ShadowoKing

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Denied - Explain more on roleplaying not World of warcraft - If you expecting this to be like World of warcraft, it is not. It is kinda lord of the rings feel, expect this got its own lore. Discuss what this would be like not what you did in world of warcraft. There is signs of not trusting you, you looked like you want PVP the most. -Bio is kinda rough, did not explain how you learn these skills. -Your skin looks like a soldier than a bard Please wait to re-apply.

MC name: ShadowoKing IC name: Rae_Grimes (Rae'iri) Forum name: ShadowoKing Current Rank: Guard Race: Half-elf/Half-human

((Its ShadowoKing not 'Shadowowolf' lol))

^ Me, only joking (Tip: He is so excited not laughing)

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-Explain what roleplaying means -Research what metagaming and powergaming means -Add more to your bio, it is too short. -For 'Out of the wilds' question, what does he do? Walk away, focus on something else? More detail please. -No skin. You could ask someone on forums to do you one, go to the Graphics topic. -I know you are not good at using english but could you try correcting your spelling mistakes, thanks. Please wait to re-apply, do not rage on me or give up. Server is great!

Moved to Accepted Forum

Accepted I see no problem in your application, so I accepted you. Now wait for a gm to implement you.

Moved to Denied Forum

-Please add more information on your character in your bio like more histroy, skills he learned, anything tragic happened along the way? Also go in more detail on how you lost connection with your family. -More detail on 'out of the wilds' question like what actions you are going to do. -Your skin cannot be steve, it has to be a dwarf skin because you are a dwarf. Please wait to re-apply

*You see a note near where Vain's room post to be, in the tavern. Dear White Ravens, I like to reform you that I cannot live any longer. My friends are slowly dieing one by one, and the life here is not the same. Still remember the screams of Aegis fall, and I still remember my wife's death. My hope for a new life is not working out, so I'm leaving the guild and killing myself near a ocean or river. Want to be with my wife, this is the only way. Good luck to you, Ravens. ~ Vain ((Now I only got Rae :D since Josh posted to kill him which it seems he cannot wait that long, wanted something to kill Vain so here is it))

Josh is dead? Don't know if I should be sorry. How did he die? Eledyr rejoined the guild and was excuted. Why no-one told me this, he was my friend back as Aegis. Wish I knew why? ~Vain

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-As I re-call Elves do have a sort-of God, Malin. Not sure if High Elves got more gods, you need to research that. -Sign of powergaming of 'chopping their heads' which sounded like you done that quick, you could change that to a threat -Your skin link seem to be broken Overall: It is a good application just few parts to improve.

Moved to Denied Forum

-Few spelling and grammar errors -Add more to your bio, like: Anything else happened, how old was he,how he became a farmer e.g. -Add more to 'out of the wilds' question, like: How he fights, drawbacks, does e.g. -No skin

((ok thanks, I'll just re-buy it then)) Edit: ((Vain will stay for now as a Alt until I can roleplay his perma-death when Rae get to a better age like 18 so a week-ish with him))

((Edit: This is for Rae'iri, my other character which is very young, re-thought and keeping Vain but not playing as him much So can I ask if I can re-join, can I still keep the Tavern room?)) ------------------------------------- Mc name- ShadowoKing Ic name- Rae'iri (Rae) Do you have a villain application- Not yet, going to apply What will you contribute to the guild- I would like to help the guild with fights and help with others with any problems they have. Do you agree to follow and obey the rules?- I agree and will obey the rules. What previous Experience do you have?- None expect killing spiders and animals. I'm young, did not do much yet. What have you done to promote the ideals of Aeriel?- Who is Aeriel, I'm willing to learn of this Aeriel. My parents did not teach me much. Once in the guild, what branch will you belong to?- Guard, seems basic. What is your level in the skill the branch uses (for merchants write N/A) - I have 63 swordsmanship and 40 archery. ((Still the same as Vain's skills)) Have you signed our charter?- ((Yes, just rename Vain with Rae'iri))

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied This is great application but I recommend editing your lore and ambitions. Lore: It is good but when you met the wizard and was told about meeting important people, remove that part. Also how did you get to Asulon? Ambition There is no evil beings no-more just change this to criminals or something not evil beings. Please wait to re-apply.

Moved to Denied Forum

Denied -Go more in-depth on your bio like how your parents died, career was like and any terrible thing happened. -Recommend not making a new place up, use our lore. Use the Dwarf's old home. Also how did he get to Asulon. -Wheres the two last questions, you replaced them with odd answers. -Skin does not sort our lore, remove the scottish stuff. Please wait to re-apply.