this was a joke, few months later. Interested. I decided to become a Kha' Leparda who is not a fighter, prefer buying and selling things. Yes, he/she will be a Merchant. What I mean by he/she is that I do not know what gender to be. Always a male, just wonder what female would be like ((Got sisters, so I know what they are like)) So should I be a female, lol? Also how names work, need to think of a name? -
Monitoring this for the past 2 weeks and I must say this race is promising. May create a second character, not telling who I am going to be. Voted on poll, just need to do your application to be fully a cat person. Love cats.
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Denied -Your bio is okay but you could do better, go more in-depth with his childhood. Who taught him, why. Was his tribe in Aegis or Asulon. -You did not follow what the previous app team member said, you need to add more to your open-response questions.
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I don't mind aiding you to this fight ~ Rae'iri ((Depends what time and date))
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My brithday is today, 17 :D
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Denied You were close of getting accepted in my opinion, but you could improve your bio even more. For sub-race, just put a answer: Elf, Wood Elf, High Elf, Dark Elf Now for the bio, add more history to your character, any moments that scarred him, rememberable moments e.g. Also you cannot have magic, you can be interested to learn but not have any. So no magic and go more in-depth.
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Denied Please answer this question do not have to give full description just need a answer: Go more in-depth with these answers like examples but for first question in this quote just more in-depth. -For your bio could you add morethings happened to the character, why are they white? How is mother died? Please wait to re-apply
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Denied -Get better defintion for powergaming and get better examples for metagaming and powergaming. -Why is he blue, did others help with the orc cause it is slight powergaming, any thing else happened to him. -Expand more to your answers of open-response-question like actions. Please wait to re-apply, nearly there.
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Just noticed why is iron has same green tag as steel IG, in OOC chat?
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Donated to Steel, is bright green Steel cause I got green tag?
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Denied -This is a old format, we got a new format. -Your roleplay in your bio and last questions was slightly confusing, and you could of be more in-depth. For the assassination, you need a VA for that. Please wait to re-apply.
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Denied -Few spelling errors -Your bio seems to be jumping into actions, what does your character feel/react basically go in more detail of te things that happened.Just awoke from a stranger, show more depth of fear or something. Yuo will be rolepalying this character, need to show what your character would react. -You may want to put this into a new format. -Having problem with skin link Please wait to re-apply
